Beneath the Black Sea

I have only watched a little bit, but the current problem is that the plot is not very volatile, and the meaning I want to express is too obvious, especially the existence of that frame. The purpose of criminal investigation writing is to make readers think and figure it out, rather than directly telling readers what others think. But as a new author, it's still very good. I'm just giving you a suggestion. Moreover, the setting of the two male protagonists in this novel is also very novel. You can try to make the buttons more reversible, because I haven't finished the first case yet, but it is easy to guess the murderer's motive.

Come on~ The writing is not perfect and has flaws, but it is already great that I can persist in writing half a million words. I hope I can write better and better.

Ok ok ok