Gu Xin is a young mage with an ordinary background and average talent. He is studying in the third year of Rhea Magic Academy. This enterprising but impatient young man is obsessed with controlling his own destiny and breaking away from the constraints of his family - he always resents his parents for favoring his brother over him. Therefore, he has no time to pay attention to unnecessary trivial matters, and he is unwilling to get involved in other people's plight. However, fate is gifting him with a huge amount of time: on the eve of Rhea's annual summer festival, Guxin was suddenly killed, and then he was reborn back to the beginning of the month, just before the train set off for the Magic Academy. Suddenly trapped in an endless cycle of time, Gu Xin will have to face his heart and the world...
Reader comments
It's a well-conceived novel, and the Western fantasy worldview is very interesting. However, the plot is a bit too desperate. I can't imagine how the protagonist can catch up with the other two and escape from this eternal January when the time loop is behind.
The biggest problem with this book so far is the paragraphing. The author is very generous with his updates, but a large section of text is very uncomfortable to read. That paragraph of more than one hundred words can be split into twenty, twenty, forty and twenty formats. Long paragraphs make people skip a lot of content.
The second is the names of the characters. The novel does not introduce each person's name in detail. When the author calls people by their surnames, it makes people feel a little strange. There is no specific introduction, which prevents readers from becoming interested in the characters when reading the relevant plot. Excellent novels will not lack attractive characters.
When I was promoting the book, I was reminded that this novel is a translation. The original text is the novel Mother of Learning, which is called the Lord of Mysteries abroad [laughs]
The translator should write everything at the beginning of the story
It's a well-conceived novel, and the Western fantasy worldview is very interesting. However, the plot is a bit too desperate. I can't imagine how the protagonist can catch up with the other two and escape from this eternal January when the time loop is behind. The biggest problem with this book so far is the paragraphing. The author is very generous with his updates, but a large section of text is very uncomfortable to read. That paragraph of more than one hundred words can be split into twenty, twenty, forty and twenty formats. Long paragraphs make people skip a lot of content. The second is the names of the characters. The novel does not introduce each person's name in detail. When the author calls people by their surnames, it makes people feel a little strange. There is no specific introduction, which prevents readers from becoming interested in the characters when reading the relevant plot. Excellent novels will not lack attractive characters. When I was promoting the book, I was reminded that this novel is a translation. The original text is the novel Mother of Learning, which is called the Lord of Mysteries abroad [laughs] The translator should write everything at the beginning of the story
One chapter has 10,000 words. Is this a tomato?