At the Beginning of Traveling Through Time and Cultivating Immortals, You Create Your Own Skills to Supplement Your Spiritual Roots.

The author did not describe a complete worldview in the first few chapters, which gave the impression that it was very general. This may be because the mortal world is not the focus at all. It is a novel about cultivating immortals after all, but this really affects the perception and prevents readers from making a clear distinction between this article and other time-travel novels. So far, there is no unified summary of the world of cultivating immortals. They are all descriptions based on the assumption that readers understand and agree with the system of cultivating immortals in other novels. However, the author is indeed excellent in describing some details, such as the description of "watching the moon". It is still a work worth watching. I look forward to the subsequent chapters, the opinions of the family, and rational discussions.

It's very good. I'm used to reading Shuangwen's fights and killings that defy the heavens and advance through the realm of enlightenment at such a rapid pace. I can taste the ordinary but tense life of low-level monks and find a touch of warmth from the dragon's pond and tiger's den. It has a unique flavor. The yellow beam is just a dream, sigh, sadness, it's too late

The protagonist has ideas but is stubborn, and is willing to sacrifice 80% of safety for some uncertain ideas. I have a plan, but I don't have enough flexibility. Every time I plan well, but when the plan is blocked, I don't know what to do. I don't think it's right and I don't change the plan. He has a kind heart and dares to take action, but he is often so sympathetic that he sacrifices his own safety for some common 'poor people'. Summary: A Yuan Shao with overwhelming compassion.

Excellent works by ordinary people, suitable for old bookworms. Many of its charms require a certain amount of experience to feel. The character of the protagonist is not as formulaic as most online novels. It reflects the complexity of human nature. As the plot develops, the character of the protagonist also changes visibly. Moreover, the occurrence and changes of the characters are very logical. No poisonous points have been found so far. The supporting characters are also very three-dimensional. Each character has his or her own thoughts and ideas. They are not dry characters meant to surround the protagonist or deliberately advance the plot. This is hard to see in Tomato. The complexity of human nature reflected in this kind of book cannot be imitated by AI. To be honest, it is much better than the fast food rice on the list. This book shouldn't be so popular.

The author's plot control is very good, step by step, the protagonist becomes stronger step by step, it is very comfortable to watch [Like] The protagonist is very smart, has clear ideas, and knows how to properly explore his own advantages. There are no cheats and he is very natural [Like] The supporting characters are also well portrayed, and everyone is not deliberately portrayed as ruthless and selfish just because it is a novel about cultivating immortals: Some of the supporting characters are affectionate and loyal and keep their promises, some are neutral and self-reliant, and some are selfish and calculating. There are thousands of people with different faces, each with their own characteristics, and they feel very real [Like]

This book should not only have this score. Some people may think that the process is slow and the initial excitement is less. However, it really writes about the sense of life and powerlessness of a person who has traveled through time and used his own advantages to cultivate immortality in another world. The unwillingness to try his best not to give up. It also controls the character very well without being stereotyped, and has a very strong sense of immersion.

Let me tell you my feelings. I have read the latest chapter, and the story is not conventional. The content of the story is also very good and attractive. Anyway, I feel that this is a very exciting world. The author outlines a somewhat traditional world of immortality for mortals. Personally, I feel that the story is still very exciting. It can be seen that the author still has some skills. I have been a bookworm for more than 10 years. This is a high-quality novel that can make me interested in pursuing it.

It is an undoubted masterpiece. It involves life and death. It is not a traditional happy ending plot. The protagonist's mentality is also growing, and the characters around him are also very vivid and deeply touching.

Oh, it's so painful to watch sometimes. The protagonist is often in a very powerless state. He always meets a bunch of people who help him. If it weren't for these people, the protagonist would have died long ago. He also often brings disappointment to those he trusts, including the death of his mortal maid, the death of his mother and brother, and the half-death of his junior sister. To be honest, this book is not easy to read, but a bit depressing. Some details are also written in a general way, giving people a feeling of fast and slow pace. Many decades in the article have passed, and the sense of jumping is too strong. I can only say that my writing skills really need to be improved, but my ideas and imagination are still good.

I really didn't expect it to be so exciting. The author's writing style is very unique, the plot is very real, and the characterization is incredible. The most important thing is that the protagonist's portrayal is very three-dimensional. It really left a deep impression on me. It's a pity. What a bad name is this [angry]

So far, this book is okay, the writing is ordinary but it can write things down. The plot is okay. What follows is a very conventional novel about cultivating immortals, and the author Chen Lian has even forgotten about it. A very ordinary novel with no highlights.

