Word Game: Draw the Morning Star at the Beginning

The theme is generally good, but there are a few aspects that are about to become poisonous points. First, the protagonist's knowledge seems to be disconnected between the inside and outside of the parchment, but the skills are connected. It feels like the wizard has become a skill thrower for the real protagonist. In reality, knowledge is rarely pursued, and innovation is not strong. Suggestion: The author slowly transitions the protagonist's knowledge from early learning to later research and development. Second, the protagonist often appears to be overconfident. For example, after finding the sealed place of the local god in the first world, not knowing his attitude, strength, and whether the information is true, he would consider attacking the opponent. This feels contrary to the rational entry of "Wizard's Heart". Later, in reality, he is too arrogant at some moments, feeling that he can do anything. It may be possible to complete it sometimes, but it is often difficult to complete but with good luck, which is a bit... Um... Not good. Suggestions: The author can be more cautious when writing unknown situations, be more powerful in face-slapping plots, and be more tactful in communicating with unknown beings. After all, absolute rationality should ensure that one's own interests are maximized in known information. Still a little bit, but too lazy to type. Come on, author

It's quite interesting, but the protagonist is still pretending to be a pig after more than 100 chapters. At least let the heroine know some of your strength. Does the author think that this is more fun, the protagonist pretends to be a pig, and then those women will grab you despite the danger, and then you can naturally help them later? It was frustrating to watch, but the plot of the simulated world was very interesting.

Personal shortcomings ⒈Background. ⑴. The old-fashioned sweet love between childhood sweethearts, or the daughter of a rich family and a poor orphan①. ⑵. As a top student who can take the first place in the city in the college entrance examination②, the protagonist does not show the matching high IQ. So is his childhood sweetheart. ⑶. Under normal circumstances, top students should be in key classes, but the class in the article seems to be just a few top students and a bunch of transparent ones. There are still several rich guys and a bunch of handsome guys and beauties③. Not very realistic. Moreover, a bunch of top students just like this and that, lacking grace, thinking and temperament. ⒉Plot ⑴. The plot of the novice copy is too slow ④. ⑵. The stakes were too high at the beginning, and then they were forcibly weakened ⑤. ⑶. Omit 3. Characters ⑴. There are no particularly impressive characters. ⑵. The male-to-female ratio of the people around the protagonist is too large, and the author is particularly not good at portraying female characters. Various supporting female characters have their own shortcomings⑥. ⑶. The protagonist is a little ambitious. Personally considered advantages 1. The description of the copy is good and the world view is huge. 2. There are some foreshadowings and clues. 3. There are a lot of memes, and most of them can make people laugh. Explain ①: See Chapter 1 ②: See Chapter 7 ③: See Chapter 1, Chapter 22, 23, etc. ④: The latest chapter is still in the novice copy ⑤: There are plug-in assistance in Chapters 1, 10, 48 and the early stage, but less after that. ⑥: Chapter 24, 36, 37, 70 Mo Qinglan, Chapter 63 Long Yuehe, etc. Statement The above content only represents my personal views, and everyone will have a different reading experience. Everyone is encouraged to read it for themselves and respect your different opinions. Accept criticism, but please also comment rationally and kindly. Due to limited personal level, energy and time, the above content is not completely complete, please forgive me. The above content only refers to the work itself, and does not contain personal attacks, insults, slander, etc. On the author. I fully respect the author's work. If it causes discomfort or disgust to the author or readers, or if you think that the content I published is inconsistent with the facts, please contact me and I will delete the content and apologize to you. I have only read Chapter 108 and skipped a small amount, so my views may be one-sided and wrong. I welcome criticism and correction. Please abide by the law, abide by morality, be cautious in your words and deeds, and think deeply and diligently.

Good-looking is good-looking, that is Two pictures a day, enough for anyone to see [smile] It's so long-winded. How long has it been? I haven't pushed the main line yet [smile]

The plot is clear to the end at a glance, and the beginning is well written, so it's time to finish the book. Goodbye

The book is good to read. The introduction has been revised very slowly. Chapter 200 is still in Novice Village. I can't imagine how much time it will take to write the next copy [face covering]. If you like a slow pace, you can read it.

It's pretty good, and the theme is relatively new, like the combination of simulator + Microxulu + Weird Resurrection? There's nothing too sinister about it at the moment, it's just that the protagonist's temperament is... Too calm? I don't feel so decisive, I think at least in reality it's better to show off your edge [rolls eyes][rolls eyes]

The author's first copy is really superb, with foreshadowing one after another. It's really good to see the first main line later, but I don't know if it can be maintained later. I don't want to push the protagonist if it is too strong. It just needs ups and downs to make it interesting.

