Punishing: Gray Raven: A Corleodor from the Start

Author, have you ever considered Chaos? After all, after the Chief Dimension is upgraded, theoretically the Chairman on every timeline is the low-level projection of Chaos. But as a real role, we should be similar to a rule maker (Clow employee) Will arbitrarily changing the timeline attract attention? 🤔

Not bad, not bad. Zhan Shuang is 99% rare.

Personally, I feel pretty good, I hope I don't die 👍

When I first looked at the title, I thought it was the author's sudden idea and then wrote it down. However, after reading it, I felt that the author still had his own considerations and put in a lot of effort. He also learned how to write like Zhan Shuang, who runs hand in hand into the abyss together.

One of the few with Lao Ke as the protagonist, I hope Lao Ke doesn't die 🤦

There are one of the few Zhan Shuang fan fictions out there. Even if it doesn't have the hard science fiction of the original plot, as long as the logic of the plot is appropriate enough and the plot is attractive enough, it will definitely become a hit.

I don't understand the part between Corredor and Ann. Why did it suddenly change? I'm currently reading chapter 40. Is Corredor's lover Ann? Can someone tell me? After reading Chapter 48, I seemed to confirm that Corredor's target was An. But I really don't understand why I suddenly fell in love with it while I was reading it. I was blinded when I saw it. There was no emotional foreshadowing and it always felt a bit baffling 🤔 But this book is still pretty good 😄

Just because there are so few Zhanshuang novels out there, I'll give you five stars.

Very interesting. This is the first time I have found a book with Corredor as the main character.

Although the ingredients are complex, it is a rare novel about the two-part war Pamish, so I still have to support it.