The Magic Cycle

It's a well-conceived novel, and the Western fantasy worldview is very interesting. However, the plot is a bit too desperate. I can't imagine how the protagonist can catch up with the other two and escape from this eternal January when the time loop is behind. The biggest problem with this book so far is the paragraphing. The author is very generous with his updates, but a large section of text is very uncomfortable to read. That paragraph of more than one hundred words can be split into twenty, twenty, forty and twenty formats. Long paragraphs make people skip a lot of content. The second is the names of the characters. The novel does not introduce each person's name in detail. When the author calls people by their surnames, it makes people feel a little strange. There is no specific introduction, which prevents readers from becoming interested in the characters when reading the relevant plot. Excellent novels will not lack attractive characters. When I was promoting the book, I was reminded that this novel is a translation. The original text is the novel Mother of Learning, which is called the Lord of Mysteries abroad😄 The translator should write everything at the beginning of the story

One chapter has 10,000 words. Is this a tomato?