[The writing is immature]
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The heroine does not have a God's perspective, and the plot relies entirely on her sixth sense from years of work.
The male protagonist can tell at a glance that he is a Far Puppy~
Several of my favorite authors don't update, so I have to cook my own meals.
Borrowed the leather case from Queen Chunyuan, Bai Yueguang's ancestor
Shuangjie
The system can transfer money quickly. I am still considering whether to remove the original CP.
The main point of this article: the role of the heroine
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Reader comments
The writing style is indeed very immature, and the heroine's thinking is very nonsensical. One moment she wants to be nice to the assassin team and begs them not to attack her, and the next second she is venomous and sarcastic towards them. Being venomous doesn't mean that she is sarcastic and sarcastic when she wants to be nice to people. That's not called being venomous, that's called stupidity.
I have read the first few chapters so far and found a lot of unnecessary memes. I came here to read fan fiction, not to read a collection of hot memes. Occasionally, there is no problem with a joke, but several memes in a chapter are unfavorable.
Every time the heroine says something, she adds a bracket after it, as if what the heroine really wants to express. What does the author want to express when she writes this? Let readers understand that the heroine is actually beautiful on the inside? Completely unnecessary, meaningless, and inexplicable [eating melon]
Speechless, a little annoying to read. The first part feels fine, but the second part doesn't feel like it was written by a single person.
The writing style is indeed very immature, and the heroine's thinking is very nonsensical. One moment she wants to be nice to the assassin team and begs them not to attack her, and the next second she is venomous and sarcastic towards them. Being venomous doesn't mean that she is sarcastic and sarcastic when she wants to be nice to people. That's not called being venomous, that's called stupidity. I have read the first few chapters so far and found a lot of unnecessary memes. I came here to read fan fiction, not to read a collection of hot memes. Occasionally, there is no problem with a joke, but several memes in a chapter are unfavorable. Every time the heroine says something, she adds a bracket after it, as if what the heroine really wants to express. What does the author want to express when she writes this? Let readers understand that the heroine is actually beautiful on the inside? Completely unnecessary, meaningless, and inexplicable [eating melon]
Speechless, a little annoying to read. The first part feels fine, but the second part doesn't feel like it was written by a single person.