The Ability User in the Classroom of the Elite

Let's talk about the shortcomings first; there is an obvious classic cliche plot, which makes me feel a little bit annoyed, but I can accept it, and then the character of the protagonist makes me feel a bit out of touch, but I can accept it. After all, I have read tens of thousands of novels, and I can tell at a glance which novel is pure shit, so the author of this novel still has a lot of room for improvement! 🤔👍 Advantages: The author is a newbie and has a lot of room for improvement! [Code to hold][code to hold][get it][get it] Evaluation; medium [smile] 👍

The muttering to himself was heard, and then Fei Bo thought about something after hearing it. Is it necessary to screen readers at the beginning?

Reprinted from "French Ball", which users on Bilibili never surrendered - an episode with polarizing reviews. People who think it's good will think it's very deep, while others think it's too boring. I belong to the former. The following is a personal interpretation. At the end of the conversation, where most people would probably just ask what that thing is, Brian asks you if you want to talk about it. He saw the psychology of Diaozi that the psychiatrist did not see: Diaozi not only longed for others to understand him, but also longed for loneliness (loneliness brought him self-identity and a sense of specialness). This is also an important reason why he does not want to expose his true self to others. Brian understood him and let him make his own choice. In a sense, the dog gives the dumpling the right to stay alone: ​​If you want my company, I will give it to you; if you want to be alone, I will let you. So having Brian around but still feeling lonely does not conflict with the fact that Brian knows him very well and spends wonderful moments and days and nights with him. "People in this world try their best to hold me. But you are different; your love is greater than theirs. You set me free." The maturity of this relationship model can only be highlighted with the comparison of the previous psychiatrist's outcome. On the other hand, Brian has obviously thought deeply about this gifted child with a unique setting, and understands that there must be a dark corner in Stewie's heart that is unknown to everyone, and that he will have intense self-conflicts due to the surrounding environment and himself. Xuanhui believes that this is Stewie's fate. Brian respects and tolerates Stewie's personality, thoughts and twists in his character, allowing the child's inner conflicts and entanglements to flourish in the silent night. He chose to let Stewie struggle to grow into himself, while he perched next to Dumpling, waiting to fall asleep or for the chick to hatch. In this way, the crew not only successfully created the image of a high-minded genius, but also gave the dog dumpling friendship a unique, intriguing and tender complexity and depth. Brian doesn't have much of a role in this episode, but he's still considered a very clever dog dumpling.

The progress of the plot is acceptable, but the transition between first-person and third-person is a bit stiff. It is recommended to make slight modifications. If it is written by Xiaobai, the third-person can always be used. Secondly, the dialogue is too long. It can use less assistance with the actions and demeanor of the characters, otherwise the psychology of the characters cannot be clearly understood, and sometimes one-to-one correspondence is required. As a fanfic, other characters are relatively full-bodied, but the protagonist is slightly inferior. You can focus on some typical plots to pave the way for the protagonist, otherwise the sense of substitution will be slightly poor. If you are a novice, it is not recommended to stray too far from the original work. Match things to the situation, use scenery to set off emotions, and emotions satisfy people. This is just my personal opinion, five stars are provided, I hope the author can support me

It's very beautiful. Finally, I have a good-looking fan.

It looks really cool, I hope it doesn't stop updating. In fact, it's understandable that the male protagonist's IQ is a little low, because the male protagonist himself is not an elite. Others think that the male protagonist is an elite because of what the male protagonist has done, which makes them think.

This is one of the better fanfics I've seen

It looks good, and I personally feel it is the best secondary creation in terms of practical teaching.

The writing needs more practice, but it's still good.

The work is awesome, and it must be written according to this quality. Could the other female protagonist be Banliu? It's really cool.