"My Ling family is loyal to you, why do you want to frame my Ling family for treason? Destroy all my Ling family?"
Ling Feng, the son of a general, was jealous of the royal family because of his powerful family. His family was exterminated on the day he was born. He was raised by a housekeeper. When he learned of the blood feud, he vowed to avenge his family!
The roc rises with the wind in one day and soars up to 90,000 miles!
Reader comments
It's okay, full marks for now. The status of the little fox is not low, it should be a foreshadowing, and it is expected that he will be able to transform in the future. Although the vocabulary is not gorgeous, it is smooth and a bit dry. Two female characters, Mu Qing and Ling Xi, have appeared, and they feel like passers-by. Let's see what happens next.
The structure is clear and the description is detailed and focused, highlighting the description of the characters' inner activities.
Very very beautiful
OK OK OK
Good. It just feels like the author has little experience in love, and the female characters should be richer.
It's okay, let's take another look and continue to evaluate
It's okay, full marks for now. The status of the little fox is not low, it should be a foreshadowing, and it is expected that he will be able to transform in the future. Although the vocabulary is not gorgeous, it is smooth and a bit dry. Two female characters, Mu Qing and Ling Xi, have appeared, and they feel like passers-by. Let's see what happens next.
The structure is clear and the description is detailed and focused, highlighting the description of the characters' inner activities.
Very very beautiful
OK OK OK
Good. It just feels like the author has little experience in love, and the female characters should be richer.
It's okay, let's take another look and continue to evaluate
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