The Quick-Traveling Villain Is a Heartthrob Who Disguises Herself as a Man!

Saw Chapter 81. The heroine is very good, cool, fun-loving, powerful god, I like the heroine character. Especially the no cp is very good, the heroine can have countless dream girls every minute. However, the characteristic of dressing up as a man is not outstanding, and she likes not to reveal her identity as a woman dressing up as a man. But I personally don't see the female protagonist's unique side. Sometimes I feel that it's a bit redundant for a woman to dress up as a man, and it's better to write about a boy directly. First, the second world is quite boring. Personally, I think that there is not much content, it is just the daily life of the heroine. Only in the two subsequent worlds, the heroine has a greater participation. The author should change the introduction. After seeing the introduction, I will lose the desire to read. If I wasn't bored, I wouldn't have discovered this book.

It's okay. The plot is okay, very good, and very novel. But the writing style is a bit immature. You can add some action tone when writing the protagonist's speech. There is too little description of the overall environment in the article. You can appropriately intersperse some environmental descriptions and other descriptions in the article. For more advanced, you can read more novel articles with good writing to learn from it, but the overall writing is very good, and it is very good [send heart] [send heart]

It's good-looking, the heroine is not tempted, and there are no flaws when women disguise themselves as men, unlike other women who disguise themselves as men who always get caught because of trivial things.

The author's writing is super beautiful and the writing style is super good, which can fully reflect the personality charm of the heroine. I really like the strong heroine [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss], the author must persist, we will all cheer for you [adoration][adoration][adoration]

It would be great if every story could tell what happened after Jiang Du left, that is, add one extra chapter I've finished reading it. There are so few stories. It's not enough to read.

Oh my god, it's so well written. The author is great. I will always follow your [adoration][adoration][admiration]. I love reading this novel so much.

😍😍😍😍Extremely delicious, shocking and delicious

Looks great, cheers!

I like the heroine's character

The author's writing is very beautiful

Not bad, pretty goodദ്ദി（•˕•マ.ᐟ

Good looking

I think it's okay

Hk looks good, the heroine will not fall in love with anyone