Starting with a Gift from the Earth, I Am Running Rampant in the Game World

(Medium) four-star green Sense of substitution C, attractiveness C, plug-in C, setting C, writing C, imagination C, rhythm C, main line C, character design B, logic C Balance Penalty: None Personal feelings: There is no inexplicable sense of substitution at the beginning, but the selection of dungeons is not systematic. The first dungeon is okay, but the second dungeon is completely unfamiliar. The choice of the dungeon is too big. ─────────────────── #The following comments are for personal reference only #My account cannot leave negative reviews. Negative reviews will be invisible. Anyway, they will all be given five stars. #The overall rating increases, and there will be no negative comments in the comments. 1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria•11th Edition (1) Evaluation items (for personal reference only) 1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view. 2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading. 3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative. 4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency. 5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot? 6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line. 7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low? 8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal. 9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive? 10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition. 11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (2) Evaluation grouping (for personal reference only) 1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction 2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings 3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation 4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center 5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense (3) Ratings of recommended evaluation items (for personal reference only) 1. Specially recommended S level (+4 points) 2. Recommended Grade A (+2 points) 3. Acceptable Level B (+1 point) 4. No points deducted, Grade C (0 points) 5. Level D is not recommended (-1 point) 6. Personally unacceptable level E (-3 points) 2. Rating of online articles (1) Shangshang•Online articles that I personally can't find fault with Standard: No B rating, attractiveness S 1. Five-star red+: 5 items S, 5 items A 2. Five-star red: 2 items S, 8 items A 3. Five-star red-: 10 items A (2) Excellent Internet articles that I personally feel most people like Criteria: Rare and fine book, no C-grade rating, appeal A 1. Five-star Orange+: Total score is 18 or above, and 8 items are A or above 2. Five-star orange: and the total score is level 16 or above 3. Five-star orange-: 5 items A (3) Shang Xia·Personally feel high-level online articles Standard: common high-quality books, no D-level evaluation, attractiveness B 1. Five-star Purple+: Level 14 or above, and 4 A or above 2. Five-star purple: Level 10 or above 3. Five-star purple-: 8 items B (4) Intermediate to upper level • Internet articles that I feel are of a high standard Standard: Personal recommendation, no E-rating, attractiveness C 1. Five-star blue+: total score is 6 or above, and 6 items are B or above 2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above 3. Five-star green: 4 items B (5) Medium •Standard online articles that I personally like Standard: no poisonous spots, no bright spots, attractiveness C 1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above, and no E-level evaluation 2. Four-star green: total score is level 1 or above 3. Four-star white: 10 items C (6) The next one: Standard online articles that I don't like 1. Samsung White+: Level 0, and no E-level evaluation 2. Samsung white: -1 level 3. Samsung White-:-Level 2 (7) Middle and lower two • Internet articles that I personally do not recommend 1. Two-star white+: level -3 2. Two-star white: -Level 4 (8) Middle and lower three • Internet articles that are unacceptable to individuals 1. Two-star gray+: -5 levels 2. Two-star gray: -level 6 3. Two-star gray-:-Level 7 (9) There is a lot of room for improvement 1. One star +: level -8 2. One star: -Level 9 (10) Inferior·Silent 1. Sporadic: -Level 10 (11) Xiaxia·Silent This 1 point is for the character of the protagonist.

Not a cool article! Not a cool article! Not a cool article! The little poison keeps coming [face covering]

In fact, relatively speaking, this novel is really good, and I really like the character of the protagonist. As for some people saying that the protagonist is a dog licker or a turtle man, I don't think that is the case. The protagonist is obviously quite rational when changing props, and I feel that the protagonist still makes a little profit. I think the protagonist does not need that weapon that much. Anyway, a reconnaissance prop would be more suitable, not to mention that he has another weapon, although this weapon is not seen at all in the second world. Then there is another part about the difficulty of the game. It really feels a bit difficult. I really thought the first world was a bit strangely difficult. It can be said that it is too difficult. Then there is the fact that the game coins obtained after the end of the second world are too few. To be honest, logically speaking, in terms of mission planning like this. As long as you pass the second mission, you can at least get your money back, which means it must be at least 5 or more. Obviously, the number of mission coins obtained in the first world is quite normal, even a bit too much or surplus. If you exchange the number of mission coins in the two worlds, maybe it will be normal. Of course, both sides should be increased or decreased a little bit appropriately.

After watching Tomato, I was in trouble again. The protagonist has an IQ

It's okay. There are many chapters of Masked Game that have little effect on advancing the plot.

Although it collapsed in the later stages, this novel is one of the few that I can see the ending of. In today's society, the pace of life is too fast, especially for old bookworms. I have read too many cookie-cutter plots, and those books with thousands of chapters are too slow to read. If you don't have the patience to read it, this book is very good.

I feel that the content of the copy is quite well written, and it seems to be original. However, the actual processing is relatively average, but it is still clean and neat. I will try to use my strengths and avoid weaknesses later.

It's okay so far

Mother Earth has become a cheat

You can also watch part of it

Not bad, currently rated as above average

This is my type, I wish it had more magic skills

There was a small flaw in the early stage, not much, but the comment area was polluted by some people. The second copy started to become more and more exciting and beautiful.

The world structure is complete, the characters are full of personality, and it is very exciting.

Looks good so far

Yes, recommended to watch.

It's okay. It's pretty.

It's okay, it's pretty.

Pretty good, worth a look

Not bad, passable

The subject matter is interesting and worth watching

Okay, okay, good, good

Very good author keep up the good work

Well written and beautiful

After the player's battle royale, the player's value explodes directly, and the rest is all for Jiang Lang.

The game currency rewards are a bit low, will there be other ways to get them in the future?

This book looks pretty good

Ok Sanity + points Kindness + points

You can take a look when you have free time. Some of the holes dug in front of you are still not filled in (´--`；). It's okay.

Well enough. Although I have read similar novels, the content is still different.