The Undying Enter the World of Horror

Five stars for my favorite subject matter! I've always liked micro-horror and funny invincible articles. So, as the first sofa (?), I decided to submit a long review to the teacher—— The subject matter is really well chosen, and it is very suitable for readers who like a refreshing experience. Chang Sheng's character is also different from the previous male protagonists. He even starts at the level of a boss, which is very unexpected and unique. But the fly in the ointment is that as a "little scary and invincible funny article", the first three chapters are not eye-catching enough, and the details and atmosphere after the third chapter are also very scarce. As for the plot point of "Although the world is scary, the protagonist is too powerful and the process is only lighthearted and funny, so he keeps making sandstorm operations", the teacher designed the plot to be fun at the beginning, but did not handle the explanation of the protagonist's identity well, which made it appear abrupt. Regarding how the protagonist's special identity makes other ghosts afraid, the teacher can also design in the plot to treat him as a non-human race without normal human emotions. For example, how those ghosts scare him and want to eat him, how the protagonist teases those ghosts like swatting flies and playing with kittens, or even eats him. Such specific points can be written. However, the prerequisite for making the ghosts afraid is that the protagonist does something shocking to them, such as killing their boss in an instant, or speeding through a difficult dungeon by one person (you can use this to open a small scroll to achieve the goal of a low word count (what)). To sum up, according to the current situation, the overall detailed atmosphere is still a problem of not enough shaping, which makes it seem very weak and streamlined. I think the identity of the protagonist does not need to be revealed in detail in the early stages. You can simply not write it out, or you can only bring it up a little bit and then reveal it slowly in the later stages.

I haven't practiced cultivation for such a long time 🙂

Nice! Come on, author!

Nice! 🥺

It's good to watch, but I haven't finished it yet. The main character's character is quite common. It's okay. There's no important plot at the moment. Maybe it's because I haven't finished watching it yet.

Not bad, a bit interesting