Hpyesterday's Song

In fact, this is a novel that pays attention to details. I don't want to describe it as delicate. I think that is inappropriate. It is really missing something and is too vague. Forgive my lack of vocabulary, I can only say that it is not a general description, it is a kind of perfection, it is giving flesh and blood to people's souls, both the plot and emotions are progressive, and the changes are handled very well. The author's writing is like ripples, spreading out in circles. The novel is like the yellow ice cream in the three-color box. The taste is rich and delicious, dense and well integrated. It is not refreshing, but refreshing and pleasant.

Very beautiful! ! The article is not procrastinating, the writing style is delicate and the emotional lines are not obtrusive, and the characters are not OOC! It's really rare to see such Sri Lankan novels. The slow flow slowly moved my heart, which I really hated. Those articles that seemed to be about Sif, but actually seemed to have an original male protagonist, made me black-eyed. Now I finally have something new to read. Judging from the current pace of the plot, the introduction, and the hidden foreshadowing, it will be difficult to end Parent + Child Generation without writing several million words. It feels like it will be a hp ceiling-level fanfic when it is finished. I am more determined about this one (I will be a veteran fan by then hahahahaha). However, if the heroine disappears in Parent Generation at the age of 16, will Sect still join the Death Eaters or break up with Lily? Will Lily still be killed by No Nose? ——Anyway, it looks good! Recommend! Now the only drawback of this book is that it is too short! ! Also, it hasn't been rated very well since it first came out, and few people are watching it. However, this will definitely be resolved with time and progress. Don't be discouraged, madam. Come on, this food is so delicious. [Blow a kiss] I will want to enter Azkaban if I don't see it finished... I will write a follow-up review when there are more plots! !

Wow, it's really beautiful. I simply can't imagine how the author came up with such a novel idea. It is a completely unimagined background of HP fan fiction. One thing to say, I really feel that the author has created a magical world with his own characteristics in his writing, and has given Sirius and the others richer colors. I am really touched. The Dog Godfather is finally not a pure troll.) Of course, there is also the portrayal of Sri Lanka, which is really the top level in HP I have read. There are many stories about Sri Lanka that don't have that awkward and venomous feeling. Although the heroine of this article has been with Si Jiao since childhood, and Si Jiao has been attracted to him early, but from the normal perspective of the heroine, it is difficult to detect his love (but I really want to say: Professor, your arrogant and venomous tongue, and your uncontrollable meanness and jealousy really expose you) Hehe, I really love this feeling. The author's writing is superb. I look forward to the subsequent plot. The only flaw is that I didn't dare to get too deep into it and cry during finals week. I hope that I can go straight to the ending when my exam ends on Monday (please come on!)

It's very interesting. The introduction attracted me. After I clicked on it, I found that the writing is also good. I feel that this will be a good work with a rich storyline and full-fledged characters. Big cheers for the author! Too little, please update it quickly.

When I saw the snippets of the Slug Club at the back, I felt it was very different from other books, and had a particularly novel feeling. The author's imagination is really great. He directly changed the original story of the Deathly Hallows into another one, and there is really no sense of contradiction in the writing. After reading the conversation between the two people, I felt that it is normal for everyone to see such magical things in Luo Fuzhu. It's really awesome and has a really big imagination.

It's really beautiful, but the number of chapters is still small. I hope it won't be too cruel in the future. Can you translate each chapter into English? Some English are too difficult to read without translation [laughing] [shy] [blowing kiss]

It's a nice knife in the middle but it looks great! A very novel background setting has been added to allow the heroine's character to be more reasonably integrated into the new world view. And Severus is very restored, Sirius is no longer only arrogant, James is no longer full of prejudice against Snape, everyone can live well, and Harry no longer has a painful childhood. In short, I don't want to blackmail anyone's HP. But the relationship between Severus and the heroine is really great. I was really moved by the heroine's words "always." But I also really want to say: You are only teenagers! Everyone in this hp fanfic has endured too much when they were still children. Holding the knife and seeing the descendants. I have to say that Severus's preference that he couldn't hide at all was so pretty! Looking forward to the sweets later! Let the young couple recover quickly and be together openly~please! ! 🥺(Wish Extra Modo Modo)

There is no upper limit to the rating of this book in my heart. As a senior fan of Hamburg, I have read countless fanfics over the years. I dare say that this book is one of the best Swedish fanfics that piques my appetite! ! And it is very unique. The English words in the article are really immersive and the emotions are delicate! ! You can tell by looking at my bookshelf that I like to read this kind of book ~ My lover gave himself to the shark ~ Especially when this setting is combined with the Sri Lankan religion, it is simply touching! ! The author thinks it's hard to wait for the chapter update every day. Although the dragon body is important, it's not that important [crying]

The author needs to make more updates. Don't give up. This one is really the most realistic among all the stories about the original generation of Sri Lankan religion that I have seen. I want to see more of the sweet daily life with the Sri Lankan religion, but the second life has not yet begun. This life is destined to be torture [I almost cry]. The flashback at the beginning is very touching. If the author writes more and writes to the end of the first life, the flashback at the beginning will give a sense of fate. I look forward to the subsequent development of the plot. It's great to watch! ! ! !

Although the plot is different from the original work, the author's writing is very good and there is nothing unreasonable. Moreover, the emotional line between the heroine and Sijiao is very good [Like][Like][Like][Like]

This book has been on my bookshelf for a while. I haven't been in a hurry to read it because of the rating and the lack of completion. I finished reading The Generation in one sitting today. It's really so good. The writing is very delicate, and it's so tugging, sour and sad. Wow, it's really wow. I'll give it a try and read it again. It's really an underrated novel. I love it so much.

