Stealing a Pen, I Have Five Fathers

It's a bit cruel after 80. I think it's normal for Wu Xie to be suspicious, but emotionally they used the things the protagonist bought with points. Wu Xie also asked her directly, don't use the protagonist's things if you have the ability. While using her things, he was doubting her in his heart. Besides, the Wang family has such great ability to create a person. It's not a human being, it should be Nuwa.

Wow wow wow, the author's writing is so good. Let's just say that the sense of immersion is so strong. When Wu Xie was suspicious of Yu Yu, I wanted to slap him on the face. There was also the love and death scene where Jiumen and Chen Pi were practicing martial arts together. It was so good. My favorite plot at the moment is the daily martial arts training between Yu Yu and Chen Pi. It feels so alive! There will be more updates from the author! [Crying] I hope that Wu Xie's suspicion of Yu Yu and CPU Yu Yu's plot Tonic will appear again, and it will make me heartbroken and compare my feelings [Send my heart][Send my heart]

As an author in the growth stage, you can give her more time. It was really fun to read the end of it, and I have tied it today. When the protagonist reaches the age of Lao Jiumen, you can see that the author is getting better. It can be seen that the author likes Er Erhong and Chen Pi very much. The writing is very vivid, and the interaction between the protagonist and them is also very vivid. Looking forward to the next articles. The author's small thoughts on the characters are very interesting, for example, Wu Erye's next-generation relative, Wu Xie's father in the legend. Some added small links, such as Black Back Lao Liu and Aunt Bai. I just saw something the author had to say in the book circle (I haven't finished reading it yet). It's normal for the author to have a picture of the novel, so he is very clear about some preset foreshadowings and the changes in the characters' expressions. Readers are different. Readers are blind people who feel the elephant. Whatever they feel is what they feel. It is recommended that the author watch a foreign teacher and use slices of bread to copy the video of making a peanut butter sandwich written by a student, which will be more intuitive. If it helps the author's subsequent writing, that's great. If not, it can be reconciled. Finally, I look forward to the author's subsequent stories. (It's May Day soon. It's not difficult to write a million words. [Little leather whip] [Strike])

Generally speaking, it's okay. My favorite is the plot of the Republic of China and Chen Pi's encounter. Really, I was completely confused when I saw Chen Pi grow old. My head exploded and my tears flowed uncontrollably. For the heroine, it was only a few months, but for me, it was just over an hour. I am really, it can be said to be extremely uncomfortable, as if I can meet the future ending. I am really... I am afraid of the lifespan theory. The writing style is not bad, and I am a relatively empathetic person. I like February Red and Chen Pi in Lao Jiumen very much, so the aging of Chen Pi and Er Yue Hong's departure had a huge impact on me. I cried for a long time and then calmed down for a long time. I read a lot of TV series, fan novels, and original works. It seems that I first met Chen Pi and Er Er Hong in Laojiumen, but what came to my mind that day was old Chen Pi. Then the next second he turned into the young man again. At that time, I only had one thought. He was once a high-spirited and fearless person, but he was old. In just a blink of an eye, he was old. At that time, there was only this sentence in my mind. I only loved this part of the plot, and the rest was just so so.

The author's writing is very good, especially the description of the protagonist and Wu Erbai, which is very realistic! What can I say, the protagonist is very disobedient, emm

It's well written, and the heroine's inclusion in the plot doesn't seem out of place. It's just a bit like a nanny story, and the plot follows the original plot, which can be frustrating at times. The heroine has to explain to people for a long time when she enters this world. This one is defensive and the other is calculating. It seems so frustrating.

It was a good watch, and I finished it slowly. At first, I was a little frustrated because of the brother-sister relationship between the heroine Chen Pipi (although the seniority is very confusing, but I don't care, I just care about the brother and sister!!) There is a saying, among the five fathers, they should be ranked backwards in terms of favor. In fact, the eldest father Wu and the second father Hua didn't feel much pain for Yu Yu. Most of the time, when Yu Yu left, those conveniences disappeared, and they realized that it was inconvenient, and they began to feel pain. It was strange. Among the five, the one who feels the best is the blind person. Maybe it is because of the treatment of the eyes that the blind person feels more friendly. Next is the mute and fat mother. In comparison, the tangerine peel is really good🥹

The author writes so well, there are so few of this kind of subject matter, I finally found you [crying] [crying] [crying] [please update] Five stars, absolutely five stars.

