Isn't He Cultivating Immortality? Why Is It Bound to a Naruto System?

The author doesn't want to write that the sect cannot protect his sister's body, and then the protagonist directly deceives the world and takes away the body and then defectes to attract hatred, right?

Personally, I feel that anyone who has the courage to write a book is worthy of praise. The author is a student, and the writing looks good so far. The characters are more vivid, the Naruto characters are more realistic, and Goldfinger is not too bad. I have the desire to read it. Come on, I hope the author can stick to it and give the story an ending.

A very awesome novel, with a lot of "poison" at the beginning. After reading six chapters, I was almost poisoned. The opening was abandoned and I wrote 4 cards. What's the concept? The system has a human nature. It starts with reporting wealth, and then it becomes a mess. Well, I also use a system to describe the future plot. I can't even explain how to say it, because I frown when I think about it, and it's difficult to describe it. Features: Lots of descriptions, even the dogs on the roadside have to be described, lots of dialogues, I could chat all day long. The story is novel, the plot is special, and the blocking points are special. Of course, these are all my personal thoughts and can be understood as exaggerated descriptions. A new author wants to write a good story, but he doesn't know how to write it. It gives the impression that he can write whatever he wants, so the beginning is a lot of poison. (Personal Thoughts) There are ways to do this. Start directly from Chapter 10, or read the first 10 chapters directly and then sort out your brain. I read it again if I find it interesting. I haven't read a book that starts with a rock for a while, so I find it particularly interesting and the book is also very unique. This is just based on my opinion that I have only read 10 chapters, which shows how shocking this book is to me.

It's pretty cool. Did the author forget about the Kusanagi sword? It's been a long time since I've seen it used. Then when did you rebel against your relatives? I feel like it should be well written Here are a few suggestions 1. It is recommended that you use your free time to write an outline of important plots. 2. Can you take a look or start a poll to see if you want to write a heroine for the protagonist who can betray her relatives and leave? 3. Will the protagonist return to his original family or will he be included in the story of betrayal and separation? 4. After the male protagonist leaves, maybe we can write a relationship network where the younger sister is in the light and the older brother is in the dark? Is the character of my sister when she grows up a bit colder? (Character can be voted on) But this person who loves sweets can write about dessert [Thinking] 5.🦌Mingxuan, can you please stop writing yellow hair for sister Qingli [crying] It's okay to be dependent on the male protagonist all the time [crying] [crying] If you want to write it, can you put it in the back and open a separate chapter about the relationship between the sister and start a series with the brother [thinking] (this suggestion is purely selfish [shy]) Follow-up review coming The author is a writer who benefits people [shy] and has suggestions that everyone should kick [like] By then we will be the second generation of this book [Like] Good book🉑 Come on, author, readers, I have to go to work and start reading books first [Cool]

As a novice author, this is already very good, but the child of destiny was seconds away from birth, and the law of heaven was indifferent. He was resurrected and suffered a catastrophe. It really shocked me. Although it has a lot of poison, it is worth watching.

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I have never encountered such a beautiful novel. Well, I used to read all those cool articles. This author writes very well.

I finally found a book about cultivating immortals and Hokage. Can the author not want to betray his relatives? I'm afraid of [petrification]

Yes, I like this Sasuke very much. Author, you can't stop updating, otherwise I'll treat you to Amaterasu.

The writing is not bad, the two worlds, and the combination of multi-system settings are quite novel and attractive to me. The only drawback is that the description of the duel field settings is a bit messy and could be simplified a little. (You have to keep writing, author, just think it's for me and update the novel)

In fact, the plots of the world of Naruto are pretty much the same. There is no need to keep describing the world of Naruto. However, it seems that after changing the plot of Naruto, it is estimated that the passages of the world of Naruto are also indispensable.

