[Sand sculpture x double male x double clean x main subject]
Shou: Shiyuan vs Attack: Xuanyuan Yi (yi)
Shi Yuan was originally a refugee from an interstellar garbage planet, until he dug up a spherical robot claiming to be the system in a garbage dump, and his fate was completely changed - he was killed on the spot by a collapsed garbage mountain.
"A low-level system like mine can only take away the host's consciousness. You died in time." The system praised the lucky person in the system space.
Shi Yuan's fist hardened.
,,——
"???"
:",……"
"!"
I don't know whether it was a leakage of electricity from the system casing or it was in disrepair. After the system was blown away, Shiyuan also fell to the ground and lost consciousness as if he was electrocuted.
Wake up again——
Reader comments
It's tied now. I really like the setting of Shou. If you don't accept it, you will do it. But when it's time to recognize the current situation, you will show weakness and wait for the opportunity. However, there is always a slight sense of frustration throughout the whole story, especially after the on-hook system is launched. At the beginning, the first few chapters gave me the feeling that the two strong forces in the apocalypse were evenly matched. However, because of a potion, the attacking side became absolutely strong, and the receiving side had no chance of winning against the attacking side. . . However, the emotional line seems to be that I am attracted to her quickly, and I have found a delicate balance, so I can barely accept it. Then there is this system, which is forced to follow a "plot" type, with electric shock punishment. I saw a little bit of it from the copywriting, but I didn't expect it to be so frustrating. The previous system had a low IQ and could be fooled into looking for loopholes. It was a bit forced, but there were ways to avoid it. This guy went on vacation not long ago and changed to an on-hook system. Why are you just being tortured when there is no loophole at all? You are being punished for OOC, you are being punished when you are trying to find loopholes in tasks and perfunctory tasks, and even when you are forced to adopt two children and give names, you are being punished if the names you give do not meet the "system standards", what is this? Is this reasonable?
The emotional line is simmered slowly, there is no inexplicable favorable impression or backlash at the beginning, and every interaction is full of tension.
The interaction between the system and the two protagonists, Shou, is very gratifying. Shou's character is well-shaped. In the later stage, the character does not feel fragmented or collapsed. Shou's behavior is really novel and not cliché. The other characters have their own cuteness.
The infrastructure part is very enjoyable to watch, the overall flow is smooth, the jokes interspersed are not embarrassing, and the humor elements are balanced.
All in all, it's a novel that I highly recommend reading, but I didn't get enough of it!
It's great. I haven't seen two people who are so evenly matched in a long time. Moreover, the protagonist's dislike level is actually lower than the protagonist's attack. I'm really looking forward to how they will fall in love in the future. Moreover, our Shi Yuan is so funny that I laughed to death.
Nice! The anti-routine plot + extremely funny writing style. Behind everything that seems forced, there is actually the protagonist's unique resistance. The two people's gradual development from confrontation to "revolutionary friendship" feels particularly funny. The plot is relatively short and concise, and the ending is not completely together (?). In the second half, I always feel that the plot of brother chasing his wife is just for sex, but overall it is good to watch and worth it [I learned it]
It's so good, wow, author, you must have a good rest. If you're thirsty, add more. If you're hungry, add more. If you're sleepy, add more. If you're tired, add more.
It looked good, but the ending caught me a little off guard.
It's finished, but the ending was a bit too hasty.
But it's pretty good-looking [Adoration]
It's quite special. In other time travels, it's all hidden. The protagonist here directly reveals his cards and uses the system together. Not bad
Super pretty, not much to say
Beautiful and wonderful
Very beautiful, very beautiful [like] [like]
Good, good, good, good
I can't do it anymore. I didn't realize how long I was in the game before I revealed my identity. I can't do it anymore.
I prefer to look at the front and a little bit in the middle.
So far, it's pretty good for me.
It's great that we are saved against the road couple [shy][shy][shy]
Pure cheating without a trace of intrigue. The protagonist sticks to his heart from beginning to end and only eats and fucks the male protagonist. There is no OOC, which makes it more enjoyable to watch.
Not bad, not bad, hahaha, pretty good-looking
It's very beautiful and the emotions are not obtrusive. Not a noob.
It's tied now. I really like the setting of Shou. If you don't accept it, you will do it. But when it's time to recognize the current situation, you will show weakness and wait for the opportunity. However, there is always a slight sense of frustration throughout the whole story, especially after the on-hook system is launched. At the beginning, the first few chapters gave me the feeling that the two strong forces in the apocalypse were evenly matched. However, because of a potion, the attacking side became absolutely strong, and the receiving side had no chance of winning against the attacking side. . . However, the emotional line seems to be that I am attracted to her quickly, and I have found a delicate balance, so I can barely accept it. Then there is this system, which is forced to follow a "plot" type, with electric shock punishment. I saw a little bit of it from the copywriting, but I didn't expect it to be so frustrating. The previous system had a low IQ and could be fooled into looking for loopholes. It was a bit forced, but there were ways to avoid it. This guy went on vacation not long ago and changed to an on-hook system. Why are you just being tortured when there is no loophole at all? You are being punished for OOC, you are being punished when you are trying to find loopholes in tasks and perfunctory tasks, and even when you are forced to adopt two children and give names, you are being punished if the names you give do not meet the "system standards", what is this? Is this reasonable?
The emotional line is simmered slowly, there is no inexplicable favorable impression or backlash at the beginning, and every interaction is full of tension. The interaction between the system and the two protagonists, Shou, is very gratifying. Shou's character is well-shaped. In the later stage, the character does not feel fragmented or collapsed. Shou's behavior is really novel and not cliché. The other characters have their own cuteness. The infrastructure part is very enjoyable to watch, the overall flow is smooth, the jokes interspersed are not embarrassing, and the humor elements are balanced. All in all, it's a novel that I highly recommend reading, but I didn't get enough of it!
It's great. I haven't seen two people who are so evenly matched in a long time. Moreover, the protagonist's dislike level is actually lower than the protagonist's attack. I'm really looking forward to how they will fall in love in the future. Moreover, our Shi Yuan is so funny that I laughed to death.
Nice! The anti-routine plot + extremely funny writing style. Behind everything that seems forced, there is actually the protagonist's unique resistance. The two people's gradual development from confrontation to "revolutionary friendship" feels particularly funny. The plot is relatively short and concise, and the ending is not completely together (?). In the second half, I always feel that the plot of brother chasing his wife is just for sex, but overall it is good to watch and worth it [I learned it]
It's so good, wow, author, you must have a good rest. If you're thirsty, add more. If you're hungry, add more. If you're sleepy, add more. If you're tired, add more.
It looked good, but the ending caught me a little off guard.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It's really beautiful [send heartfelt message]
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [laughing][laughing][laughing]
It's finished, but the ending was a bit too hasty. But it's pretty good-looking [Adoration]
It's quite special. In other time travels, it's all hidden. The protagonist here directly reveals his cards and uses the system together. Not bad
Super pretty, not much to say
Beautiful and wonderful
Very beautiful, very beautiful [like] [like]
Good, good, good, good
I can't do it anymore. I didn't realize how long I was in the game before I revealed my identity. I can't do it anymore.
I prefer to look at the front and a little bit in the middle.
So far, it's pretty good for me.
It's great that we are saved against the road couple [shy][shy][shy]
Pure cheating without a trace of intrigue. The protagonist sticks to his heart from beginning to end and only eats and fucks the male protagonist. There is no OOC, which makes it more enjoyable to watch.
Not bad, not bad, hahaha, pretty good-looking
It's very beautiful and the emotions are not obtrusive. Not a noob.