Journey to the West: I'm a Monkey from Flower-Fruit Mountain

(Upper and lower) five-star purple, level 12 Sense of substitution A, attraction B, plug-in C, setting B, writing style A, imagination B, rhythm B, main line B, character design A, logic B Balance Penalty: None Personal feelings: It's good in every aspect and innovative, but it feels a bit uninteresting (it's a narrative style, this kind of book is suitable for reading to the end), and its appeal is relatively low. #The following comments are for personal reference only #My account cannot leave negative reviews. Negative reviews will be invisible. Anyway, they will all be given five stars. #The overall rating increases, and there will be no negative comments in the comments. 1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria•11th Edition (1) Evaluation items (for personal reference only) 1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view. 2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading. 3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative. 4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency. 5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot? 6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line. 7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low? 8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal. 9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive? 10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition. 11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (2) Evaluation grouping (for personal reference only) 1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction 2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings 3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation 4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center 5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense (3) Ratings of recommended evaluation items (for personal reference only) 1. Specially recommended S level (+4 points) 2. Recommended Grade A (+2 points) 3. Acceptable Level B (+1 point) 4. No points deducted, Grade C (0 points) 5. Level D is not recommended (-1 point) 6. Personally unacceptable level E (-3 points) 2. Rating of online articles (1) Shangshang•Online articles that I personally can't find fault with Standard: No B rating, attractiveness S 1. Five-star red+: 5 items S, 5 items A 2. Five-star red: 2 items S, 8 items A 3. Five-star red-: 10 items A (2) Excellent Internet articles that I personally feel most people like Criteria: Rare and fine book, no C-grade rating, appeal A 1. Five-star Orange+: Total score is 18 or above, and 8 items are A or above 2. Five-star orange: and the total score is level 16 or above 3. Five-star orange-: 5 items A (3) Shang Xia·Personally feel high-level online articles Standard: common high-quality books, no D-level evaluation, attractiveness B 1. Five-star Purple+: Level 14 or above, and 4 A or above 2. Five-star purple: Level 10 or above 3. Five-star purple-: 8 items B (4) Intermediate to upper level • Internet articles that I feel are of a high standard Standard: Personal recommendation, no E-rating, attractiveness C 1. Five-star blue+: total score is 6 or above, and 6 items are B or above 2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above 3. Five-star green: 4 items B (5) Medium •Standard online articles that I personally like Standard: no poisonous spots, no bright spots, attractiveness C 1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above, and no E-level evaluation 2. Four-star green: total score is level 1 or above 3. Four-star white: 10 items C (6) The next one: Standard online articles that I don't like 1. Samsung White+: Level 0, and no E-level evaluation 2. Samsung white: -1 level 3. Samsung White-:-Level 2 (7) Middle and lower two • Internet articles that I personally do not recommend 1. Two-star white+: level -3 2. Two-star white: -Level 4 (8) Middle and lower three • Internet articles that are unacceptable to individuals 1. Two-star gray+: -5 levels 2. Two-star gray: -level 6 3. Two-star gray-:-Level 7 (9) There is a lot of room for improvement 1. One star +: level -8 2. One star: -Level 9 (10) Inferior·Silent 1. Sporadic: -Level 10 (11) Xiaxia·Silent

Forget it, give it 5 stars. The idea is pretty good, even if the path followed by Patriarch Bodhi doesn't work. Because most fan fiction is about learning from Patriarch Bodhi, they are all the same. You can try another way, what you write so far is pretty good, come on, brother, it's best to update it quickly, otherwise you won't have the motivation to continue reading.

One of the perfect novels I have read. The biggest advantage is that the world view is perfect, but it feels easy to collapse later because the world view is so big that it is difficult to write down. I hope the author can persevere later. The most recognized thing is that the author's description of Buddhism, Taoism or Heaven is not subjective but objectively described. He does not belittle anyone subjectively, but discusses the matter based on the facts. Finally, I hope the author can ensure the quantity while also ensuring the quality. There are too few updates [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [ Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

Is this book going to be a eunuch? After the Golden Cudgel Competition in the East China Sea, there is no plot, it is all about the outline setting and background story.

It's okay. There are too many explanations. The time traveler understands it too slowly. As a result, I feel like I have become a native. I keep wandering around in a bunch of places. I guess it will take 1 to 2 hundred chapters to wait for the apprenticeship. That's all if you have ideas

There is one thing about this book that can surpass almost 100% of the ancient novels, that is, the protagonist knows that there are countless versions of Journey to the West, and will not regard the setting of a certain novel as the only truth like other protagonists (the demon Nuwa, the vicious Sanqing, Hongjun with chess pieces all over the world), but let the protagonist start from reality and explore the world view on his own. After Chapter 110, it will look like it was written by AI

I have read more than 200 chapters and can't stand it anymore. The author's writing is good, his knowledge reserve is very good, and he describes all aspects in detail. However, in my opinion, the various narrations, realms, descriptions of related characters appearing in the text, and associations have wasted too much pen and ink and have overtaken the main line. It is more like a kind of popular science about the world conceived by the author himself. Every time the protagonist meets a character or reaches a certain state of cultivation, he will use a lot of pen and ink to describe their past, present and future in detail, and their various developments. The popular science is described in detail through various characters asking and answering questions. The description of the protagonist in each chapter may only be a few sentences. As for the origins of various realms, the story descriptions of other branch characters occupy a large number of chapters, and these descriptions may not have a very important role in the development of the subsequent story. They only describe the author's conception in detail to the readers. Therefore, in my opinion, this is not like a biographical novel, but more like a popular science book about the world described by the author.

I don't know what I'm going to write next. Is it necessary to write dozens of chapters about realm setting?

I can't figure out why this book is only 7:2, it's obviously too late. The cultural attainments, writing style, plot arrangement, logic, corresponding subject matter storage and knowledge research, as well as polishing of details, character, and NPC's IQ are all far superior. I just regret that I read it too quickly, and now I have to wait for the update. After reading these nearly two hundred chapters, I just want to say that you, the author, are really talented, so awesome.

Interestingly, the plots of many stories are influenced by the background of the times. For example, some time ago, they were promoting the limited extraction of oil and it would be gone. They were also promoting the indiscriminate killing of animals, which would destroy the ecological environment and make Mother Earth sad. Then there is the way of heaven in modern prehistoric novels, which believes that the cultivation of all things will not feed back the heaven and earth, and it only causes disasters in order to survive and maintain the existence of heaven and earth. But recently, there has been a saying that human beings' abuses and destruction will only affect the human living environment, but the earth will not be harmed. Human beings are nothing more than microorganisms to the earth, and they think too highly of themselves. Then in this novel, heaven and earth are just heaven and earth, He just exists there, and there is no such thing as the way of heaven or the way of heaven. It is like AI, and heaven and earth also set up a plan to actively kill a microorganism in you? All suffering is just the embarrassment between people, the monopoly between people, and the oppression between people. Heaven and earth only exist there. Even if you beat me to death, I will not destroy you. Why should I be so violent and do not feed back the heaven and earth? I will be destroyed? I'm about to publish a mass robbery? I even have to measure a charter and calculate it. Which of you has done the most evil and has the most karma? Who should I kill? So interesting.