Pity*****

I have caught up to the latest chapter 115. The protagonist is too weak and has always been depressed. He hates his father and relies on the shadowy Jin Yiwei to show off his power. The bad impression will probably exclude many readers. However, things started to get better after I formed my own team. The person who threatened me with a knife also took revenge, and I started to look for a new backer. I also dug a lot of holes in the court and Jianghu entanglements. It depends on whether the follow-up can be reconciled. I have good reviews for the time being.

As an old bookworm, there are very few books that I can read. The angle of this book is quite novel. People who like refreshing settings in the early stages of the plot may find it depressing, but I think it is a process of perfecting the character of the protagonist, which makes the image of the protagonist more full. And I don't like to read particularly mindless cool articles, where officialdom suppresses people, and power struggles cannot be achieved through time travel. Although there are many areas in this book that need improvement, I feel that the flaws outweigh the flaws and it is a good book! Recommend! ! !

The writing is good, the writing style and concept are above average, but the writing skills are a disaster. In the current environment, it would be hard to look good if the routine text of the female channel cannot be quickly slapped in the face. If you are tempted, please be patient and read two more chapters. At the beginning, the protagonist is made into an "abandoned son" by using the method of suppressing the desire first, so that it will be very satisfying when he sees the decisive killing later. But writing a book is not making a movie, and Quentin Tarantino's rubber-banding technique is a recipe for disaster when applied to a book. Movies can use foreshadowing to build momentum. If you want to reverse it, you only need one meaningful shot. For example, the shot of the spinning top falling down at the end of Inception may only last a few seconds, but how much foreshadowing is needed to express through writing techniques to leave such a big reverie? When the reading time is extended, a new mentality will be substituted into the protagonist's perspective every time. As long as something doesn't go well once, you may give up at any time. It's a pity that this is a very good book, but it was written at the wrong time.

It's a good read. This book may not suit many people's tastes, but I personally prefer reading this kind of slowly developing novel. Nothing happens overnight. Only when there are turning points and low points can there be exciting climaxes. Part of the logic is strengthened. In fact, the identity of Huaiqian's adopted son is not set well. In the case of a legitimate son, even if his father saves the life of the protagonist's father, no matter how hard he does it, he will not be able to achieve the status of the legitimate eldest son. Because in ancient times, the identity of a legitimate son was too important. When the father and mother died, all inheritance and identity were inherited by the legitimate eldest son. When the eldest son died, the father had to wear sackcloth and kneel in mourning.

It's not a cool article, I'm not happy about it. You can still watch the story that doesn't involve the son of Heavenly Dao and Zai Jinyiwei. So I give it five stars because I rarely give negative reviews.

No, buddy, why is this book rated 5.0? It's not a bad idea for me to think about, and it looks pretty good. Hurry up and get a perfect score and move it up. Don't become a eunuch before it's finished. I think it's well written, you can read it yourself.

I just found out today that the five-star rating on Tomato doesn't have any zero stars, right?

Don't give him anything overtly, but secretly reward him with five stars. Why are the books I want to read always out of date [laughing] [crying]

It looks good and makes people want to follow it!

Nice! Thoughtful

It's actually pretty good. I don't understand why the rating is so low.

It's not a cool article, it's quite thought-provoking. It's really good.

It's pretty good-looking. If I say I'll do it, I'll really do it.

I don't know about others. Anyway, I think it looks good, very good-looking. Please support me.

Nice! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I like this kind of cool novel that is not a cool novel. Each character description is full of flesh and blood and has its own characteristics. I would like to read more! ! ! ! ! ! Come on, author, there are so many idiots who are speechless even if they give ratings without even reading it😓

Not bad. It's not like those cheat-finger systems at the beginning. The plot of the battle of wits on your own is quite interesting.

Good hahahahaha

Not bad, you can still watch it

Good looking, really good recommendation

Good looking and worth recommending

Really pretty

I still want to continue reading. Come on, author.

Great, well written, keep it up💪💪💪

I feel like it was well written, but I don't know why I didn't write it anymore.

I think this book is very interesting. I don't know why there are so few people.

Very well written, why is the rating so low?

I think it's different from the past

It looks good, but I don't know why the rating is so low.

One word, followed by the word "cool"

It's quite beautiful, but the rating is so low?