The national survival system is coming! He abandoned him before he could react!
[Ding ~ The system is being peeled off...]
"... No?? Auntie Deng~"
Zhang Qiang was petrified and thought he was getting better!
As a result, the system ran away!
After being eaten up by the main world system, he went home to find his mother. Before leaving, he gave Zhang Qiang a glimmer of hope.
[Extracting in progress... The extraction was successful.
Connected...
Thank you for your dedication to the system!
Zhang Qiang brought a glimmer of hope to the struggling Zhang Qiang. Relying on the skills given by the system, he exchanged skills with his "self" in the parallel world, and gradually became a boss with his team members. At the same time, he fed back his "self" in the other world, making them all bosses in this world.
Reader comments
(Quasi-middle-top) Blue LV5, 25.5 Points/50 points
First impression 150%: sense of substitution 2, attraction 3
Basic settings 75%: plug-in 3, setting 2
Content 125%: Writing 3, Creativity 3
Structure 75%: Rhythm 2, Main Line 2⭐️
Details 75%: Character 3, Logic 2
Balance Penalty: None
Highlights: Creativity
Poisonous points: At the beginning, it is not friendly to listening to books and has too many dialogues.
Feelings: I can imagine that you want to write about that feeling, but the writing skills are not good enough, and the character of the protagonist does not match the content you wrote. I guess it should be the feeling of self-improvement, but in the beginning you felt that you were going to the extreme, and in the later period it became ridiculous, and it felt like a big conflict.
Calculation process: 1.5×5+1.25×6+0.75×14=25.5 Points
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After reading it, it's not bad. Pig's trotters don't have a girl, and pig's trotters have no system. There is a little golden finger to contact the self in another world (similar to the original work of parallel time and space), but the name is the same, the personality is different, and the golden finger is of no use, so let's provide some supplies to pig's trotters! The meat sticks at the beginning, the first aid kit at the back, and the ginseng that can increase all attributes by year. The higher the year, the more attributes. Some electronic equipment for entertainment, I got a basic knife skills at the back, and then there is nothing. But in the future, I should get superpowers with the help of the apocalyptic plane. Instead, the pig's feet provide gold to the other world, fruit food that improves attributes, etc. There are currently five female protagonists, and only one is on base. Pig's Foot was very miserable in the early stage. He only had a little bit of luck. He only had 2 bottles of water in the two-day blind box. Fortunately, he got the help of the No. 1 Heroine who had 11 points of luck, and thus earned the first pot of gold. Only at this time did Pig's Foot get the golden finger. Then he gets stronger and stronger and overtakes him.
This is an excellent survival novel. The protagonist is not invincible like other survival novels and can pull away from other survivors. Instead, he starts off as a loser. He slowly develops after getting Goldfinger. Although he is not invincible, it is unexpectedly good-looking. The protagonist and other supporting characters get along well. Both sides support each other and can relieve psychological pressure. Goldfinger is not over the standard and will not collapse at every turn. It is quite good. If you stick to it, it will be a good book with a score of 9 or above.
Those who like harem stories are in luck, but it's a pity that as a parallel world, I just talked about it for a few strokes. It should be developed in multiple worlds, focusing on each world to create a group portrait, and the harem can be used as a auxiliary line.
Awesome, it doesn't matter whether you seek survival or not, there must be more chatting in the world
It's okay, but the disadvantage is that he is now a big boss and has no other sources of information. The news has always come from Shen Meng
Very well written, support it! ! !
Good👍🏻, there was a bit of a problem with the rhythm at the beginning, but later on the author's grasp of the rhythm and the writing style have been greatly improved, it can be said to be good.
The writing is good, but of course there are shortcomings, but the flaws do not outweigh the flaws. Overall, it is still a novel worth reading.
(Quasi-middle-top) Blue LV5, 25.5 Points/50 points First impression 150%: sense of substitution 2, attraction 3 Basic settings 75%: plug-in 3, setting 2 Content 125%: Writing 3, Creativity 3 Structure 75%: Rhythm 2, Main Line 2⭐️ Details 75%: Character 3, Logic 2 Balance Penalty: None Highlights: Creativity Poisonous points: At the beginning, it is not friendly to listening to books and has too many dialogues. Feelings: I can imagine that you want to write about that feeling, but the writing skills are not good enough, and the character of the protagonist does not match the content you wrote. I guess it should be the feeling of self-improvement, but in the beginning you felt that you were going to the extreme, and in the later period it became ridiculous, and it felt like a big conflict. Calculation process: 1.5×5+1.25×6+0.75×14=25.5 Points ───────────────────
After reading it, it's not bad. Pig's trotters don't have a girl, and pig's trotters have no system. There is a little golden finger to contact the self in another world (similar to the original work of parallel time and space), but the name is the same, the personality is different, and the golden finger is of no use, so let's provide some supplies to pig's trotters! The meat sticks at the beginning, the first aid kit at the back, and the ginseng that can increase all attributes by year. The higher the year, the more attributes. Some electronic equipment for entertainment, I got a basic knife skills at the back, and then there is nothing. But in the future, I should get superpowers with the help of the apocalyptic plane. Instead, the pig's feet provide gold to the other world, fruit food that improves attributes, etc. There are currently five female protagonists, and only one is on base. Pig's Foot was very miserable in the early stage. He only had a little bit of luck. He only had 2 bottles of water in the two-day blind box. Fortunately, he got the help of the No. 1 Heroine who had 11 points of luck, and thus earned the first pot of gold. Only at this time did Pig's Foot get the golden finger. Then he gets stronger and stronger and overtakes him.
This is an excellent survival novel. The protagonist is not invincible like other survival novels and can pull away from other survivors. Instead, he starts off as a loser. He slowly develops after getting Goldfinger. Although he is not invincible, it is unexpectedly good-looking. The protagonist and other supporting characters get along well. Both sides support each other and can relieve psychological pressure. Goldfinger is not over the standard and will not collapse at every turn. It is quite good. If you stick to it, it will be a good book with a score of 9 or above.
Those who like harem stories are in luck, but it's a pity that as a parallel world, I just talked about it for a few strokes. It should be developed in multiple worlds, focusing on each world to create a group portrait, and the harem can be used as a auxiliary line.
Awesome, it doesn't matter whether you seek survival or not, there must be more chatting in the world
It's okay, but the disadvantage is that he is now a big boss and has no other sources of information. The news has always come from Shen Meng
Very well written, support it! ! !
Good👍🏻, there was a bit of a problem with the rhythm at the beginning, but later on the author's grasp of the rhythm and the writing style have been greatly improved, it can be said to be good.
The writing is good, but of course there are shortcomings, but the flaws do not outweigh the flaws. Overall, it is still a novel worth reading.
Excellent survival book
It looks good and the logic is very good.