I Will Build Dragon City in the Last Days

(First in the middle) Four-star white, 10 items C Sense of substitution C, attractiveness C, plug-in C, setting C, writing C, imagination C, rhythm C, main line C, character design C, logic C Extra points: none Personal feelings: The setting is very thin, but the description of reality is very complete, and it is not considered a small opening. ─────────────────── #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. This way it should not be blocked. 1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria·Ninth Edition Revised (1) Evaluation items 1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view. 2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading. 3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative. 4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency. 5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot? 6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line. 7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low? 8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal. 9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive? 10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition. 11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (2) Evaluation grouping 1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction 2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings 3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation 4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center 5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense (3) Rating of recommended evaluation items 1. Highlights: S-level 4 points, A-level 2 points 2. Standard: 1 point for Grade B, 0 points for Grade B 3. Defects: Grade C - 1 point, Grade D - 3 points 3. Rating of online articles (1) Up, up 1. Red+: Total score is above level 30 2. Red: Total score is 26 or above 3. Red-: 8 items A (2) High-quality and bright web articles 1. Orange+: Total score is level 22 or above 2. Orange: Total score is 18 or above 3. Orange-: 5 items A (3) Shang Xia·High-level online articles 1. Purple+: Total score is 14 or above 2. Purple: Total score is level 10 or above 3. Purple-: 8 items B (4) Upper-intermediate and high-level online writing 1. Five-star blue+: total score is level 6 or above 2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above 4. Five-star green: 5 items B (5) Zhongyi·High-standard online articles 1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above 2. Four-star green: total score is level 1 3. Four-star white: 10 items C (6) Middle 2 and 2·Standard online text 1. Samsung White+: Total score -1 level 2. Samsung White: Total Score -2 Level (7) Middle and lower three•Flawed web articles 1. Samsung Gray+: Total score -3 levels 2. Samsung Gray: Total Score -4 Level (6) Xia Shang·Web articles with great flaws 1. Samsung Black+: Total score -5 levels 2. Samsung Black: Total Score -6 Level 3. One-star black +: total score -7 levels 4. One-star black: total score -8 levels 5. Two-star black: 10 items D One star is an invalid rating, two stars is the lowest rating (7) Medium•No rating (lower middle to upper middle) (8) Inferior • No grading (middle to lower to lower) (9) Xiaxia·Malicious 1. The first stage: total score - below level 10 2. The second stage: total score - below level 20 3. The third stage: 10 E

You were so far ahead from the beginning, and you still had a 50-50 draw with the enemy. You lacked the ultimate trump card.

When I set the settings at the beginning, I thought the protagonist would live a good life. After all, there are many kinds of superpowers. Fighting monsters, collecting girls, becoming more comfortable and leading the crowd. Once the base is ready, all kinds of classic plots emerge in endlessly. Brothers, Mission: Impossible, combat power. At the beginning, it was said that girls would be recruited, but later on, seven or eight girls were recruited in a row, and they were collected without any emotion. There is still room. Plants can start to enter and live, and there is a high probability that they will become a small world in the future.

I am too good to my friends, but my friends are sorry for me? It's okay, I stabbed myself twice for my friends [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

My favorite thing is the shelter. Imagine it, it's perfect. It's just that the superpower seems a bit invincible. The structure of this shelter is still okay.

It can be seen that in about 180 pictures, the protagonist's cheating is not as powerful as not cheating. The enemy camp sneaked into the protagonist's base, and the protagonist even released

I've seen dozens of them, and the outline is pretty good. People from your own village should be more trustworthy than strangers to help you develop your strength later on. There should be a female protagonist! It's not bad. I hope it doesn't collapse in the future. I'll give it four stars first. If it's good later, I'll give it five stars. [Shy] (Don't always say how much it costs for free novels. The author doesn't owe anyone.)

Doomsday novels are just a hodgepodge of fantasy. It's a good thing if you can write down the novel in its entirety. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Oops, it's well written. It's really good. I haven't stopped from the first one to now. I'm going to read it for him. Come on, give it five stars.

The story is very attractive and tense enough to continue.

Come on, come on, come on, author, I'm optimistic about you! ✊

Okay, you can take a look. Kill decisively. The revenge that should be avenged is absolutely satisfying, and the kindness that should be avenged can also be done with an online IQ.

The front was okay, but when the twin leaders came out, I knew it was time to leave.

It's pretty good-looking, nothing particularly objectionable so far! ! !

The writing is very nice [laughs] Come on brother [like][like][like]

A welfare book for the harem party, it is not very dark, it is refreshing and semi-invincible, and it does not beat around the bush. If the author is faster, the rating will definitely be higher, but the main author is slower. The author worked hard.

There are still some pitfalls in the front, but it's okay to make up for it later, and it has 9 points of strength.

Thanks to the author, the book is very good! Keep up the good work, keep up the good work

It's okay. The plot is quite realistic. There are friends and relatives. Unlike some stories where one person is alone. Is it possible to have no friends or relatives in the real world? In real life, you can be alone without any relationships!

It's so beautiful. Come and see it, everyone. It will make you immortal after watching it.

The writing is good and the plot is pretty good

Not bad, a very interesting apocalyptic article...

The most beautiful among the apocalyptic novels

Very beautiful, very exciting

Although I haven't watched it yet, even the established forces don't want to go in and watch Lin.

It's really well written, logical, and cautious. I'll help you once in a while. It's a masterpiece of apocalyptic writing.

It's great. It's the best apocalyptic book I've read this year.

It's great. I love reading it. I want to read it, but it's even slower. The author has a hundred chapters in one night. Wow!

It's very beautiful, and the writing is very practical, not exaggerated.

The content written is true and worth recommending