In a CODM "Blitz Mode" duel, Tian Jinpeng succeeded in winning the chicken with his superb operation.
But just as the joy of victory surged into his heart, a crack in time and space swallowed him up instantly.
When Tian Jinpeng woke up leisurely, he found that he was actually in the Haizhou Prisoner of War Camp in 1940. In a desperate situation, he accidentally activated the "Mercenary System of All Worlds".
After activating the system for the first time, Tian Jinpeng obtained a "modified version of the rogue warrior".
However, Tian Jinpeng knew that he could not act rashly in a prisoner-of-war camp, so he began to observe secretly, and finally figured out the layout of the prisoner-of-war camp.
Just as the Japanese held a grand celebration banquet, Tian Jinpeng seized this golden opportunity, so he said to the prisoners of war beside him: "We have endured the humiliation for a long time, and today is the time to rise up and regain our freedom!"
These words instantly dispelled the haze in the hearts of the prisoners of war, and they all decided to fight side by side with Tian Jinpeng.
The battle suddenly started, and the "rogue warrior" spit out fiery tongues of fire under Tian Jinpeng's control.
The grenade roared through the night sky and hit the Japanese group with precision.
The Japanese commander Yamamoto Ichiro looked at the scene in front of him, and his drunkenness was instantly shocked and disappeared.
"You ignorant ants, how dare you challenge the majesty of the locust army! Kill me!"
However, the Japanese soldiers under him were already retreating steadily amid shouts of killing.
Finally, Tian Jinpeng stared at Yamamoto Ichiro and said: "This is the 'rogue warrior'. It is not only a reminder to the invaders, but also the beginning of your nightmare!"
Reader comments
It's hard for people of this age to understand this if you directly expose yourself. It doesn't matter if you explain it to them slowly. I feel that your exaggeration is too far-fetched.
If you write like this, it's actually best to go it alone. The total number of CODs in the past generations can completely dominate during World War II. Technology crushing does not count Activision's black technology, and you don't have to be able to suppress combat power or anything like that.
Let's talk about a war zone, or a mission battlefield. A person can definitely fight to support fighting. He has a chip and breath to restore blood, and health outside of armor. As long as he is not killed instantly, you can say that he is an invincible little strongman. That's not counting some special mechanisms. The indiscriminate killing reward can also be regarded as a dimensionality reduction blow.
There is also omnidirectional movement. Even the mobility of COD19 is more terrifying than that of a normal person, even COD Superman can't be exaggerated.
That's all I have to say about your setting, and what follows is my evaluation of your novel.
The origin and system of the protagonist are explained at the beginning of the novel. Even if it suppresses the combat power, there is no big problem. The biggest taboo at the beginning is that the first three chapters are all long-winded and tormenting the protagonist. There is no excitement or interest at all, and you can't write too abstractly to retain readers.
I read your beginning, and I actually hope that you will write about the protagonist being besieged, and then rely on scoundrels to make a comeback, and then build his own power. It's okay to integrate the world view of the TV series, but don't force it. You just lick your face and force it together in the early stage, which seems very cheap. I think many readers think so too.
That's all I have to say, hope to see better works from you in the future.
No, buddy, I thought you wanted to gain influence by yourself, summon weapons and skills for missions, etc. But what does the whole simulation mean? The plot drags, average
It's hard for people of this age to understand this if you directly expose yourself. It doesn't matter if you explain it to them slowly. I feel that your exaggeration is too far-fetched. If you write like this, it's actually best to go it alone. The total number of CODs in the past generations can completely dominate during World War II. Technology crushing does not count Activision's black technology, and you don't have to be able to suppress combat power or anything like that. Let's talk about a war zone, or a mission battlefield. A person can definitely fight to support fighting. He has a chip and breath to restore blood, and health outside of armor. As long as he is not killed instantly, you can say that he is an invincible little strongman. That's not counting some special mechanisms. The indiscriminate killing reward can also be regarded as a dimensionality reduction blow. There is also omnidirectional movement. Even the mobility of COD19 is more terrifying than that of a normal person, even COD Superman can't be exaggerated. That's all I have to say about your setting, and what follows is my evaluation of your novel. The origin and system of the protagonist are explained at the beginning of the novel. Even if it suppresses the combat power, there is no big problem. The biggest taboo at the beginning is that the first three chapters are all long-winded and tormenting the protagonist. There is no excitement or interest at all, and you can't write too abstractly to retain readers. I read your beginning, and I actually hope that you will write about the protagonist being besieged, and then rely on scoundrels to make a comeback, and then build his own power. It's okay to integrate the world view of the TV series, but don't force it. You just lick your face and force it together in the early stage, which seems very cheap. I think many readers think so too. That's all I have to say, hope to see better works from you in the future.
No, buddy, I thought you wanted to gain influence by yourself, summon weapons and skills for missions, etc. But what does the whole simulation mean? The plot drags, average