The Apprentice Is Too Obedient and the Master Is Helpless

Overall it's pretty good, and the protagonist's character is quite likable. But there are still some details that have not been handled well. Although the jump of the timeline is not large, the connection is a bit sloppy, and some foreshadowings are also a bit sloppy, such as the last meeting between the Little Golden Man and the protagonist. If there is an extra story about the interaction between the two heroines after becoming immortals, people will be very excited about it. The emotional development between the two heroines is also very delicate. Although the interaction is less than other two-female protagonists, the silent progress of moisturizing things can indeed give people a different feeling.

I haven't read such a comfortable article in a long time. Every description seems calm, but it still makes people want to read on. The protagonist is also the kind of person who takes things steadily step by step. The name was exactly what she had hoped for, He Qing Haiyan. Master's name is also like his own person, pure and flawless, with noble conduct. And the sect they belong to. They are all so harmonious. After seeing so many intrigues and intrigues, it is rare to see someone so upright. Ahhhhh, it's so good, I can't bear to finish reading this short article. I like it, I really like the characters in this book. Even though occasionally I have to put my mind aside to watch the plot, but the relationship between loving each other and maintaining each other is so good. Sometimes the words also make people feel warm. "Keeping this peace also quietly warms Cheng Yanqing's innocent heart, which has been struggling with blood, fire and inner demons for ten years." Flaws are not hidden, this is my favorite setting recently👏👏👏👏👏👏

Very good, very good. I can't wait to read the comments. I'll take a look at the halfway point. The author is greatly reassured that there is absolutely no problem with the book. I also hope it becomes popular. It's always sad to see works with few reviews but high quality. Thank you to everyone who persists in producing good books despite difficult circumstances [I'm about to cry] I still finished reading it. Although I was very reluctant to part with it, I still stayed up late and finished eating the fine glutinous rice bran. It's really good to watch, especially the part about resolving inner demons. The reversal of acceptance is really addictive. I just can't get enough of it if there can be a side story about the beautiful life in the future.

It's super good-looking. It's a story about masters and apprentices, and about cultivating immortals. It's definitely going to be popular, and you can get into it.

To be honest, the pace of this book is very good and very comfortable. Prioritization is very appropriate. Although the book is relatively small, it has everything it needs. It includes some important nodes or plot descriptions in great detail. Overall, it is well detailed. It doesn't look verbose either. The author's writing style is very good and can be clearly felt.

Nice! There is just no extra story [crying]

It's okay, I like this kind of subject better

It's great. Author, your novel will definitely be a hit.

Not bad, keep up the good work

It's okay, there are more main lines and less emotional lines.

It's very interesting to read this chapter, they are all apprentices, apprentices, apprentices

It is a very comfortable little sweet story about cultivating immortals, suitable for people who care about the relationship line, because almost all of them are about the two protagonists, which is very refreshing; and each title is related to the disciple, some of whom I love very much!

Author, author, your writing is really beautiful. I look forward to your next book.

It's very good to watch, but the only drawback is that it keeps following the main plot, there are a little bit of emotional scenes, but the ending is a bit...

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It's very good, just over 100 chapters, the narrative is clear and not abrupt. Come on, look forward to the new book (✧◡✧)! ! !

A very good book. It doesn't focus on fighting like other fairy tales. It has delicate emotions.

It's good to watch 😄 I love to watch it, the plain ones are good, let everything take its course Keep our dog, useful or not... I had a dream. In the dream, you wiped away my tears and said that you had not cherished me well in the past. Your tone was full of guilt. I couldn't stop crying in the dream, but the tears became more and more wet. Your fingertips were wet, and my cheeks were wet. In a daze, I raised my hand to touch you, but I was about to touch you with my fingertips. At that moment, the face disappeared like smoke. I woke up with a start and sat up suddenly, with tears still on my face. It was still dark, and the room was wrapped in a thick dark color. It was so quiet that I could only hear my own panicked heartbeat. I stared at the ceiling. Your appearance and your words filled with guilt echoed over and over again in the darkness. Let go, I wish this dream could be longer. It tastes like an illusion. You are back by my side, wrapping me gently with your tenderness. But now I am alone. The empty room is filled with longing and loneliness, making it difficult to breathe. I curl up and shrink deep into the quilt, hoping to find my way back. The illusory temperature in the dream only touched a coldness. Memories came flooding back at this moment. The streets we walked together, the dusk we watched, those arguments, tears and laughter became sharp fragments, piercing the softest place in my heart. It turns out that after so long, I have never let go of you.