It's amazing. This is how mortals cultivate immortality. It's okay. There is no situation where young people know everything and pretend to be sophisticated in everything. The protagonist has gradually grown up. It's not bad, the writing is good, and the driving speed is okay.

It's not a big deal, it's a myth. It's a good book. Most people say they'll read it themselves. It's neither cool nor brainless. The author has a good idea and is diligent in updating. The only drawback is that the writing is a bit tender, but it's better than most of Tomato's books.

The logic is rigorous, the characters are real, and even a passerby character is vivid, not a tool that exists for the protagonist. As for why this score is so low, I think that in addition to being maliciously lowered, there is also a deep problem. Many things in it, many of the protagonist's behaviors and choices, can only be understood with certain social life experience. Just like the interaction in the beginning where the protagonist teases the little maid, some people scolded the dog in the comment area. I want to say that this kind of behavior, in the eyes of an uncle like me, is just teasing a several-year-old girl as a little girl. This is also in line with the protagonist's thirty-year-old time travel setting. There is also the issue of the protagonist taking a few junior brothers and sisters with him when his sect was destroyed. There are a lot of people clamoring about the Holy Mother, but in fact, looking back, you can see that the protagonist is just holding the handle without affecting himself, and there are only a few more followers. On the way to escape, the four worthless women found a wealthy businessman to settle down from the beginning, and the ones left behind were all able to help themselves. Subsequently, those who betrayed the protagonist were decisively killed by the protagonist, and those who chose to leave were allowed to leave. And with the death and departure of the junior brothers and sisters, the character of the protagonist also changes little by little. This is very good, surpassing 99% of the novels. This kind of choice is in line with human nature. It is not a modern peaceful society that goes back to the past and kills decisively without recognizing relatives, like a suppressed pervert releasing himself. There is also the plot of returning to hometown. I saw a lot of people in the comment area arguing about not going home to see my mother and the little maid, but is it possible to go back? When I was in the Demon Sect, I was planted with a mark, and then the Demon Sect was destroyed by the Righteous Way. I fled all the way and couldn't go back. Later, I didn't have to escape anymore, and there was something parasitic on my body. How could I dare to go back? The Demon Sect was finally destroyed, and no one knew where their hometown was. Their families were in the safest state, so they had to pretend to be cool and bring the danger back just to go back, right? You'd have to be happy if your mother and maid were all contaminated by the Ke system and turned into a bunch of sarcoma tentacles, right? Why doesn't Han Lao Mo dare to go back? Aren't you just afraid of bringing danger back? Even if there is no danger, you have to create danger and bring it back, just to hold a cup, right? From the current point of view, the plot is very stable. As long as the plot does not collapse at the end, it can definitely be regarded as a fine novel.

The author is quite creative, and the opening chapter is quite interesting. Unfortunately, in the end, it is still a traditional fairy tale with too many tragedies, which makes people feel heavy...

The plot is okay, the protagonist's character is contradictory and real, and vivid. But the protagonist is rarely seen practicing, and his combat power is also very confusing. When the sect was destroyed, he was surrounded by several transformed gods and a bunch of Nascent Souls, three layers inside and three outside.

I first thought this was just an old time travel novel. After reading it, I found that it was completely different from what I thought. The plots were intertwined like a ball of thread and suffocating, as if I was on the moon... Of course, this book did give me a different feeling. It's really good! As for why it's missing one star, it's simply because of the damn author! There is a knife!

I like Pig's Foot's character. He is upright, kind, respects his teachers, repays kindness with drops of water, and lends a helping hand when encountering injustice. He is also decisive, resolute, and cautious. As long as those who form a team with the protagonist do not harm him and are obedient, and there are no force majeure factors, it is really great to be able to save your own resources and save others.