This setting is really great. I read some of the writing and it's not bad, but it's just too little. This is how I set it up when I play chatgpt. The most coincidental thing is that my OC's name is the same as the heroine hahahahaha. I'm looking forward to it [Adoration][Adoration]

It's so good, but it's too short. I really can't bear to keep up with the updates. It's too painful. Why did you find such a good-looking article in such a short time? I'm really looking forward to the following plot. I'd like to support you by giving it a five-star rating. I've seen a lot of articles that were abandoned halfway. I hope the author doesn't stop updating and keeps on updating. Come on!

The writing is quite delicate, and the point is not to smear anyone or any college at all! ! ! Gryffindor is not a stupid lion without impulse, and Slytherin is not completely selfish. The author's descriptions are never one-sided, so the characters in the book are vividly written. And the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists are also very exciting! ! Come and see, okay?

A rare masterpiece. From the parents' generation to the children's generation, the plot is gradually recovered, and the foreshadowing is gradually recovered. It is addictive to read. At the same time, the author has profound writing skills and is good at depicting details. Although he sometimes feels that he is overdoing it, he does not hide his shortcomings, and the atmosphere and emotions of several main characters and specific plots are well highlighted. In terms of plot, there are many unexpected plots, which gave me a lot of interesting reading experience, rather than just following the original plot line. In addition, the montage-style flashback of family memories is also an interesting technique. Of course, apart from the protagonist's perspective, Snape's hidden line is not clear at this time, so there are many things that are still unclear. We look forward to the further development of the plot to explain everything clearly. Overall, this book was an enjoyable read. The pace is tight and the plot is interesting but not unconventional. I read the entire volume in three days, and there were no "pee spots" in my personal test.

The author wrote a very good article, and the emotional description is very delicate and beautiful. The following contains spoilers, so if you mind, don't read it. I personally don't like the reincarnation story, it feels like the two characters are confused [Petrified] The author explained that it is not a reincarnation story. You can read the relevant settings in the book. I won't spoil them here. I don't think it's good if the settings are revealed.

It's great. When you write about a young man, Snape can still write characters that are vivid and OOC. It's amazing. Adult Snape is also very well written. The more I read, the more I realize this is a treasure. It definitely deserves a score of 8.5 Or above.

This is the second best adaptation of HP fanfic I have seen so far. There is no mess in the adaptation, and the ideas are very clear. Although there may be some self-made background settings, it is very consistent with the style of HP's original work, and the author's writing style is also very good! ! ! !

The characters are drawn very delicately, and each person's personality is truly fleshed out. Even someone like me, who hates looters, can feel their charm. The plot line is also good, and many of the early foreshadowings are simply amazing when they are followed one by one later. However, the heroine still knows too little at present. It seems like seeing flowers in the fog, but also seems to be renewing the relationship. I look forward to the follow-up plot.

At first I wanted to give up because I spoke mixed Chinese and English, but later on it was really good to watch, the characterization was very accurate, I didn't feel OOC, and the plot design was also interlocking. I personally prefer stories about school days because I prefer the type of female protagonists who were there during school days. But the overall readability of both parts is actually good. It is a very high-quality HP story. I think many plot details are handled better than the original work.

This book reminds me of a previous book, the story of Snow White and the Half-Blood Prince. The heroine is also named White, but she is from the Lion House. I don't know if this book is from the Snake House or the Lion House.

At present, it seems that the author's writing style is very good and the world view is great, but I have a question. I don't know much about the original work. Are many of the settings in this novel included in the book? Or is it derived by the author based on some settings in the book?

The writing is very good, I don't know why the rating is so low. Really super pretty.

It looks good. It has been put into the category of second-time readers. I feel that the current rating is a bit low. I think it should be at least 8.5 Or above. The characters are not OOC, the writing is very good (it feels like the author is either a novice or quite mature), and the plot rhythm is very smooth. Also, the author should update quickly, please, the child just needs this food (please train Si Jiao hard for me) (It doesn't matter if you torture him more) (It's his turn to pursue his wife in the crematorium) (I'm sorry Si Jiao, I prefer the heroine)

The plot setting is very reasonable and full of details. It is not a brainless text. The author fills in the pits bit by bit and tells the story of Snape and White. The author delicately describes the changes in the heroine's feelings for Snape. Every character in the story is vivid and given a soul, and he has a good grasp of the character's personality. The early stage of the parent generation is sweeter, but in the middle and later stages, they are looking for candy among the glass shards. Both people love each other deeply and are willing to die for each other, so there are children who walk in black and white, just waiting for one person, Snape, and Alicia, who returns after suffering. At present, the story of the second generation has just begun, but the details and the sweets of the previous life are really delicious [I almost cry] and I look forward to the follow-up... (This is really my favorite article among HP fans I have read recently. I hope to eat the sweets of the reunion of the two as soon as possible [I almost cry] Come on, Mrs.!!!)

It's very beautiful, and the characters are also very good, but there are too few chapters [shy][shy]

It's very beautiful. When will it be finished? I cried so much and it tasted so good😋

It sounds good, I love it, cheers for the author. I'll stock up and come back More than a hundred. I'm coming. I'm coming.

It looks great. I love watching it. Please give me more updates! Thanks! The writing is good and the plot is good. The heroine and the professor were fighting so hard that I twisted into maggots in bed ~ Please be gentler in the back, ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Oh my god, I haven't seen such an awesome article in a long time. I really like Bai Yueguang, who fell in love with the professor when I was a child but died early. The setting is in the era of rebirth and returning to the family. The only highlight is that there are many private settings. Let's change the Deathly Hallows. I don't mind too much. The author's overall view of the world is very clear. The parent generation and the child generation were confused and I didn't pay attention [fear]