Traveling Through Western Fantasy: Landing and Buying the Female BOSS

Let's talk about the evaluation first: Plot 5/10 (poisonous at the beginning, gentle and dull at the end) Writing 6/10 (skilled author, good writing style) Refreshing 3/10 (Weak protagonist, maybe the turning point hasn't been reached yet) Updated 7/10 (two chapters updated daily, the balance point between maintaining books and catching up on updates) Perception: Explosive and toxic, but I have a special defense against Western fantasy and light novels, so I reluctantly continued reading. Some people may think that my evaluation is too high. As a bookworm with 10 years of reading experience, I can only say that some novels are not worth reading if you only read the title and introduction. They can attract you to see the poisonous points, which proves that they are not without merit. Plot: I can only say that the latter part is better than the first one, but the protagonist is still a weakling. He barely has an emotional line to lubricate the content, and with my special defense attribute, it's not too bad. Writing style: Better than plot handling, passable level.

I felt that it was a reference, but it was totally OK. The Korean version was extremely uncomfortable to read on a computer, and the manga was also difficult to comment on. Personally, I think the protagonist of this book is better written, and each heroine has a completely different setting. I like this book the most among the Western fantasy games in the Tomato game. Come on, author.

First of all, I would like to thank everyone for your support and thank you all for your compliments. Thank you for your patience in reading the story I wrote. This is a great encouragement and support to me! While thanking you for giving me the motivation, I am also very sorry for the dissatisfaction of some of your feedback. Although I have made major changes based on some suggestions, there may still be some deficiencies, which I will accept. I will continue to listen and revise again in the future! Just like what is said in the book, I have been committed to writing a story that leads to an "end", so I promise! Unless there is force majeure, there will never be any cuts in half or eunuchs. Thank you again for your support and criticism!

This book is not a cool read in the traditional sense, and requires some thinking. The author's writing is delicate, and the combat and environment descriptions are very good. But sometimes the reader knows even less information than the protagonist in the book. However, the author will lay a lot of foreshadowings, and if you look carefully, you can actually deduce the subsequent plot. Obviously, this model won't have a wide audience on 🍅, but I personally like it. To refute the poisonous points mentioned by other comments, that is, the protagonist clearly knew that Alice was the final boss and did not kill her or stay away from her at the beginning, but stayed with her; or why he did not hug the third princess's thigh but hugged Alice's thigh. First of all, the protagonist initially knew that he would be killed by Alice if he did not change anything, so he wanted to live. But it is definitely impossible to kill her. Alice's remnants and herself are very strong. It is impossible to kill her, but she will die faster. Then why not stay away from or drive her away? A person who suddenly traveled to a different world as a noble would be almost impossible to survive without relying on the power of his family. Instead, he relied on the power of his family to obtain information, enjoy life, and become stronger quickly. If you drive her away, the plot will be completely out of control, and the protagonist will be found and killed later in the revenge. By leaving her behind, you can also know her general movements and speculate on the plot. Let's talk about why he doesn't hug the third princess' thigh. The protagonist has made it clear that he doesn't want to join any force and just wants to live. I think this is understandable. Not everyone who travels to a different world wants to create their own world. Lying down is also an option. And the third princess will eventually conflict with Alice, and it will be difficult for either of them to survive. Finally, I would like to talk about the shortcomings of this novel. That means there is still a little less information for readers. The author likes to add some secrets or little stories after the end of a story. Only by reading this can you know the full story. However, only two chapters are updated a day, which makes it confusing for most readers, making it easy for them to keep reading or even quit. Therefore, it is recommended that the author share more information earlier, such as using the protagonist's guesses to give readers a direction to explore/think about the subsequent plot.

