The Mysterious Immortal Path

Sometimes we need to pay attention to the rationality of the sentences, and the other supporting characters should be made smarter, but it can still be seen. I hope the author can stick to it.

Overall, it's pretty good. The logic of the chapters is quite smooth. I hope you can pay attention to some pitfalls to be filled in the future, and the protagonist should be set more clearly.

Very exciting, come on