Menling

It looks good, but I just hope that the pace is slower and more daily, the weird power arrangements are not too fast, and there is no need to cultivate immortality later on. It is okay to fall in love, as long as it is reasonable. It looks very good so far. You can continue to watch it. The details need to be polished. It will be a good work. There are also too few storylines and highlights in Sister Qian, and they need to be strengthened. For each character, write down their characteristics in a specific way. Just don't make the character look like a character. I'm optimistic about you.

I have read three copies, and I haven't found any major problems so far. It's just that the copy is a bit short, but the completion level is not low.

Very interesting, good luck to the author!

Why do you still touch the porcelain sledgehammer? [Exploration]

Okay, okay, I just hope it will be scarier later [laughing evilly]

The second copy begins to abstract

The dungeon was fast-paced and quite good, but it was a pity that it ended hastily.

It looks good, this kind of unlimited streaming is recommended

Well written, the horror is endless

I like this kind of book with a strong folk flavor. The author should update it soon. It is worth reading.