It's still pretty good. The only thing that's a little uncomfortable is that the female protagonist steals the male protagonist's things and then "feels distressed" when she feeds the male protagonist the things she robbed. I feel everything else is good. The male protagonist's character is a little twisted, but he can be said to be a little reckless, and his IQ fluctuates, but as far as I'm concerned, it's acceptable. The main reason is that there are too few tomato fantasy novels, and apart from being a lord, it's all about farming, so it's boring to watch too many of them. I actually liked the male protagonist's relatively low positioning at the beginning. I'm not a person with a big personality, so many of the male protagonist's actions seemed reasonable to me, and maybe more in line with me, so it was easier to fit in.

It's okay. Don't be misled by those who have only read a few chapters. Although the plot has flaws, it is generally good. The main character is not Long Aotian, but a growth and planning type. After watching it, I like Lelina better. Lelina's character is more three-dimensional. I don't know if it is because I have played too many games. When I see her, I always think of the second lady Coletta [laughs]. Also, the heroine Alice has so few scenes.

It's a pretty good Western fantasy novel. The character of the protagonist is quite to my liking. In terms of the plot, it's quite relaxed (maybe?) In terms of the emotional drama, the obvious one is probably Lerina, and Hills also has a bit of a crush on this aspect. Change the ratingi

It's very good, the writing is quite solid, but the pace is indeed a bit fast. If it continues like this, it will probably be finished in a few hundred pictures. I hope it can be slower, or that the plot can be extended a little longer, but there is one last problem. Don't play the "Zhi Cun Challenge" every time, and stop writing at the important point [smile]

Every character is very unique and shrewd. There is no such thing as a brainless villain. This is a well-conceived and thoughtful work in the Western fantasy genre. The protagonist is also serious, not dull, not frivolous, not lewd, and has a normal personality. This is really rare in novels, and it is definitely a masterpiece It is really a big mistake to bring the characters from the novel to the real world. The characters in the novel are fictitious in the story. If you send Alice into reality with the protagonist, then let me ask you about the meaning of their existence when the characters in the novel are here. You also mentioned multiple heroines. Do you want to bring Lerina, Hills, and the little princess all over? The meaning of their existence is that they have their own identity in the novel, and the heroine is not alone and can come through to accompany the protagonist because she loves the hero. Then they each have their own identity and meaning in the story, which is too separate. From the moment Alice and the protagonist come to reality together, starting from this chapter, the reading is very fragmented, so I can only lower the score.

The writing style is okay. If you are bored, I recommend you to read it. Currently, there are only two that affect your viewing: First, you may see familiar characters in it, giving you the feeling that you have seen something similar. The second is the foreshadowing at the beginning that the male protagonist knows so much about the game, but if you really look at it, you will find that the male protagonist has hardly any opportunities because of it. If you can accept it, it's still recommended. Alas, the further you go, the more similar it feels to a comic I've read. Maybe it's just my subjective feeling.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. The author's writing skills are absolutely top-notch among Tomatoes. The creation of each character is very typical and complex, perfectly showing the unpredictable psychological changes of the characters in reality. It is simply what happens in reality.

It is actually a new novel, so I must support it. I have seen similar protagonists, and the story setting is not innovative. It is in line with Tomato's usual reading style, but the narrative is very smooth. At present, the foreshadowing is easier for discerning viewers to see. After looking at the main controversial areas, if you want to lay out a hidden line, it is better to reveal the arrangement of the protagonist so as not to be depressing. Of course, judging from the sudden dispute, the current plot is not as simple as readers think. In short, I am looking forward to future development.

I am honored to witness the birth of this book. I swear with my more than 1,000 hours of reading time, this Western fantasy novel is definitely a rare good book for Tomato🀄️, but the villain is still a bit stupid at the moment, and the offline is sloppy. I hope it can be improved. (Some suggestions: It's okay to have more female protagonists, but it's recommended not to have more than 4, otherwise it will be confusing and difficult to remember, and it will be a test for the author)

I read a lot of comments about Toxic in the comments section. After reading it, I feel that this book is still very good. You need to read it slowly. The plot rhythm, including the characterization, is very good and reasonable. If you want to read it as a refreshing novel, this book is not suitable for you. You can read it as a traditional Western fantasy.

