[The writing is still rough]
[The wording may not come across clearly. Readers can look things up on Baidu.]
The heroine doesn't have an all-knowing perspective. She pieces the plot together using the instincts she has developed over years of work.
You can tell at a glance that the male lead is a little puppy from afar, right~
Several authors I like haven't updated, so I have to cook for myself.
Borrowed the persona of Empress Chun Yuan, the original White Moonlight.
[Both leads are each other's only ones]
The System pays out quickly. I'm still deciding whether to break up the original pairing.
The main appeal of this story: the heroine's character-play scenes.
Forced [gap moe] ✔ Note that it's forced ✔
The writing style is indeed very immature, and the heroine's thinking is very nonsensical. One moment she wants to be nice to the assassin team and begs them not to attack her, and the next second she is venomous and sarcastic towards them. Being venomous doesn't mean that she is sarcastic and sarcastic when she wants to be nice to people. That's not called being venomous, that's called stupidity. I have read the first few chapters so far and found a lot of unnecessary memes. I came here to read fan fiction, not to read a collection of hot memes. Occasionally, there is no problem with a joke, but several memes in a chapter are unfavorable. Every time the heroine says something, she adds a bracket after it, as if what the heroine really wants to express. What does the author want to express when she writes this? Let readers understand that the heroine is actually beautiful on the inside? Completely unnecessary, meaningless, and inexplicable 🍉
Speechless, a little annoying to read. The first part feels fine, but the second part doesn't feel like it was written by a single person.