In One Piece, I Start from Scratch to Build a Retirement Empire

First of all, the world unity of "Along" in the first scene is impossible in the real world. However, in the "Along" scene in the article, it is proposed that the fish people and "humans" live together, everyone has a smile on their face and is happy. World unity may be what most people in China are looking forward to, right? The subject matter of this scene is well used. Aaron's demeanor changes are well described, but there are some shortcomings and some are driven by the subject matter. The psychological activities of other characters can be properly described without going over them in one stroke or too much. This is really difficult to grasp. Some One Piece fan novels fail because of too many psychological activities. In the second act, Aokiji awakened his consciousness. I think it was better to wake him up. Later, he also mobilized the help of the entire navy to save Tom (I guess I can't remember the name). Therefore, he had a conflict with a police officer in the judiciary. Later, the protagonist is imprisoned in Impel Down and rescues Barrett. I still like Barrett as a character. This part of the scene when he returned to the village and was attacked was a little under-heated and did not resonate well, but it was passable. It was very interesting to go to the bear to lead the refugees to resist in the end. Where there is oppression, there is resistance. The protagonist is the leader of the resistance (with Jin and Barrett, the pace of Jin's change description is a bit fast), and he also saves the bear from his misery. The ending also heals the bear's daughter. The dialogue between the bear's daughter and the bear at the end made me unable to hold back. I burst into tears instantly, and the subsequent special scene was also very appropriate. I think this section is excellent. In the hands of other authors, Marshal Warring States is a useless person with no strength. He is rarely written (mostly necessary scenes). He is a puppet (can only accept orders from the government). The author also falters in the description. He has the appearance of a marshal but it is still not enough (it may be written later and it is only Chapter 68). Finally, I would like to say that even if this novel is used by some people to ride on the popularity of the country and rely on the revolution to resonate, I read it and think it is an excellent work. If you are a 70-year-old man, don't ask for a heroine in the drama. I hope that the Red Earl and the Golden Lion can be added in the future. Good luck to the author 👍

It's a very interesting book about retirement care. It was the first time I read it and I really liked it. If you like a calmer book, you can check out what happened and there are some passionate parts in it.

Rating 7/10 The content is good, including the follow-up outline released in the last chapter, which is more in line with the big proposition of liberating the pirate world in order to live a good retirement life. It would still be interesting if written in detail. But the fact is that I threw up the outline hastily as the end, and it is impossible for me to give a high score. It's a short-level fanfic, I read it in one morning. Great stuff to kill time.

I forgot to rate it, just let me get used to it. Well, I think it looks pretty good. The main thing is what the author said. It's a red revolution. The protagonist was in his 70s in both his previous life and this life. Well, don't say that you don't want to have love when you are 70 years old. Well, the current situation is that it is impossible to have a female protagonist. The author also agrees with it. There aren't many contradictions, it's the protagonist's character. Didn't leave either. Not much if it's poisonous. That's how I am anyway.

Well, it's a rare pension article. Except for the author who found a job but failed, everything else is well written hahahahahaha

Very good. It directly rewrote countless tragedies. It must be 10 points.

It's very good, but this kind of pension is really extraordinary.

It's very interesting. You can keep writing. Come on, come on, come on. I'll pay you.

It's my type

It's very interesting, very good-looking, the plot is exciting, but there are some poisonous points. Not to mention the poisonous points, the author took his time to look for them, and the only way to correct the mistakes is to find them himself.