(Non-cool writing + group portrait writing)
There used to be a group of people in this world who were God's apostles, and they possessed the abilities given by God - Door Spirits.
Among these apostles, some have evil intentions and try to use God's power to satisfy their own greed; some hide in the dust and live alone; some are righteous and use God's power to create a prosperous world.
Everyone has their own choice. This ability has been passed down all the time. If you have the blood of an apostle, you will have the ability of God. The angels have been competing secretly, and there will always be someone who will disturb social stability. The World Investigation Bureau came into being, and they will be classified, registered and even arrested according to the degree of harm.
The affairs of God's envoys are handled by God's envoys!
Reader comments
The subject matter is quite novel, and the description of the fighting is also good. The only shortcoming is the specific description of the door spirit. For example, what are the specific abilities of the protagonist's door spirit? Can it only become a ghost? Are there any other abilities? Also, what are the triggering conditions for the Door Spirit? Does it consume stamina or have a number of uses? I hope that the following chapters will explain the classification and use restrictions of door spirits. Otherwise, it will be difficult to understand, for example, which is stronger, the A-level door spirit or the third-level disaster? Without these basic explanations, it is difficult to understand the differences between strengths and weaknesses. I think I need to explain these. There are also some details that are too bluntly described. For example, the scene where the main character's mother was killed is just mentioned in one stroke. A memory clip could be added to talk about the scene at that time and the father's psychological description. But overall it is still very good and I look forward to the follow-up plot.
The subject matter is quite novel, and the description of the fighting is also good. The only shortcoming is the specific description of the door spirit. For example, what are the specific abilities of the protagonist's door spirit? Can it only become a ghost? Are there any other abilities? Also, what are the triggering conditions for the Door Spirit? Does it consume stamina or have a number of uses? I hope that the following chapters will explain the classification and use restrictions of door spirits. Otherwise, it will be difficult to understand, for example, which is stronger, the A-level door spirit or the third-level disaster? Without these basic explanations, it is difficult to understand the differences between strengths and weaknesses. I think I need to explain these. There are also some details that are too bluntly described. For example, the scene where the main character's mother was killed is just mentioned in one stroke. A memory clip could be added to talk about the scene at that time and the father's psychological description. But overall it is still very good and I look forward to the follow-up plot.