To judge objectively, this book probably deserves 4 stars. The author has a unique description of the environment and characters, and the content is full of Western characteristics. There is such a sentence in the article, which is quite amazing, "As a judge, you only care about pronouncing the verdict. God's work should really be left to you." Of course, there are many words like this. That said, the book also has many shortcomings, that is, the "setting" is not very logical, and it seems a bit uncomfortable. But overall it's quite acceptable to me. The current rating is undoubtedly low.

The overall plot is very solid, with no obvious flaws, but there is still room for optimization in the emotional description of the characters. The third princess has too few emotional lines, so it seems a bit forced to have a crush on the protagonist. Lelina is the best love line written, but unfortunately, because it is pushed into the main plot, Lelina's active pursuit is more like teasing. Besides, I don't understand whether Blake knows that Lelina is not just an exchange of interests for him, but a relationship between a man and a woman. I think he should know, after all, which exchange of interests can kiss the corners of the lips? There is not much space to describe the overall plot and emotional line of the character Alice, but contrary to expectations, this character is not so lovable compared to Lerina. On the one hand, her personality is too cold, and the author's emotional description of her is too restrained, so she seems to be a stubborn ice. To be honest, when Alice forcibly kissed Blake at the end, I still didn't understand whether it was the love between a man and a woman, or the anger at Blake's disregard for her life. Hills is just average, with not much foreshadowing and no heavy description. The author is promoting the emotional line in the main line, not the plot in the emotional line, so this book may not be suitable for those who want to read a sweet story. There aren't many emotional lines, but it's enough to watch. Regarding the takeover, I can only say that you do not have the ability to understand the plot. You will only think with your lower body. To put it simply, you are only acting on your own behalf, but you are not involved in the plot. Overall, I don't think it is a poisonous or green article as mentioned in the comment section. On the contrary, I think if the author optimizes the emotional line, it will be a rare book. At least it is a masterpiece that I can't put down. Until the end, the male protagonist didn't really go to bat, so it's not so much a multi-female protagonist as it is a multi-emotional line. I don't know how it will be written in the future.

Generally speaking, it is one of the top novels among Western fantasy novels. Although there are some bad points, it does not affect the overall impression personally. The character creation is still good, and the writing skills are also very good. Although it is updated twice a day on average, and sometimes one or three times randomly, as long as it is not unfinished and can be written smoothly according to the current writing style, it will be a favorite of mine [laughs] The male protagonist's IQ is still online. The main reason is that sometimes the combat power is not very clear. After a while, it becomes a bit foggy. In 🍅, I think it is very good and worth watching.

I have to say, it was beyond my expectation. From the name, it can be seen that the author is somewhat imitating the college survival record of a third-rate villain. Similar shadows can be seen in some settings and characters, but the theme is still unique to the author, and both the writing and the plot are above standard. It's a very good western fantasy light novel in Tomato, but now its score is low.

The main reason is that it is difficult to find this kind of heroine. In other novels, I always feel that I fall in love with the hero for no reason. The heroine is aloof and can tolerate it without being a nymphomaniac. It is very good. Some parts in the early stage are really not good, but the plot later is quite interesting, and what I think is good is the male protagonist himself. He does not have the silly inner monologue that most time-travel male protagonists have nowadays. This alone is difficult to find in Tomato.

It's a very interesting Western fantasy novel, and the heroine is well portrayed. The only shortcoming is that the male protagonist always seems to be a little passive when getting along with several female protagonists? Also, the multi-line narrative in the holy city in the middle is a bit messy, making it difficult to understand. Some holes such as the keel of the Imperial City chapter have not been filled in yet. But another thing that bothers me is the scene where the male protagonist first meets Swart and kills the Orochi. I always thought that later in the plot the male protagonist would know that it was Alice who killed the Orochi, but in the end it was not mentioned. I feel like the author forgot. Overall, it is an excellent Western fantasy novel with multiple female protagonists. The four extras are all very well written. Personally, I think the most exciting one is Alice's extra. The plot is very attractive and the emotions are on point. It's a pity that we didn't see the more direct Shura Field and Tang [Thinking] in the end.