For now, I just want to give it three stars. It was a bit boring when I upgraded earlier, but I had the patience to read on. Because I knew this was just foreshadowing, I held back when I saw the massacre of the village, and the characters were well written and vivid. The main character is also well written. Until I saw that Lu's strategy system was the protagonist's sister, which caused my perception to plummet. Now I feel all the time that my sister will be run away by a cow in the subsequent plot. When your only relative (you can say it) grows up, Huang Mao will point at your nose and say: Hey, Lao Deng, if you dare not let me go with him, I will chop you to death. This scenario appears. To be honest, I don't object to my sister falling in love, but at least it's not such a purposeful one. I just read this today. To be honest, I saw in the article that there will be other time-travelers, and I am actually looking forward to it, because this will not let the protagonist dominate alone. It is the kind of equal-strength duel where you have a plug-in, sorry, I also have a plug-in. I've seen this kind of story in "Naruto Supreme" (it should be called this, it was a novel from a long time ago). It has a really strong look and feel once it's written. If you know how to use the Eight Gates Dungeon, I can too. You can't do it here, but I can do it here. It feels like a battle of wits. But this is all about stealing homes and gaining favorability. I didn't expect that. But overall I quite like this novel, but I was wondering whether to give it up at one point, because my sister was taken away by a bully, which is a plot that I didn't like to see. (But maybe some people like this, and it's hard to agree with everyone.) But I always feel that the author wanted to write that kind of dark text but didn't grasp the intensity. I haven't finished watching it either, after all, I just watched it today, and I only saw the part where the protagonist was taken out to watch a puppet show after practicing in seclusion for three months. I don't know if there will be a plot about my sister getting bullied. If there is, please let the author tell me, and I won't follow it up. I also hope that the more the author writes, the more exciting the story becomes. I still like this type of book, otherwise I wouldn't write so many reviews. [Face covering] @

It's beautiful, the characters are very delicate, and the plot is interesting and sweet. I hope the author will become more articulate!

From what I've read so far, it's well written. It's not like other brainless ones that can't stop breathing in seconds. Personally, I think the current world's cultivation system can be combined with the Naruto world's cultivation system. I'll continue to pay attention. Come on. From your writing, at least what I can see is that you are very good in liberal arts. Although you are not in a key high school, you still have to work hard to get out of the mud without being stained.

I have read a lot of books about Naruto traveling through time and cultivating immortality. Generally speaking, the plot of this book is not obtrusive, and the writing and fighting are adequate. However, the only problem that has not escaped most common problems on the market is the innovation of plot and writing. In fact, this book has great potential without these two innovations.

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Come on, Haji Fei, I started reading it from the time you updated it to Chapter 13 You guys must study hard to become the first college student in the village. Come on, this is youth! ! !

It's pretty good so far, but there are other system owners. If the plot is not handled well, it will be very uncomfortable to watch. I hope the author pays attention to it when writing. Is it still a system problem ꒰>< ꒱This shouldn't be done consciously

Chapter 111, there won't be any betrayal or separation in the future, no, author [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

@ The author, can you consider letting the protagonist's system swallow up other system upgrades? Then a world will be opened randomly, and after the duel field is upgraded, the person who opens the world can be randomly matched.

Will the protagonist meet his biological parents in the future?

There are a lot of things in the early stages of this book that are a bit complicated. I didn't look at the back, but it's not poisonous. There are systems, people from other worlds, and other system owners are generally pretty good

At first I thought it was a mindless post, but I didn't expect it to start out very warmly.

The author will update soon, I hope the author can stick to it. Obito and I just want to eat meatballs and we will definitely support you [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Very good! ! ! ! ! I haven't seen such a good novel in a long time.

This book is indeed very good. It is the first time that I have seen the two worlds connected, and it is reasonable. As for what the author said sometimes his writing is not very good, I don't think it is true. I am not exaggerating, but his writing is really good.

I really recommend it. It's the best book on Naruto + Cultivation that I've read so far (personally). The plot is very coherent and the author's writing is also good. You can continue reading if you skip some plots in the middle.

It's unexpectedly good-looking. It mainly focuses on the world of immortality and the world of ninja as a supplement. The characters and the original characters have almost no flaws. The author is also happy to interact and communicate about the follow-up plot. I recommend it with my real name, Senju Tobirama.

In fact, the author is from the village [Shocked] Did you know? You should know