Ye Luoli Fell into Muten Pavilion at the Beginning

It's really beautiful. The teacher's writing style is very delicate and humorous. Everyone's portrayal is lifelike. Among them, my favorite is Sister Dog CP! It's really super fragrant! The heroine can be either a dog or a cat, but I think the cat sculpture is the best, it's super fragrant! [Adoration]

The first Ye Luoli fan novel that I particularly like! The author's writing is very smooth, and most importantly, he makes the heroine very charming! ! ! ! ! ! All the other characters are very charming. I feel that the characters in many novels are very thin, but the image of the heroine is really vivid! ! She is innocent, optimistic and cheerful, but not stupid, arrogant or "holy lady". I really like it! ! ! ! It's been a long time since I met a heroine who suits my taste so well. The author must keep updating. Don't let it be unfinished and don't stop updating. Thank you, thank you, thank you [cry][cry][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

I originally wanted to give it four stars, but I decided not to give it a try considering how enthusiastic it was. Let's talk about the advantages first ①The heroine is lively, cute, and familiar with herself. She can please others for her own purposes. She has a lot of interests, such as cooking, growing vegetables, painting, and making handcrafts. She is also very smart, good at making jokes, and thinking outside the box. ② A reasonable heartthrob, everyone interacts with the heroine, both men and women take advantage of each other, and all CPs are eliminated. ③The plot character setting is also more in line with the development setting, and the time span is quite fast. ④I also like my heroine [admiration] Disadvantages: ① There are too many words that insult women, except for the two or so words that insult men [face covering] used at the beginning. ② There are a lot of typos, some will be corrected, and some are still there, but the author has worked hard to update them, so they can be ignored. ③I don't really like some of the jokes played by the heroine, such as the Game of Kings (I heard this game is rn), and the heroine transforming into a "male character" and talking about "big baby" (?) ④I don't like some language descriptions very much, some analogies

When I first read the introduction, I saw that the heroine was weak and aggrieved at the beginning, so she quit. Later, there was a shortage of books. Then I saw this book that many people recommended, so I read it again. Then after reading it, I found that the heroine did feel a little weak and a little aggrieved, but she got better later on, and basically there was no such phenomenon. Xiang, the more I watch it, the better it looks. I hope there will be more about Mutiange in the future. The plot of Mutiange in the previous episode is indeed very interesting. Although the plot of Lingxi Pavilion has a little bit of Mutiange interspersed in it, I still feel that the plot of Mutiange is more to my liking than Lingxi Pavilion. I hope there will be more extra stories about Mutiange in the future.

✨It's really beautiful\(//∇//)\I haven't finished watching it yet! Prepare to save up and watch! It can be seen that the author is very careful in shaping the heroine Nuan Nuan! He is a unique and warm individual! The same goes for other fairies! ! I will analyze the character of each fairy and not be OOC! ! This is really great! ! Really attentive! ! The writing is humorous and easy to understand! I like Yuan Nuan very much, "Three points of water and one yuan, Nuan Yang's warmth! A very good person! Only such excellent qualities can attract people worthy of love! The logic is very smooth." Long live the author! ! ! ! 😍 Score! ! !

I really like it, the author's emotional writing is very delicate. If you don't understand some parts, the author will also say, "It's so gentle." I just hope there will be more updates [please update] He has a stupid mouth and can't boast anything good. , I can only say that it is funny, emotionally delicate, and some of the foreshadowings are very well written. I always like the heroine's character [Sending my heart]

It's really beautiful. This is the best book I've ever read. Yuanyuan really seems to have been given a soul. It's very vivid and the plot is very natural. And I feel like I really like what Da Da said. It feels like it's enlightening, and it's not that It's a brainless pet. Each character has his or her own personality. There is no golden finger, because Yuanyuan is a very good person, just like the little sun. I particularly like what Da Da said, Yuanyuan is her own golden finger. Reading this book is so heart-warming! ! ! [Sending heart] [Admiration] Why didn't I meet him earlier [Almost crying]

I don't dare to get a five-star fanfiction score. If the score is too high, it will be removed from the shelves, and if it is too low, it will not be conducive to the development of this book. But I have to say that the author's writing is very charming, and the heroine in the novel is also a very good person. It's really beautiful(๑•̀ㅁ•́ฅ)

It's so good-looking, so good-looking, so good-looking, the characters are full and three-dimensional, the author is cute and interesting, respects the characters, and the foreshadowing is okay. The ups and downs of the plot are so memorable that I can't write it down anymore. Anyway, it's good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, I've watched it. There are not 100 Ye Luoli fanfics, but there are 50. Well, I have read many of the same type of funny novels and those who first encountered the tenth level. I think this one is the best among so many fanfics. For example, Ye Luoli's fanfics are number one in my mind, among the top three among all fanfics, and among the top ten tomato novels! ! ! !