In general, this article is not bad, but it is too long, and there was a dull period in the middle. But I finished reading it, and it was okay. Wu Xie really can't be a father, and I feel that there are really few father scenes. Hei Xiazi, Zhang Qiling, and Chen Pi have more "father" scenes than Wu Xie, his biological father. In terms of father scenes, Wu Xie has the least, and Fatty Wang and Xie Yuchen have almost the same role. He's not very good at this. Wu Xie's father is not very competent, huh.

This book is good, but too long. Wu Xie is really not suitable to be a father. I feel that the black and blind people are more responsible than Wu Xie. I feel that the family line between Yu Yu and Tian Zhen is a bit weak, but the family line with Er Erhong and Chen Pi is very good. Everyone is suitable to be Wu Yu's father except Wu Xie. Wu Xie doesn't seem to realize that Wu Yu is his daughter. They get along like friends and are very warm. Maybe Wu Xie is too naive. Especially the Evil Emperor, none of them seemed to realize that Wu Yu was six years old. Although it was a leather sheath, he only thought that Wu Yu was powerful enough to protect him and didn't care much about it, so he might be suspicious. Personal opinion. The author writes very well [blowing kiss]

It's so beautiful. I really want to see Zhang Rishan doting on his child. The child is running away and the six of them are chasing him.

It's super warm and beautiful. It doesn't have any major flaws except that it's too short and not enough to look good!

! ! ! Super pretty Yuyu is super cute! The bond with Chen Pipi really makes people cry QAQ I hope Yuyu will always be happy, let's all be together with the beautiful ˚ʚ₍ ᐢ. ̫ .ᐢ ₎ɞ˚

What does this novel say? It just makes me feel good when I watch it. The more I watch it, the more I want to continue watching it. I strongly like [like][like][like][like][like][like][like]

Although it is a bit long, it is very good-looking. Wu Xie is still the same Wu Xie. I always thought that he accepted Yu Yu naively, but I didn't expect that I would always have doubts. I don't blame Yu Yu for being sad. I was also angry when I saw Qin Ling. I still like Chen Pi the most. To be honest, I have interacted with Yu Yu the most. The one who has lived the most is actually Chen Pi. After all, Yu Yu has been traveling in different timelines, that is, he stayed in Lao Jiumen for a longer time. Moreover, Chen Pi Pi is actually tough-tongued and cares about Yu Yu more than anyone else. Not to mention the black-backed Liu, even his master bullied Yu Yu. In the end, it can indeed be seen that Yu Yu is his only sustenance and connection with the world. He can live or die without Yu Yu. In order to make the agreement with Yu Yu, he waited until he was ninety-nine to meet Yu Yu again. Only the four Zhang family members in Changbai Mountain could compare with him. But he was different from the four Zhang family members who were cheated by Yu Yu. He would have died of old age waiting for him [crying] [crying] Fortunately, Yu Yu made a deal with the world consciousness and kept him, otherwise it would be such a pity.

It's so good. If the author doesn't update it, I'll hang you up and slap you. [Angry][angry][angry]

This is a long article, but it is the first one that I can read longer than listen to. At first I thought it was an ordinary article, but the more I read it, the more exciting it became. I hope the author can write a better article, and I also hope the author can become popular🔥🔥🔥

It's so beautiful, very heartwarming, very interesting, and most importantly, it greatly stabilizes Risan.

This is the second time I've read it. In my mind, this book is like a ceiling among Tomb Raiders novels. Unlike other books that deliberately depict the heroine turning into a cub, which could not be explained clearly by an adult in the past when she was four or five years old, this one is relatively sober. I'm not too young yet, I'm 6 years old, but I've been working hard to train myself. In the early stage, my writing was average, but the later I got better, especially after passing the Qinling Mountains, the later I wrote, the better I got.

So far, it's okay, but I've seen a lot of ratings saying that the latter part is not very good, and what about maid literature. Overall, the first part is okay. I'll wait until I read what the second part is like [Chigua]

The author is really not good enough [crying] Author, you really can't update 88 chapters in one day and scare me to death [I'm about to cry]

It looks good, but I feel a little unhappy with how Wu Xie and the others treat Yu Yu.

It's okay, but I feel a little bit like the protagonist has been demoted in the later stages.

It's interesting, quite a novel angle, and I like the heroine's character.

This book is really interesting, especially the one that may have caused motion sickness. It made me laugh so hard [face covering] [like]

It's beautiful. I like it very much. Come on, author

Okay, okay, thumbs up.

Super cool, very interesting

Very interesting novel

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking