Immortal cultivator Lu Lin was reborn as a warrior from another world and was about to be assigned to the corresponding guardian country.
However, he did not receive the so-called blessing from the goddess. Instead, he found a strange thing in the sea of consciousness.
"What is this? It's a bit like a weapon spirit. I'll throw in the art of controlling the treasure first."
"My master from another world, I am the goddess Sylvie... Eh?"
Immortal cultivators, novel fans, magic apprentices, two princesses, and a little succubus are about to reveal the truth about the whole world...?
Reader comments
Not bad. After reading 20 chapters, I can only say that the subject matter is innovative, but the pace is slow and there is almost no excitement. There is no feeling that cultivating immortality is greater than magic. On the contrary, it is a bit the other way around, making it a bit frustrating.
The combination of the theme of cultivating immortals and the Western Fantasy Demon King Warrior is pretty good in terms of combat power comparison. The protagonist has reached the world's highest level of combat power in the later stage of Qi training. This is just ridiculous. The power system of Western Fantasy is not that high-end. With decades of basic move training and tens of thousands of battles, the foundation-building combat power is the pinnacle of Western Fantasy. Even a more high-end Western Fantasy worldview has the protection of the true god, and is barely a golden elixir level combat power. Well, I have read a lot of Zhutianliu time travel novels. Compared with the world of cultivating immortals in his work, the high-level combat power of those Western Fantasy worlds are all in the realm of transformation into gods or even fusion. Is the expansion of combat power so outrageous? Only an environment like Western Fantasy can cultivate people of such a high level. So I think that in the Western Fantasy world view, the mortals can only stop at the early stage of the Golden Core. The strength of higher realms can be divided according to the divine power level of the DND world.
It was okay in the early stage, but after the demon chapter, it was just child's play. The demons who have lived for thousands of years simply can't see how profound the city is, and they can easily trick themselves into death. The family member who appeared earlier was a little embarrassed, but when it came to the dwarf technology howitzer, the lyrics adapted from Chinese nursery rhymes made me so embarrassed that I pushed my toes out of the three rooms and one living room. I can't bear it anymore😰
As a Japanese-style Western fantasy novel, it is still very good, and it is not boring. The scale and attitude of the characters' contact are also quite appropriate. It is just that in terms of emotional description, it sometimes likes to be awkward, but other things are not much.
Doppelgänger, I mean, the protagonist is a doppelgänger
The second part, taking back the frontier, the description is unmeasured and very confusing.
Yes, although it can be seen that AI was used, the polish is okay.
It's quite to my personal taste. Although there are some small flaws in the details of the plot and characters, the flaws are not concealed. It's just that I don't have the market appetite for tomatoes, which is a pity. Specifically, it will get a little bit of traffic from fantasy fantasy, but the loyal audience of this style will most likely give it a low score and negative reviews, because this book is just a Japanese-style Western fantasy light novel with a bit of fantasy flavor. The core of the worldview of fantasy immortality is that the more ancient it is, the more powerful it becomes, and the winner takes all. Japanese light novels are too harmonious in comparison, and they are too nonsensical, humorous and funny. But I still like this book very much. A new attempt is better than a stagnant book on a single subject. If there are many readers, it may open up a new track.
It's okay, it's a drama story genre, similar to anime. If you like this kind of movie, you can check it out. However, the level is slowly raised. There are more than 200 chapters of foundation building (the male protagonist follows the immortal cultivation system and is promoted to foundation building, but in the indigenous world, this is considered a high-end combat power demon king level); and I searched for this book with many female protagonists. As a result, by chapter 250, several female characters are in unrequited love, and the male protagonist has no idea, so readers who like rich emotional lines may consider it again.
Ah, I finished reading this by accident. It's a very good novel, without any bad points throughout. The characters also have their own characteristics, and the images are quite full. The inscription is about the magical warriors and demons from another world, but there is no conflict at all. Instead, it is relatively novel and has a relatively grand world view, which is perfectly unified. There are some minor flaws, and the whole process is basically invincible and enjoyable. I am not abused at all, but my combat power is not broken at all and I grow steadily. In the process of success, the relationship between the protagonist's family and friends continues to deepen, expand, and become stronger, and the image becomes richer with its own characteristics. All in all, it's a very good novel. The only hope is that you don't have to update it constantly.
After reading it, the writing is really good. The score of 6.6 Is low. Normally it should be 8.
In any case, it is indeed a bit difficult to reach the middle stage of foundation building after more than 300 chapters, although the main plot has only passed five months.
It's okay, the world view is relatively good, and the pace is okay, but the protagonist is a little mentally unstable, and his tone of voice is more modern. I'd better give it a five-star support.
At first glance, it's not bad. The world view and plot development are relatively comfortable.
So far, the context is clear, the writing is good, and it looks good.
Oh my god, why does this book only have a 6.5 Rating? It's hard to understand.
It has a novel world view, and the protagonist grows up very quickly. I don't know why, but I feel like a slightly tense story is written in a soothing style. But it's good to just read the chapters. There is no poison, and the foreshadowing is recycled very well. The key is not watery at all, but the flow is still too little.
The truth is quite sci-fi and beautiful, but the traffic does not allow for a detailed description, so it can be considered a good ending. Looking forward to the author's new book
The genre of Western Fantasy + Immortal Cultivation, the whole book has innovative points, but I feel that it is not expanded enough. There is no big problem in reading the whole book. Although the ending is a bit rushed, it can be regarded as filling in all the pitfalls, and everything that needs to be explained is written. The rating of 6.9 Is indeed a bit low, so I would encourage you to give it five stars.
6.5 Points is definitely an underestimate. This article is worth 9 points. The whole text is logically online, the world view is rigorous enough, and the writing style is neither procrastinating nor verbose. In fact, it can be used as a learning material for experienced Internet writers. It was a pleasure to read 200 chapters in one go, and the plot line was very clear, without any redundant plot. Highly recommended
I just read the first 20 chapters. The pace is great and there is no water in it. It feels like it's at least as good as a light novel publication, and it's hard to imagine that this is the author's first book.
The logic is online, the plot is coherent, the system of magic and immortality is reasonable, the author's writing skills are good, except for some paragraphs that need to be corrected for language problems, the whole article is quite valuable. It's a pity that the subject matter is niche so the rating is low. I think the rating is too low and should be around 88-89.
OK can have potential
You can like it more
I would like to give you a five-star review. The writing of this book is very good, but there is a fundamental flaw, that is, there are already many characters, all of whom are from foreign countries. Their complicated names are very difficult to remember, resulting in a poor experience.
Not bad, but the interaction between the male and female protagonists feels a little lacking
It feels okay, but it just doesn't portray the 500-year-old sophistication of the protagonist. He's almost like a young man, without the old-fashioned air at all.
I feel like it's well written, but I don't know why the rating is low.
I've seen a few and I think it's okay, but I don't know why the rating is so low.
The writing is a bit immature, but it's okay. I hope it stays like this.
Not bad, a very good novel, just give it five stars and like it👍🏻
Not bad. After reading 20 chapters, I can only say that the subject matter is innovative, but the pace is slow and there is almost no excitement. There is no feeling that cultivating immortality is greater than magic. On the contrary, it is a bit the other way around, making it a bit frustrating.
The combination of the theme of cultivating immortals and the Western Fantasy Demon King Warrior is pretty good in terms of combat power comparison. The protagonist has reached the world's highest level of combat power in the later stage of Qi training. This is just ridiculous. The power system of Western Fantasy is not that high-end. With decades of basic move training and tens of thousands of battles, the foundation-building combat power is the pinnacle of Western Fantasy. Even a more high-end Western Fantasy worldview has the protection of the true god, and is barely a golden elixir level combat power. Well, I have read a lot of Zhutianliu time travel novels. Compared with the world of cultivating immortals in his work, the high-level combat power of those Western Fantasy worlds are all in the realm of transformation into gods or even fusion. Is the expansion of combat power so outrageous? Only an environment like Western Fantasy can cultivate people of such a high level. So I think that in the Western Fantasy world view, the mortals can only stop at the early stage of the Golden Core. The strength of higher realms can be divided according to the divine power level of the DND world. It was okay in the early stage, but after the demon chapter, it was just child's play. The demons who have lived for thousands of years simply can't see how profound the city is, and they can easily trick themselves into death. The family member who appeared earlier was a little embarrassed, but when it came to the dwarf technology howitzer, the lyrics adapted from Chinese nursery rhymes made me so embarrassed that I pushed my toes out of the three rooms and one living room. I can't bear it anymore😰
As a Japanese-style Western fantasy novel, it is still very good, and it is not boring. The scale and attitude of the characters' contact are also quite appropriate. It is just that in terms of emotional description, it sometimes likes to be awkward, but other things are not much. Doppelgänger, I mean, the protagonist is a doppelgänger The second part, taking back the frontier, the description is unmeasured and very confusing.
Yes, although it can be seen that AI was used, the polish is okay.
It's quite to my personal taste. Although there are some small flaws in the details of the plot and characters, the flaws are not concealed. It's just that I don't have the market appetite for tomatoes, which is a pity. Specifically, it will get a little bit of traffic from fantasy fantasy, but the loyal audience of this style will most likely give it a low score and negative reviews, because this book is just a Japanese-style Western fantasy light novel with a bit of fantasy flavor. The core of the worldview of fantasy immortality is that the more ancient it is, the more powerful it becomes, and the winner takes all. Japanese light novels are too harmonious in comparison, and they are too nonsensical, humorous and funny. But I still like this book very much. A new attempt is better than a stagnant book on a single subject. If there are many readers, it may open up a new track.
It's okay, it's a drama story genre, similar to anime. If you like this kind of movie, you can check it out. However, the level is slowly raised. There are more than 200 chapters of foundation building (the male protagonist follows the immortal cultivation system and is promoted to foundation building, but in the indigenous world, this is considered a high-end combat power demon king level); and I searched for this book with many female protagonists. As a result, by chapter 250, several female characters are in unrequited love, and the male protagonist has no idea, so readers who like rich emotional lines may consider it again.
Ah, I finished reading this by accident. It's a very good novel, without any bad points throughout. The characters also have their own characteristics, and the images are quite full. The inscription is about the magical warriors and demons from another world, but there is no conflict at all. Instead, it is relatively novel and has a relatively grand world view, which is perfectly unified. There are some minor flaws, and the whole process is basically invincible and enjoyable. I am not abused at all, but my combat power is not broken at all and I grow steadily. In the process of success, the relationship between the protagonist's family and friends continues to deepen, expand, and become stronger, and the image becomes richer with its own characteristics. All in all, it's a very good novel. The only hope is that you don't have to update it constantly.
After reading it, the writing is really good. The score of 6.6 Is low. Normally it should be 8. In any case, it is indeed a bit difficult to reach the middle stage of foundation building after more than 300 chapters, although the main plot has only passed five months.
It's okay, the world view is relatively good, and the pace is okay, but the protagonist is a little mentally unstable, and his tone of voice is more modern. I'd better give it a five-star support.
At first glance, it's not bad. The world view and plot development are relatively comfortable.
So far, the context is clear, the writing is good, and it looks good. Oh my god, why does this book only have a 6.5 Rating? It's hard to understand.
It has a novel world view, and the protagonist grows up very quickly. I don't know why, but I feel like a slightly tense story is written in a soothing style. But it's good to just read the chapters. There is no poison, and the foreshadowing is recycled very well. The key is not watery at all, but the flow is still too little. The truth is quite sci-fi and beautiful, but the traffic does not allow for a detailed description, so it can be considered a good ending. Looking forward to the author's new book
The genre of Western Fantasy + Immortal Cultivation, the whole book has innovative points, but I feel that it is not expanded enough. There is no big problem in reading the whole book. Although the ending is a bit rushed, it can be regarded as filling in all the pitfalls, and everything that needs to be explained is written. The rating of 6.9 Is indeed a bit low, so I would encourage you to give it five stars.
6.5 Points is definitely an underestimate. This article is worth 9 points. The whole text is logically online, the world view is rigorous enough, and the writing style is neither procrastinating nor verbose. In fact, it can be used as a learning material for experienced Internet writers. It was a pleasure to read 200 chapters in one go, and the plot line was very clear, without any redundant plot. Highly recommended
I just read the first 20 chapters. The pace is great and there is no water in it. It feels like it's at least as good as a light novel publication, and it's hard to imagine that this is the author's first book.
The logic is online, the plot is coherent, the system of magic and immortality is reasonable, the author's writing skills are good, except for some paragraphs that need to be corrected for language problems, the whole article is quite valuable. It's a pity that the subject matter is niche so the rating is low. I think the rating is too low and should be around 88-89.
OK can have potential
You can like it more
I would like to give you a five-star review. The writing of this book is very good, but there is a fundamental flaw, that is, there are already many characters, all of whom are from foreign countries. Their complicated names are very difficult to remember, resulting in a poor experience.
Not bad, but the interaction between the male and female protagonists feels a little lacking
It feels okay, but it just doesn't portray the 500-year-old sophistication of the protagonist. He's almost like a young man, without the old-fashioned air at all.
I feel like it's well written, but I don't know why the rating is low.
I've seen a few and I think it's okay, but I don't know why the rating is so low.
The writing is a bit immature, but it's okay. I hope it stays like this.
Not bad, a very good novel, just give it five stars and like it👍🏻
It's okay, I don't know if it's not popular.
The beauty of adulthood, the joy of it
Very good, very beautiful
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It's okay, not mindless