Some things shouldn't be rated so low, at least 8.5 Or higher. It's a very good heartthrob setting. The characters are well written. The heroine is very likable and very funny. I hope the author can open a Lily spin-off [shy]

I really like Yuanyuan, she is really cute, kind, and sincere. The content she wrote after that was also very interesting, and I was very happy to read it. It is not like adding any jokes just to be funny, but the jokes added in the content are very natural. When I read it, the corner of my mouth didn't even turn down. It is really beautiful. What I like the most is the way Yuanyuan gets along with everyone, it just feels like It's very warm, especially the way of cooking and getting along with everyone while eating and playing games. I really recommend it to everyone. Come and take a look. It would be a pity not to. There is also Yuanyuan. She is weak at the beginning, but she gets stronger and stronger. I really like this point. Those who have watched it before have a system or people who know that it is Ye Luoli's world, but I don't like that. Systematic ones, I think systematic ones are boring, and they are all holy fairies and so on, but in the end they can't beat anyone. It's outrageous to just use the name of a saint-level fairy and then be unable to beat others. Sometimes I think it's good not to know that it's Ye Luoli's world, because there are some things that you don't know and it's a lot more convenient. Yuanyuan has I think it's great that the ability can protect oneself. There are some fanfics. After there is a system around me, for example, after the plot of Pang Zun, the system disappears, and Pang Zun forces him to love him. To be honest, I feel very aggrieved. I think no matter who you are, you must have the ability to protect yourself, instead of relying on others to save yourself. I really like this book, it is very interesting, and I recommend it. [Love]

It is undeniable that she is very beautiful. The heroine's personality is very attractive to me. She is gentle and strong, but also ambitious. She clearly knows what she wants. She is very smart. The emotional plot is very delicate, with a lot of foreshadowing. She is a growth-oriented heroine. The author Baobao also has a very good character. He is a very cute and sincere baby. Baobao's writing style is very good. I like Baobao and the characters written by Baobao. I hope more people will read Baobao's books. (I would like to ask if Bao Bao plans to write a novel on the theme of Tomb Raider Notes. I simply like this subject, and I also like Bao Bao's writing style, and this subject is also very popular. Of course, if you can't pretend that I didn't say it, don't be burdened, I love you, baby ૮(˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)ა)

So pretty! We are already looking forward to the time when the protagonist group arrives and the seal is lifted. Our heroine's baby is really too cute! ! To be honest, this article is quite clear. Although it is a refreshing breeze in Ye Luoli, it is quite beautiful. The author will update quickly [shy]

The writing is very good, the beginning and the end are closed, the ending is open, everyone is good, Yuan Nuan is really a good person, I won't write too much, I'm afraid I will spoil it for you, Yuan Nuan wants to be happy with her mother-in-law, I... Well, I can't describe the feeling, I have been reading this book since the author opened it, the writing is very good, I don't have to complain about this, there is nothing to say, Yuan Nuan, please be happy, always live happily and lucky in the sunshine, I really like you Everyone, please read this book, and may happiness always come to Xiao Hei and Xiao Bai.

