Journey to the West: I Am a Monkey in Huaguo Mountain

(Upper and lower) five-star purple, level 12 Sense of substitution A, attraction B, plug-in C, setting B, writing style A, imagination B, rhythm B, main line B, character design A, logic B Balance Penalty: None Personal feelings: It's good in every aspect and innovative, but it feels a bit uninteresting (it's a narrative style, this kind of book is suitable for reading to the end), and its appeal is relatively low. ─────────────────── #The following comments are for personal reference only #My account cannot leave negative reviews. Negative reviews will be invisible. Anyway, they will all be given five stars. #The overall rating increases, and there will be no negative comments in the comments. 1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria•11th Edition (1) Evaluation items (for personal reference only) 1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view. 2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading. 3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative. 4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency. 5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot? 6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line. 7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low? 8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal. 9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive? 10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition. 11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (2) Evaluation grouping (for personal reference only) 1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction 2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings 3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation 4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center 5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense (3) Ratings of recommended evaluation items (for personal reference only) 1. Specially recommended S level (+4 points) 2. Recommended Grade A (+2 points) 3. Acceptable Level B (+1 point) 4. No points deducted, Grade C (0 points) 5. Level D is not recommended (-1 point) 6. Personally unacceptable level E (-3 points) 2. Rating of online articles (1) Shangshang•Online articles that I personally can't find fault with Standard: No B rating, attractiveness S 1. Five-star red+: 5 items S, 5 items A 2. Five-star red: 2 items S, 8 items A 3. Five-star red-: 10 items A (2) Excellent Internet articles that I personally feel most people like Criteria: Rare and fine book, no C-grade rating, appeal A 1. Five-star Orange+: Total score is 18 or above, and 8 items are A or above 2. Five-star orange: and the total score is level 16 or above 3. Five-star orange-: 5 items A (3) Shang Xia·Personally feel high-level online articles Standard: common high-quality books, no D-level evaluation, attractiveness B 1. Five-star Purple+: Level 14 or above, and 4 A or above 2. Five-star purple: Level 10 or above 3. Five-star purple-: 8 items B (4) Intermediate to upper level • Internet articles that I feel are of a high standard Standard: Personal recommendation, no E-rating, attractiveness C 1. Five-star blue+: total score is 6 or above, and 6 items are B or above 2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above 3. Five-star green: 4 items B (5) Medium •Standard online articles that I personally like Standard: no poisonous spots, no bright spots, attractiveness C 1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above, and no E-level evaluation 2. Four-star green: total score is level 1 or above 3. Four-star white: 10 items C (6) The next one: Standard online articles that I don't like 1. Samsung White+: Level 0, and no E-level evaluation 2. Samsung white: -1 level 3. Samsung White-:-Level 2 (7) Middle and lower two • Internet articles that I personally do not recommend 1. Two-star white+: level -3 2. Two-star white: -Level 4 (8) Middle and lower three • Internet articles that are unacceptable to individuals 1. Two-star gray+: -5 levels 2. Two-star gray: -level 6 3. Two-star gray-:-Level 7 (9) There is a lot of room for improvement 1. One star +: level -8 2. One star: -Level 9 (10) Inferior·Silent 1. Sporadic: -Level 10 (11) Xiaxia·Silent

Forget it, give it 5 stars. The idea is pretty good, even if the path followed by Patriarch Bodhi doesn't work. Because most fan fiction is about learning from Patriarch Bodhi, they are all the same. You can try another way, what you write so far is pretty good, come on, brother, it's best to update it quickly, otherwise you won't have the motivation to continue reading.

One of the perfect novels I have read. The biggest advantage is that the world view is perfect, but it feels easy to collapse later because the world view is so big that it is difficult to write down. I hope the author can persevere later. The most recognized thing is that the author's description of Buddhism, Taoism or Heaven is not subjective but objectively described. He does not belittle anyone subjectively, but discusses the matter based on the facts. Finally, I hope the author can ensure the quantity while also ensuring the quality. There are too few updates [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [ Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

Is this book going to be a eunuch? After the Golden Cudgel Competition in the East China Sea, there is no plot, it is all about the outline setting and background story.

