I have been looking forward to the story of the witch's journey. While waiting, I was thinking about how to get in touch with it. I was thinking about what the witch in my novel would look like. I have been searching and perfecting it. I believe that I can shape my world.
Reader comments
How to say it? The story is too concise, has no details, and is a bit vague. It's not like the Witch's Journey, and it's too weird. Do you like the protagonist selling benefits to men? [Laughing awkwardly] As a traveler, the king invited you to be a consultant, so you just stayed as a consultant? This is my evaluation of the first five chapters. I can only say that it kind of spoils my good impression. I will make my evaluation after I read the rest.
How to say it? The story is too concise, has no details, and is a bit vague. It's not like the Witch's Journey, and it's too weird. Do you like the protagonist selling benefits to men? [Laughing awkwardly] As a traveler, the king invited you to be a consultant, so you just stayed as a consultant? This is my evaluation of the first five chapters. I can only say that it kind of spoils my good impression. I will make my evaluation after I read the rest.