Disciple, Stop, I Will Raise You as My Daughter!

Haokang! ! ! I sold Li Xin to give you a gift)

After reading the comments, it seems that there is a dispute about CP. Then I have a plan🤓👆 Once all the anti-inflammation is taken away, it won't be over, the template will be exactly the same🤓 It happens to be one to two🤓👍

So far, I have mixed feelings when reading this book. The front part is okay, but the back part is inexplicable... How should I put it? Something weird. Han Shengsheng feels like a blank sheet of paper to me. Fortunately, the people around me are very nice. It can be said that I grew up under the care of everyone, but on some things, my knowledge is somewhat lacking. Yue Qingqiu, needless to say, really plays a mother-like role to this group of problem children, and she can be said to be very considerate of Han Shengsheng. If Han Shengsheng took the anti-inflammatory template and there was no Han Shengsheng as a variable, it can be said that Han Shengsheng has gone to several worlds to reopen. When it comes to dealing with Yue Qingqiu and Han Shengsheng, although you can see that you have difficulties, you can't say it clearly, but you can leave something to hint. Sasa Yuri is really almost on the verge of collapse. In this regard, I understand that she feels partial when looking at the problem between Yue Qingqiu and Han Shengsheng. I only hope that Sasa Yuri can have a good ending. The subsequent series of arrangements are a bit too deliberate. Ling Miao Miao can be said to be the best-handled character so far, slowly transforming from a slightly sickly girl. Finally, there is the plot arrangement. Every appearance of Yue Qingqiu can be said to make other characters in the book feel reassured, but this also weakens the performance of other characters in disguise. Yue Qingqiu can be used as a safety belt for the plot, but other characters cannot do nothing. If there are more characters later, Yue Qingqiu cannot always revolve around Han Shengsheng. So I'll give it a four-star rating first, and then make additional comments later. Also, come on, author.

The writing is not bad, and the emotional description is also very good, but I feel that it was written a little too hastily. When I went to the first innate treasure, I felt that there was no need to be so anxious. The rhythm of the plot was also well grasped, but the wonderful descriptions were a bit lacking. I feel that I could write more. I still hope that the author can insist on writing a million words [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

The protagonist's system cannot be from Yuan, right? The protagonist has a strong talent when he first arrives. The system description is to plunder another protagonist's destiny, or to help plunder, are you afraid of being discovered? On the contrary, the other protagonist is reborn in different worlds multiple times. The system does not give him power. It is indeed a bit like a good one. The author needs an answer.

Interestingly, green plums cannot withstand the fall from heaven.

Why do you feel like it's the rhythm of Xiao's harem? @Musician

Dear author, I have a doubt. If Han Shengsheng is Xiao Huohuo's face, how to deal with the relationship in the harem? Miaomiao is Xiao Xun'er and Lily is the little medical fairy. Could it be that the harem turns into sisters and wishes Qingqiu? It seems that it is not so easy to live in harmony [Thoughts]

Are they Yue and Han? Or a pair of two heroines each? Can I know in advance? [Crying]

A very creative female version of Xiao Yan

Come on, girl

Are you sure it's knifeless? Is it really knifeless? Why doesn't it feel right?

Okay, okay, the protagonist wants to open a Shura field, right? [Laughing evilly]

A very nice book, I hope it will be Yuehan

It's pretty good, I just wish the main character was single

It looks good. I want to feed it to my mouth. I want to see a rebel disciple become a master.

Is the author still updating? Why has there been no movement for half a month [crying] [crying]

Can you please find a novel about a son (female) who is reborn as a saint from the Immortal Sect but refuses to break off the engagement? Please [shy][shy] Master Bao, you don't want me to give you a bad review, so hand over Xiao Shushu as soon as possible!

All Honkai Impact players understand it

Who is paired with whom?

I want to know who is a couple with whom🤔

Nice, but not enough

Holy shit, a really good book. I don't know why, but I just like it very much.

The details aren't too great, but it looks okay. However, the data is still written with the toes.

Very well written, I love reading it

Very nice, thank you to the author.

It feels pretty good-looking.

It's very beautiful, come on!

Very good novel, love reading it

Super cool author, cheers!