It's okay. There are too many explanations. The time traveler understands it too slowly. As a result, I feel like I have become a native. I keep wandering around in a bunch of places. I guess it will take 1 to 2 hundred chapters to wait for the apprenticeship. That's all if you have ideas

There is one thing about this book that can surpass almost 100% of the ancient novels, that is, the protagonist knows that there are countless versions of Journey to the West, and will not regard the setting of a certain novel as the only truth like other protagonists (the demon Nuwa, the vicious Sanqing, Hongjun with chess pieces all over the world), but let the protagonist start from reality and explore the world view on his own.

I have read more than 200 chapters and can't stand it anymore. The author's writing is good, his knowledge reserve is very good, and he describes all aspects in detail. However, in my opinion, the various narrations, realms, descriptions of related characters appearing in the text, and associations have wasted too much pen and ink and have overtaken the main line. It is more like a kind of popular science about the world conceived by the author himself. Every time the protagonist meets a character or reaches a certain state of cultivation, he will use a lot of pen and ink to describe their past, present and future in detail, and their various developments. The popular science is described in detail through various characters asking and answering questions. The description of the protagonist in each chapter may only be a few sentences. As for the origins of various realms, the story descriptions of other branch characters occupy a large number of chapters, and these descriptions may not have a very important role in the development of the subsequent story. They only describe the author's conception in detail to the readers. Therefore, in my opinion, this is not like a biographical novel, but more like a popular science book about the world described by the author.

Interestingly, the plots of many stories are influenced by the background of the times. For example, some time ago, they were promoting the limited extraction of oil and it would be gone. They were also promoting the indiscriminate killing of animals, which would destroy the ecological environment and make Mother Earth sad. Then there is the way of heaven in modern prehistoric novels, which believes that the cultivation of all things will not feed back the heaven and earth, and it only causes disasters in order to survive and maintain the existence of heaven and earth. But recently, there has been a saying that human beings' abuses and destruction will only affect the human living environment, but the earth will not be harmed. Human beings are nothing more than microorganisms to the earth, and they think too highly of themselves. Then in this novel, heaven and earth are just heaven and earth, He just exists there, and there is no such thing as the way of heaven or the way of heaven. It is like AI, and heaven and earth also set up a plan to actively kill a microorganism in you? All suffering is just the embarrassment between people, the monopoly between people, and the oppression between people. Heaven and earth only exist there. Even if you beat me to death, I will not destroy you. Why should I be so violent and do not feed back the heaven and earth? I will be destroyed? I'm about to publish a mass robbery? I even have to measure a charter and calculate it. Which of you has done the most evil and has the most karma? Who should I kill? So interesting.

I can't figure out why this book is only 7:2, it's obviously too late. The cultural attainments, writing style, plot arrangement, logic, corresponding subject matter storage and knowledge research, as well as polishing of details, character, and NPC's IQ are all far superior. I just regret that I read it too quickly, and now I have to wait for the update. After reading these nearly two hundred chapters, I just want to say that you, the author, are really talented, so awesome.

I don't know what I'm going to write next. Is it necessary to write dozens of chapters about realm setting?

It's considered novel, and there are explanations, but you can't see it later. It looks okay from the front, and there are pitfalls to be fixed. The combat power system is clearly written, but in my opinion, it is no different from those in the world of immortality. It is the same model, except that the magic weapon becomes a talisman or a heaven and earth weapon. The birth of treasures and other magic weapons that have no cultivation limit, and the combat power is the same as the powerful skills of various heavenly materials and earthly treasures in the world of immortality, and then they can be transcended. In my opinion, there is not much difference between the two. On the contrary, the cultivation of immortals is more comfortable to watch, after all, it can be thoughtless [Thinking]

Very nice to look at. Explained from another perspective: Journey to the West of the Ancient Gods! And the explanation is very reasonable. I always felt uncomfortable reading some prehistoric novels before. It turns out that it's because of the lineage theory that the reason why people are innately divine is because they are born this way. No matter how hard others try, there is nothing they can do. And here, the saint is transformed into a saint after acquiring practice and looking back in time. It feels pretty good.