Come on! ! ! ! Super pretty! ! ! ! ! The heroine is so interesting! ! ! ! Like! ! ! [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like]

This book is really good. It is one of the many Ye Luoli fanfics that I have rarely read and updated. The author's writing is really, really, really, really good, and very, very nice. This Bai Yueguang should be the heroine [love] [love] [love] [love]

Beautiful is no longer enough to describe it. The author's great portrayal of Yuan Nuan really illuminates others like a little sun, but at the same time, her inner tenacity is also amazing. Every time you turn to the next page, you will find another side of her. This kind of awakening makes people want to explore further. At the same time, the author's understanding of the characters in Ye Zhong is also very clear and not rigid. It seems that through the author's pen, I can really see how the girl with bright eyes like a little sun lives in a strange world. The author writes really well! I will always follow you my dear author! (*￣3￣)╭♡

Super pretty! It is very healing. The author writes very well and is very detailed. Some of them have explanations, so that readers can understand the article better and be immersed in it. This is one of the best fanfics I have ever seen! There has been a book shortage recently. I finally found something to my liking even during the holidays, but it was gone [crying] [crying] [crying] Finally, it's really good to read. I like Xiao Huan, I like this book, and I like the author greatly.

It's so good. Watch it as much as you like. The baby really feels like a living person. This little sun heroine is so cool! ! ! The logic is very good, but it's just a little bit lacking. You can keep it up and read it again. It's considered top level in Ye Luoli.

This is one of the few novels I have read by Ye Luoli that suits my taste. The characters in it are also very distinct, I also like the heroine design, and there is almost no OOC. Please update! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The author's writing style is exquisite, and the characters are deeply portrayed. Each character is lifelike. The emotions in the novel are sincere and the writing is delicate. Every detail is handled very skillfully, which makes people feel the author's intention. Moreover, each character has its own charm. It's great! ! !

It's super beautiful. I like it very much. Nuan Nuan is really a person worthy of being loved. I gave 4 stars because I want to maximize the points. What if the 5 stars are folded? Very beautiful! Yuan Nuan is one of the most lovable female protagonists and of course the author is also very cute! Among so many Ye Luoli fanfics, this one is my favorite. The story logic is very good, not too blunt or embarrassing, and the character design is very good in my opinion. Highly recommended! !

I really like this book. The heroine of this book gives me the impression that she is a very vivid character. The character is very full and she can be regarded as a heartthrob (a heroine who is gentle and sweet), and some of them are quite funny. The heroine is not strong at the beginning, but a growth type, very smart, like a black-hearted little rice dumpling. I like it very much, and she is also the kind of person who must be punished. It is very good-looking. I recommend everyone to read this book. It's really not a bad thing [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

It's really good to read. Nuannuan warms everyone like a little sun. This book doesn't discredit anyone, but I personally prefer Muten Pavilion. When can I go to Muten Pavilion [Blow kiss]

How should I put it? I stopped reading when I had a premonition that it would end in just a few chapters because I didn't want to face the end. The end came too fast and I felt like I had to be separated from the characters in the book for a long time. In the end, I read it because I was too curious about the ending and it had to have a beginning and an end. The ending was so sad for me [I almost cried]. It's not that the ending is not good, it just feels different from what I imagined. I look forward to the author's extra chapters and new books coming soon [please update]

I think the heroine written by the author has her own character, and she will not purely please the protagonist group or target the protagonist group. I like the author's style very much and hope that the author can stick to it.

This is actually quite new. There is no dark protagonist group (I'm tired of seeing too many dark protagonist groups). The heroine is also a very heart-warming person. Yes, um, it's just very good-looking. Come and take a look, um, yes. It's over! Nice. Will the author publish a new book? I love it! Very beautiful

I hope we all have the strong core of "becoming ourselves" that Nuan Nuan possesses in the novel. Teacher, I will keep chasing your novel until you finish it! ! ! Don't interrupt the update.

The writing is super good. It is the most comfortable Ye Luoli fanfic I have ever read. The characters are also very good. I feel like I have really read Ye Luoli seriously. The heroine's personality is also great. Come on DaDa (≧∇≦)/

This book is worth reading! ! It is not a traditional dodder flower... The heroine has an interesting setting and slowly becomes stronger. There is no plot to abuse the heroine. Pure love surrounds the pure monkey. It is not a heroine. In short, the heroine's character is likeable, smart, interesting, gentle and redeeming, making her a true heartthrob! ! Both men and women like her. I have fallen in love with Yuanyuan🥺🩷

Wow, it's so exciting. I love reading it. The writing is spot on and the characters are very vivid. Each character is his own protagonist and each character has his own story line. It's not bad. Author, don't be too proud and keep working hard. , I love you so much. I really like the heroine in it.