OK, I have finally finished reading this book after a long time, and I still feel that it is not finished. A journey across destiny has not ended in my heart for a long time. Frankly speaking, the story is a little green in the early stages, the rhythm occasionally lags, and the writing style and settings also have a bit of unpolished immaturity, but it is this beginning that lays the groundwork that people can't help but follow. And the further you read the middle and later stages, the more you can feel the author's intention and growth - the writing becomes smoother and more comfortable, the plot line is complete and clear, many foreshadowings and pitfalls laid in the early stage are filled in one by one, the world view becomes more three-dimensional, and the logic becomes more closed-loop. This is a story in which the protagonist is unwilling to be trapped by fate and tries his best to break the established ending and rewrite fate. There is no ease of cheating all the way, only struggle and perseverance step by step. Even if there are flaws in the early stage, it cannot cover up the excitement in the middle and later stages. The complete story, the perfect recycling of foreshadowing, and the passionate and heart-wrenching fateful struggle are enough to make this reading journey worthwhile. I still feel reluctant to leave after reading it, which is probably the best recognition of a work.

The flavor of the light novel is very strong, and I like the recently updated chapters very much!

In my opinion, this book is worth reading. If I were to rate this book, it would be between 7.9 And 8.7. Maybe I won't recommend it to others, but every time I see this book, I feel that it is a well-written book. Plot: There are four heroines in total, Ai Susuo and the eldest lady. (Forgive me for staying up late reading and forgetting the eldest lady's name) Regarding the ending of this plot, I actually have a little regret. In my imagination, the protagonist should go through several world restarts, ranging from hope to depression to despair, and finally bursting with hope to arouse his emotions. It shouldn't be like now, finding a way to exile Mei in the second restart. Of course, if the author wants to transition to the sugar-making part earlier, that's fine too (no offense: I think the ending of a book by another author, namely Salted Fish's Weird Pharmacist, is quite good.) However, after solving the crisis in the finale, the author continued to write the story of the future and the female protagonist, which I think is very good. In essence, I still like to sprinkle sugar, like to see some supplements at the end, and like to see how the protagonist and supporting characters will develop at a certain point in the future. Not to mention the ending, the rest of the plot in this book is pretty good. It can explain things clearly and express emotions in writing. That's it. If anyone sees this review, you can just read it and don't worry about it. This book is not a very good book, it is just a well-written and okay book. Of course, everyone has their own opinions and feels that there are some pitfalls that they cannot resist, so it is better to give up as soon as possible.

I have been following the update of this novel since chapter 50. During this period, I did not insist on reading it several times. When it reached more than 100 chapters, I always felt that the novel would be discontinued. I was quite panicked. Fortunately, the author persisted. The main plot is very tight. Even if there are flaws in the early stage, the author did not make much changes to pave the way for the subsequent plot. It can be seen that the author is very attentive, which is rare in Tomato. Each heroine's story after the main plot is also very interesting. I always feel that it sublimates the emotional line of the novel, makes the characters come alive, and leaves a lot of regrets. Every character has flesh and blood, Alice who pursues the meaning of life, Lerina who wears a mask all the time, Hills who is innocent and considerate of others, Sophia who has a kind heart, Ordiles who pursues truth and is calm, Mirantis who is tired of long life and loses his love, Cordelus who keeps his promise, the great magician Meyer who keeps trying to change the [ending] and is forgotten by time, the protagonist Blake who aims to survive. Percival, as well as the original protagonists, the Four Heroes and many other memorable characters, is a rare novel. Thank you, the author, for allowing me to read this excellent novel. It is the only novel I have finished reading in the past year or so. I can't tell you how happy I am, but just a little regretful. Blake. Percival also has his own story. I wonder if I will encounter similar novels in the future. I wish the author can write more excellent works.