The author's book is already worthy of five stars for its ideas. It provides a relatively reasonable explanation for the mixture of Honghuangliu, Fengshen and Journey to the West. According to my understanding, the current world line is probably from the birth of the prehistoric world to the catastrophe of the gods. This period is the timeline of the prehistoric flow. After that, the major forces stabilized (similar to after World War II). After a few years, all the spiritual treasures of the prehistoric world were divided up, just like the abandoned mines that had been mined. At this time, there existed It is recommended to reopen Chaos according to the number of one yuan, and let the remaining part of the prehistoric world reincarnate according to the established route. The advantage I can think of is that the remaining hostile forces will never develop. The classes are completely fixed. Those who are not major forces have no safe houses. If they cannot resist for a few rounds, these orthodoxies will be classified as side sects. After that, it's Journey to the West where the protagonist is. The protagonist is more interesting. According to the introduction at the beginning, I feel that the background of the protagonist is not like reality. Maybe it is a reincarnation after the journey to the west. Since the protagonist has never revealed that he knows about the journey to the west, even Bodhi thinks that he is a creature who accidentally retained the memories before the calamity.

It's pretty good-looking and feels very innovative666 Okay, I will write a very special and inexplicable chapter 129 or so later.

It's almost finished. After all, let's evaluate it after giving it five stars! 1. The book is a good book. The subject matter is very novel. It uses multiple perspectives and ideas to interpret the ancient times and Journey to the West! Whether it is the realm or the story, there are many controversies, which can make readers think deeply. It is not a brainless novel and deserves praise! Very in-depth, I personally think the author can be called an excellent writer! 2. The bad thing is that it is too watery and causes serious paddling... 3. Another point is that at the end of the writing, the author let himself go a bit too far. He could not keep up with the previous plot or there were contradictions. It made me seriously doubt that someone else had written it! 4. No matter what, it is still worth reading, because there are very few novels of this quality in Tomato! Still worth recommending!

This novel has completely broken away from Tomato's style of fast-burning novels, and is very comfortable to read. I have read 100 chapters so far, and I want to comment at this juncture. The author has a good grasp of the situation, and many of the designs are very novel. I hope Tomato can use this novel as a reference to open a new slow-burning genre instead of conquering the world invincibly. I hope the author can get better and better👌🏻

Several forces are vying for the protagonist, and their attitude is basically to win the protagonist to their side at all costs, but I don't know if the calculations behind those parties are to use the protagonist. Originally, the main storyline was that Patriarch Bodhi represented Hinayana, Avalokitesvara represented Mahayana, and Master Jinhua represented Jie Jiao. Although the arrangements of the other parties appeared, they are not on the surface at the moment. For example, the Wuji Dao left by Di Digong can be traced back to Chanjiao, the demon court behind Zhu Yan, and the underworld plot has not yet been written but it is estimated to be involved with witches. I thought it would be good to write it down. But the author suddenly changed his style and started to open different timelines. The jump in the timeline directly caused the plot to jump from studying under Bodhi to studying under the demon master Kunpeng. It really opened up my imagination. It turns out that the Taoist struggle can be carried out in different timelines. In this way, even if the protagonist stands in Hinayana in the main timeline, it can naturally be played in different timelines. In the same timeline, due to the calculations of different forces, they chose Zhan Mahayana, Jie Jiao, Yaoting, Tai Qing, Chan Jiao, Wu... This is nothing more than seeing which one supports (or uses) the protagonist to clear the way. After attaining the great realm and great supernatural power, he can go upstream to catch up to the source of the timeline, completely erasing other possibilities. It's just that who the protagonist will be in the future, whether he can make Jiejiao, Yaoting, or other forces plot around him, I'm looking forward to the author's writing becoming more and more exciting.

The best part of this book seems to have a different author

You can actually watch it if you skip Conquest of Humanity In fact, the author forgot one. That is listening. In this world view, there is nothing that cannot be heard unless something powerful takes action. After the protagonist's voice is heard, there will definitely be cause and effect involved in the journey to the west.

Well, this cultivation of immortality is better said to be cultivation of the truth, all the same; a little novel but not much. Without the settings like Mythical Daluo and Honghuangliu, the system is a bit unbearable. The setting is good, but the writing is too complicated. I seem to have seen this kind of combat power writing and forgot where I saw it. It is not very attractive, and it is basically just one glance and ten lines! Keep it up

I'm curious as to why the protagonist didn't invent a steam engine or something like that. Isn't it a meritorious thing to promote the progress of the human race? You can also use your external avatar to pretend to be some officials to serve a state and then wait until the world changes.

Although there are always some personal flaws, overall it is a very normal novel. There are a lot of ideas in the same type of Journey to the West novels, but there are also some common flaws, such as the protagonist not suffering any fundamental disasters.