I read 900 chapters of this book in one go in a few days. After reading the whole book, I found that this book is very suitable for ordinary people's taste and has quite a charm. I highly recommend it to those who like the impermanence of the traditional path of cultivating immortals. But if you read other people's comments, you will definitely feel that this book has many poisonous points. I will use the poisonous points to analyze it for you Taoist friends. First of all, the first poisonous point is that in the early stage, the protagonist inexplicably received huge help and natural treasures from two silly birds out of thin air, and the description of this paragraph was very profound. I almost gave up, but the author came back to this point in the later period. The reason for this adventure is that the powerful treasure behind the protagonist is the cat. Then there is the most criticized protagonist, the kindergarten director. After the plot of the Yin Yang Sect ended, especially after Chen Ling's death, the protagonist took a bunch of children to escape together. I honestly didn't watch this part, and I don't blame everyone for criticizing it. But if everyone can skip directly to Chapter 200 and then worship the Xian Sect, that is, after joining the Yunmiao Sect, there will no longer be such a plot, and everything will be much better. Moreover, in the middle period, these children will give you a sense of the ruthlessness of the road and the vicissitudes of everything, and the male protagonist will never behave like this again. Then there is the cultivation of immortality through technology. I don't know how many old bookworms hate technology in ancient times as much as I do, but this book is not bad, and the author has done a good job of integrating it. I don't feel that it is bad at all. Finally, there is Cthulhu Cultivation, which has this element just like technological Cultivation, and it accounts for a large proportion, but you will feel that this is still a world like a mortal, antique, and the author has profound skills in this aspect. Finally, if there are people who don't like the heroine and feel that this kind of realistic woman ruins the beauty of the fantasy world, there are some heroines who love the hero to the core and live and die for him. In short, this book suffers from the times. Secondly, the author did have some problems with his early thinking and lack of writing skills. However, in the subsequent hundreds of chapters, the author's writing skills can be seen to the naked eye. Unfortunately, too many people were probably persuaded to quit in the early stage. They still insist on writing now, which shows the strong heart of Taoism. If the author really makes a living from writing, I suggest he open another book. It should be an instant hit. Now the protagonist has just reached the point of refining the void. How long will it take for this to begin?

It looks good. If I have to say why, it's probably "natural." So far, I haven't seen anything out of the ordinary about the plot (page 679 in the lower left corner)

Good reviews, it looks smooth and doesn't feel awkward.

The depth is beyond the original book of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, and the plot is also very well laid out. The language is naturally not created by AI. The rationality is ten stars, but at present, a book that is not interesting enough cannot attract readers.

On the whole, the writing is more to my liking, but the development of the world view is a bit slow. I have seen the latest chapter, and I don't know why I can't ascend. There are also the truth about the protagonist's memory and reincarnation, how to deal with the protagonist's master and uncle, and there are still many pitfalls that have not been filled in.

It's more daily life, and I'm still frustrated, but the writing is so good that it makes people read, and everyone has a distinct personality, and the emotions are written very delicately, and everyone has their own thoughts.

The writing is okay, not like Long Aotian's at the beginning, and some very ordinary life plots are okay. It's not the kind of mindless writing that keeps fighting and killing. It combines the genre of crime, Western fantasy, and traditional immortality. The plot also has some minor flaws, which should be the reason for such a low rating.

A very good mortal novel, with delicate writing, real emotions, and unconventional style. The protagonist is neither Long Aotian nor the Virgin. She has both decisiveness and indecision. She is a real person rather than a god. The talent is average, there are no cheats, the IQs of both the protagonist and villain are above average, and there is no cheating and slap-in-the-face scenes that are common in novels. It is one of the rare masterpieces on Tomato in recent years and is suitable for reading carefully in your spare time.

Yes, as long as you get through the slightly depressing chapters of just joining the sect. It's currently non-toxic [Love], and it's quite in line with my taste. The protagonist is a mortal who cultivates immortality. The protagonist does not have a unique talent. The author writes it well. It does not make people feel awkward or fluent. It is really the story of the protagonist.

The setting of the system of cultivating immortals is meticulous and elegant, the plot is ups and downs, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, the fairy flavor is strong, the foreshadowing is clever, and the reading is full of immersion.

The sense of immersion is quite good, and there are few immortals fighting and killing. This is what I like very much, and the logic is quite reasonable. There are a few opportunities, but not like the traditional opportunities that are waiting to be given away. Overall, it looks very comfortable, so I will not give it full stars. I hope the author can maintain the standard and make two or three updates every day better. Come on

Overall, it is much better than other short stories. Most of the characters have above-average IQs. If there is no villain, the IQs are not above the average if they have high cultivation levels. The longer they live, the more refined they become. The worldview in this book is definitely not going to survive if you have high cultivation levels and are still so stupid. It's quite to my liking. The reason I gave it four stars is because the harem is still growing. I hope the author writes better and better