If you can accept the slow pace, this book is indeed worth reading. The characters' emotions and relationships are portrayed very delicately, and the main characters are also very three-dimensional. I feel that the author expressed the negative feedback from the early comments through words in the middle and later stages of the book. The real emotions also made the middle and later stages of the book richer. It can be seen that it was written with care. To use the words in the article, "You have done a good job."

I have read a lot of Western fantasy novels, and I have also read a lot of novels about nobles and slaves and maids. The plot is relatively rigorous, the logic is effortless, and the emotional line progresses slowly. The fighting feels average, and the protagonist's strength improvement is not handled well. He is very weak in the early stage and becomes stronger inexplicably. In the absence of comparison in combat power, even in the later stage, the protagonist's strength is already top-notch (personal visual inspection is second only to Mayer), but it does not affect the perception. The ending is also perfect, and overall it's pretty good. If you haven't watched the Western fantasy genre, it's worth watching. The main text is now complete, so don't worry about the eunuchs.

It's really good to watch, but although there are many female protagonists, the emotional line is pushed too slowly. Judging from the latest plot, it doesn't matter if you go beyond kissing and hugging the female protagonists. I think it is necessary to deepen the connection with the world. Otherwise, it would feel a bit empty just to save the world for righteousness. Also, the male protagonist cannot be allowed to take the initiative, otherwise the reasons will not be justified. Secondly, the novel has a strong human touch, and the descriptions are quite delicate. It can be regarded as a group portrait.

The second five-star rating I've given so far is that there haven't been any big flaws in the plot so far, and the previous pitfalls have been filled in little by little. The emotional line is relatively clear and reasonable, not the rough and unreasonable emotional line unique to Tomatoes. The background setting is also very interesting. The writing is relatively excellent, the plot is well-connected, and there are very few plots (this is especially valuable in Tomatoes). The above are the advantages. The disadvantage is that the update is a bit slow, but the willingness to give up production for quality is also worthy of recognition. I don't hope that this good novel will give up quality because of production in the future.

It's been a long time since I've written a book review, and today's review is just a coincidence. I rated it 5 points. The rhythm and clues of the whole book are pretty good. I'm not saying that like the previous Western fantasy novels, if you meet the villain, you will immediately or in advance arrange the world-defying skills for the protagonist. In this book, the rhythm and skills are very normal. There is no feeling that you are awesome all at once. It is the kind that makes people feel the protagonist is changing step by step. It's strong, but it's not a one-stop novel. It's just that the number of words is a bit short, but everyone is welcome to look at the character development. It doesn't feel like it's just for the sake of writing.

One of the best Western fantasy books in recent years, let me talk about what I like first: First of all, the rhythm of the book. Although there are not many grand battles, the commendable thing is that the emotional and plot lines are very clearly written, and there are few riddles, which can make people feel the process of the relationship between the male and female protagonists warming up. In fact, it is indeed irresponsible to make a promise easily before the final outcome comes, and the male protagonist's calm temperament is obvious to all in those careful plans, so it is understandable that the emotional line is pushed slowly. My favorite character among the four heroines is Hills, and Alice is the best described. The most impressive thing about the latter was the kiss that stopped the male protagonist from self-destructive thoughts, but I think that section could have been written more passionately. Looking at the whole book, Alice in the original timeline only showed her passion that one time, so it could have been more intense. There is also the tacit understanding that the male protagonists get along with each other after returning from the if line, and everything is unspoken. The male protagonist's combat power is very vague throughout the book. I feel that the author is weakening the perception of the male protagonist as a savior, which is quite good. But don't make it too blurry, so it looks more lifelike and less epic.