It's not too toxic and the main character has a clear mind, which is good. The most difficult thing to control in this kind of novel is the protagonist's own understanding of his own abilities. In many novels, he has acquired very strong power but always pretends to be a grandson, or in other words, after acquiring weak power, he is so confident that he is omnipotent and is labeled as a grandson. It's important to control your position in the food chain, and the protagonist is very careful in this regard, which is good.

It looks good, but the progress is too slow. So far, the first copy has not been passed, and the parchment function has not been unlocked.

As long as there are less than half of the current plot, the rating will definitely be 9 points, and if there is no female protagonist, it can reach 9.5 Points or above (some novels are all male, and some novels are all female, it would be better to have a mix of male and female protagonists, some need female protagonists, and some novels do not need them at all, and this is the case for you and my friends) [OK] Completely skipping the real-life plot will not affect the reading experience. I personally tested it.

The plot is very good, and the subject matter is also novel. The disadvantage is that it is too long. A newbie copy is too long, with two or three hundred chapters written. What should I do with the subsequent copies? Pay less attention to it. The score of this book is at least 9 points.

How can I put it, although the childhood sweethearts are a bit of a drama at the beginning, the subject matter is still quite interesting. It depends on the world view. Many of the stories involving weirdness and evil gods are the same, so I will give it a four-star wait and see.

When will copy one end?

The subject matter is very good, the world view is also good, the protagonist is okay, but the supporting characters are a bit hard to comment on.

So you haven't cleared the novice copy in Chapter 300?

Although it is very slow, the setting of the parchment is still refreshing. It is a good novel. The characters will not violate their own settings, and it will not give people the feeling of a three-dimensional explosion. The author's intentions can be seen. Overall worth watching.

The writing is good so far. It should be a single female protagonist's emotional line. The author will follow his own ideas. The only thing that has an impact is that some people in the comment section keep finding fault with the heroine. Childhood sweethearts are made for each other, so you have to force the author to write multiple female protagonists with multiple ambiguous emotional lines. I don't recommend reading this book if you want to read more ambiguous heroines. You can go for books with multiple heroines.

Yes, come on, the author is great

A book with very online IQ. Not only the protagonist, but also the supporting villains, everyone's IQ is very online. Everyone's image is also very full. The combat power system, economic system, ability system, and world view are all very complete. It's a great book. The biggest shortcoming of not giving it five stars is that the progress is too slow. I've read more than 380 chapters now, and I haven't finished the first initial copy yet. If it's a little bit poisonous, just one. The author wanted to create a smart, rational and calm protagonist, but gradually the protagonist became indifferent when facing the heroine. What I want to say is that being calm does not mean that you have no emotional intelligence. A calm and smart person is often the best at establishing his own external image, and a good image can often bring more benefits.

It's okay. This score is quite suitable.

Overall, it's pretty good. The world view is quite big. I don't know how the author will round it out in the end. It's the Millennium Comet. It should be the fifth day now, but it only appears three times a day. The author remembers to add it.

The author should probably take a look at "I Save the World in the Doomsday Text Adventure" and reduce the real-life plot. Some of the settings and plots in this world are not very reasonable. There should be more parchment plots in other worlds. This is well written.

Global text invasion? I slaughter the gods on paper! Love's Most Twisted Curse by The popular novels written by novices have always been illogical. This book is actually pretty good. Except for some inevitable logic bugs in the background design, the plot is not cliché. Playing some secretive online games in the city is actually relatively new. In particular, the various copies are written with great care, and with special golden fingers, they are quite refreshing. Three and a half to four and a half stars, please round up.

It's a very good book, but the male protagonist is very lucky. I think it's not good here. The rest is very good. There is no meal replacement. Let's read it first. Personally, I think it is better to have a female protagonist. Of course, if there is a harem, it will be no problem. The wizard should actually have no female protagonist. That's it, five stars for support.

Overall, it's okay. I just need the author to speed up the process. There are more than 280 chapters. The initial world has not passed yet...

The author is really too ink, there are more than 400 chapters, and I haven't passed the first level yet. Although the time in the book has passed only a few months, readers follow your update time. Of course, if you update 100 chapters a day, just pretend I didn't say anything [star]

Interesting, not a repetitive article

It's okay, but there are more than 250 chapters, and I haven't passed Novice Village.

It is still a very good novel with a novel subject matter. The author wants to write about many worlds with different world views. It is very good and very enjoyable. Come on.