Two Souls in One Body, Knocking on Heaven's Gate with One Hand

Please read it later. I have read chapter seventy-two so far. The setting is very interesting and you can watch it. It's a pity that the portrayal of the protagonist is a bit poor. The Emperor of Gui: Gui should be sinister and ruthless, and the Human Emperor should have the domineering and mighty power of an emperor, which can't be seen from the protagonist at all. For example: The clan brother had a murderous hatred for his original body. You traveled through time and took over his body, tolerated it without killing him, and even took him to practice. Do you think this looks like the Lord of Deception or the Emperor of Humanity? There are other little poisonous points that I won't go into details about. Let's see how many times the protagonist's luck can help him.

Probably because he quickly accepted his post-travel identity at the beginning, and after being rescued by two women, he quickly accepted himself as this person. This is no different from looking at the indigenous people. If you kill someone at this moment, you are lucky enough to know that someone else has buried a huge opportunity, which will be revealed later. Then, by virtue of his status as a servant, he went to a place similar to the sect to study, and soon got rid of his status as a servant and gained freedom. Then, through one body and two souls, I gained the opportunity to obtain a spiritual path and teacher that are rare at present. Then he returned to his hometown to retaliate with kindness and let the sixth brother who indirectly killed the original body follow him to cultivate immortality. On the way, another unexpected opportunity happened to me. (In the process of getting the chance that would be buried, I entered the space of chance. At the beginning, an old man said that he was a remnant soul and wanted to give him a chance and asked him to tell him his house number so that he could tell him to get the chance. Here I ask everyone what do you think the protagonist did? I almost gave the house number. Do I need to know your house number to get a chance? Don't want to either. Fortunately, the old man thought that everyone thought so, so he teamed up with someone and asked that person to act as a good guy to stop him, pretend to be a bad guy, and trick the protagonist into exposing his position through the mechanism. This time the protagonist discovered it instead. Otherwise, everyone will really be wiped out) Then on the way back, someone pretended to be cool, and he was slapped in the face again, and the remnant soul of the ancient horse followed him. Then it was very boring to go through all the previous opportunities, start a very boring practice, and compete. During this period, everyone knew that he had an incredible opportunity, but they just didn't point it out. (His opportunities were truly extraordinary in the early stage, and many people in this small local sect had great opportunities) Get what they need through the protagonist without breaking the point. The protagonist is also a good person, and anyone who has a good relationship with him will help him. It is also very reciprocal. My current feeling is that there are too few contradictions. Without contradictions, there would be no strong interest. I wonder if anyone understands what I mean. It feels like all the opportunities along the way are fed into the protagonist's mouth. It's so easy. It would be more interesting if there were more twists and turns in this process.

Just On Tomato is definitely a good book. 1. The setting is novel. It has the feeling of combining Chinese immortality with Western sequences. It has creatively developed its own Tao system, but it also has shortcomings. The combat power system is imperfect, there are too few spells, and the fighting is not careful enough. It gives me a feeling of reading a fantasy novel. The setting attracts me to read. The author should learn more ways to describe fighting and design more spells. 2. The protagonist has a hook, but it is just right, and it does not affect the viewing experience, and there is no stallion part. Advice to authors: 1. The author may not be good at writing emotional dramas. There are parents, but he doesn't describe them too much. There are currently more than 200 pictures and it seems that there is no female protagonist. My suggestion is that it is better to have a female protagonist in this kind of fantasy novel. My personal suggestion is that the female protagonist is Mai Dao, who can help measure luck. 2. The author may not have perfected his own system. He only designed some mainline system rules and did not have complete corresponding techniques. I suggest that he should write more fully and should not design too many channels. This design would be cumbersome in the past. 3. The main plot is a bit unclear. At present, one is hoping that the Bai family will become a prominent family, and the other is hoping to eliminate all the night spies, which cannot be achieved in a short time. Some small goals should be designed to guide the writing and attract readers, preferably goals that can be completed within a hundred chapters. 4. I haven't seen any foreshadowing so far, and I feel that the context is a bit confusing. I suggest you write an outline before creating. Finally: This book has potential. If you want to make more money from novels and continue on, my suggestion is to improve the system, write an outline, and learn writing skills. If it was written out of boredom while working, or if it was written by a student party, the book would probably end around 400, because that's what tomatoes are. Come on There are still some minor problems, such as not being too brutal, the pace being too slow, etc.

It's so beautiful. It's a very novel subject matter. I hope the author will update it soon and make it longer. Come on.

It's okay. The protagonist didn't feel very smart or stubborn at first, but I got tired of watching the particularly stubborn characters, so I decided to treat it as a realistic story. The golden finger wasn't too strong, and the protagonist didn't start to feel strong until the 200th chapter. However, the author's setting of these directions in the world view and plot is okay, which makes me interested in continuing to watch. There is no sense of AI, so I will give it a good review. Supplement, the protagonist is indeed a holy mother. Chapter 219, the child steals the offerings and causes the monster to capsize the boat. The protagonist's reaction is to attack the person who wants to give the child to the monster to save a boatload of people. It's outrageous. When I read Chapter 200, I thought it was pretty interesting. But after I clicked the praise button, I was stunned 😵‍💫

Is the rating too low? The quality of the goods is very good, exactly as described by the seller. I am very satisfied. I really like it. It completely exceeded my expectations. The delivery speed is very fast. The packaging is very careful and tight. The logistics company has a good service attitude and the delivery speed is very fast. I am very satisfied with my purchase.

It's good that the protagonist has a way to hide a soul, otherwise a powerful one might be exposed. It's a double cultivation in one body, and the protagonist is quite benevolent and righteous. If you like this kind of article, you can read it...

The content is pretty good, the techniques are a little interesting, and the writing is not bad either. But there are many poisonous points, such as taking care of the enemy's down-and-out family members in Chapter 35 (the other side did not know that he killed them), such as the Huo family in Chapter 37 who dared to kill the Sanxian Mountain disciples in the middle of the night but did not dare to persecute the Sanxian Mountain disciples' family members.

Not bad, come on, author! Just don't let go of the poisonous points at the front, it looks good so far I said it, but I changed it to one star later without explaining it. Isn't it a little more poisonous as I said before?????

To be honest, it's not 5*, but the current rating is too low, so it's overkill. Personal score is 8.5-9 Points. It describes a rich and realistic world. The various opportunities are interesting but not too over the top. The author strives to have as many opportunities as possible while keeping the combat power intact. What is rare is that the protagonist is created with a [human touch] instead of blindly upgrading, fighting monsters, repaying aunts, masters, families, and sects. There is repayment of kindness and revenge. The pace has obviously accelerated in the latest. I hope the author can complete this fantasy + weird story well.