At first I just wanted to see how a monkey would cause trouble in heaven this time... After Chapter 370, the protagonist gains power beyond the three realms. From then on, the sense of separation became very strong, the combat power basically collapsed, and the protagonist's personality also changed drastically, becoming arrogant, and no longer had the rigorous feeling before. Don't tell me that after gaining power, you should be mad at the protagonist to gain power outside the three realms and not fight with the innate saints. Moreover, someone clearly warned the protagonist not to attempt to destroy the balance, but the protagonist still had the idea of ​​​​breaking the balance. This was completely impossible before Chapter 370. After Chapter 370, it is basically bragging that the protagonist now has the power within the three realms and outside the three realms, and then what will happen if he hits someone?

The Great Flow seeks settings most, negating numerical values ​​at the root, breaking all settings in terms of numerical monster power, and essentially seeking personal power the most! The technological system is more destructive without a skin. The secondary box, 1D and 2D paper man, turns the space universe into paper and tears it up. Whatever the set value is, it is the younger brother. In fact, there is no comparison. The combat power is increased by the second power. The origin of the law of the prehistoric flow sets the first value to save life. Personal combat power. The first technology flow is a collective genre in the book. The number of dimensions the technology rises to is the intensity of the dimension.

Five-star recommendation! The most authentic story of the little demon's survival in Huaguo Mountain This is definitely the most surprising Journey to the West fanfic I found this year! There is no system, no cheats, and no cliché routines. There is only a hard-core survival story about an ordinary modern person who travels through time and becomes an unknown little monkey in Huaguo Mountain. He lives step by step in the world of Journey to the West where gods and demons are everywhere, just for the sake of immortality. The character of the protagonist Sun Luzhen is so impressive - sober, pragmatic, and extremely cautious. He knew that he was just a little monster with a background. He never wanted to steal Sun Wukong's halo as the protagonist, and he did not dare to make false claims against the Buddhist heaven. His only goal was to live for three hundred years, follow Sun Wukong to the Bodhi Patriarch to seek immortality, and finally join the ranks of heavenly gods. He would not dare to speak nonsense because he could not tell whether this world was the original Journey to the West or Journey to the Wild West, and he would put away all his foresight because he was afraid of being silenced by Buddhist arhats. This sense of crisis of "if you make a wrong setting and you will die" makes the whole story full of immersion. The world view setting is also particularly innovative, integrating elements from the original Journey to the West, Journey to the Ancients, and classical fairy tales from the Ming and Qing dynasties, and the author has played a wonderful information gap: all characters have cognitive limitations, the little monsters don't know how to measure calamities, mortals don't understand immortals and Buddhas, and even the protagonist's guesses may not be the truth, and there is a possibility of reversal everywhere. The most rare thing is that the protagonist's growth line is extremely solid. From absorbing the green energy of the Immortal Stone to laying the foundation, to exploring and creating the "Taiyin Cultivation Method" on his own, to subduing the Demon King of the Seventy-Two Cave, and uniting the Huaguo Mountain with the Monkey King, every step has been followed. He did not rely on cheating, but relied entirely on modern people's thinking and wisdom: creating spells, establishing systems, passing the spells to his subordinates, snowballing and growing his power, and forcibly turned an ordinary little demon into the second king of Huaguo Mountain, becoming Sun Wukong's most trusted brother. Although it is a slow-moving novel, the pace is not sluggish at all. Over the span of more than a hundred years, the protagonist's strength, power and understanding of the world have steadily improved, without any watery plot. The character creation is also very vivid, including the good-looking and naive Monkey King, the honest and honest Monkey King, and the Seventy-Two Cave Demons with their own personalities.

Are there any brothers who believe in the mechanical ascension of flesh and blood [laughing evilly]

You'd better be faster, otherwise I'll have to raise pigs. It's easy for me to raise pigs. I didn't know you had this book.

He was supposed to follow the general process, the path of Master Bodhi, but he probably took it too much and it was too common, so the author gave him no backdoor to follow. He just didn't know if he would eventually meet Master Bodhi to learn some Zhengtong magic.

It's not bad, the ideas are great, the subject matter is novel, and there's no problem with the logic. These points alone surpass most of Tomato's novels.

I found that the Beast Control Sect's method of controlling beasts has great potential. According to his idea, you can absorb the energy, blood, longevity, etc. Of your own beast control. If I modify it again so that the energy I absorb can be used for cultivation, and then my own beast control can also develop my own beast control, and the cycle continues, wouldn't it be... [Laughter]