Star Railroad: I Really Just Want to Fix the Plot

There is a strange feeling of reading a book written by a fictional historian, and Ye Ye's book is quite interesting.

Not to mention anything else, just because the author has his own original plot, it deserves to be given five stars. It is very thoughtful. Although I have not read a lot of content, I believe that as long as your book does not have any major poisonous points in the middle and no one maliciously rates it, then it will definitely be rated at 9 points.

This galaxy has room for any possibility

Different feeling, different plot, different characters, ah ha, was it you?

It's really good to read. Today's fan fiction is either frequently interrupted or poorly written. At least I see that this novel is pretty good. I hope this novel won't follow the footsteps of "This Life Is Too Long, My Epitaph Is Too Short".

A good idea. If the author can control his writing skills, it will be a masterpiece of light comedy.

It still feels great. The setting is novel and the protagonist is very nice. It's not some abstract anti-human thing.

The writing is good and the story is good. The only problem is that it was discovered too early and there is not much to say. I insist that the shortcoming is that the obsession with returning home is not attractive as the ultimate goal. The hook is very open, but the protagonist's development level is less than 10% … It's a pity that it ended so quickly, but the outline is quite interesting

The protagonist has become a lot weaker, but it's still very interesting. I recommend updating more often.

A very good book

A different Star Dome Railway, it looks good, I love watching it, cheers to the author!

Why are you finished so quickly?

Just like one of the hundreds of paths in destiny, carve out the future on your own

Okay, the current plot is quite interesting.

Good looking, good luck to the author

Good idea, very nice

The only relationship between this book and Star Iron is the name of the character. The rest of it has nothing to do with the plot of Star Iron. If you like science fiction, you can read it. The writing is not bad.

I thought it was a pure plot, but I didn't expect it to have its own ideas.

An invincible adaptation, the plot was written from scratch and there are no more female love lines.

Very interesting and interesting

Very creative plot adaptation

It's quite interesting. I can only say that the future is promising.

Come on, it's pretty good. I hope you can stick with it.

After observation. The biggest relationship between this book and Beng Tie is the name and ability. As for the plot, is there such a thing as a plot?

It's good to read. All in all, keep writing.

A must-have book for fictional historians, especially if it is not finished but the outline is out. This is really good. It is much better than a trap.