I, the Paladin, the Open Beta Is the Ceiling

It looks good. In a mindless killing game like Tomato, there is actually a kind-hearted protagonist who needs to be supported.

I think it's very interesting. The world background, characters and plot are all very good, and the protagonist's outlook is quite normal. Some people say that the protagonist is too kind, but I don't think so. I think it's just right. Anyway, that's what I think. I think the protagonist is still growing up, and this book has just begun. I hope the author can continue writing and write better [Blow kiss]

At first it felt like a Paladin, which I quite liked. Now I feel like a game traveler with a lot of divine power, and the original owner is like an empty shell given his identity. I only looked at it again after a hundred years.

It's been a long time since I've seen a protagonist with such a righteous heart. It's so touching [almost crying] [almost crying]

It is very beautiful. The people in it have their own thoughts. To be precise, they are intelligent and not brainless. Everyone has their own characteristics. The protagonist is the most satisfying to me. He does not isolate himself from the world, uses the characters as NPCs, or plays with the players. The emotions in it are also touching. The players are all cute, and some sweet daily life is very reassuring. The logic of the plot is good, and some details are well handled. As a free novel, especially when the data is not good, this novel has hundreds of chapters. I hope everyone can support it. The protagonist is definitely very charming, kind and righteous without being a virgin, decisive in killing but sticking to his heart, not killing innocent people indiscriminately, having strength but not being arrogant, and having a clear goal. Good-looking! Good-looking! Y^O^y I saw the latest one in one go. Please keep updating the author!

The story structure is interlocking, the plot advances smoothly and naturally, the logical chain is tightly connected, and there is no looseness or delay at all. What is particularly commendable is that the author ingeniously gives the protagonist a unique thinking perspective, cleverly transforming the real dilemma into a "hypothetical time travel" deduction situation, making the problem-solving process full of speculative interest and novel imagination. This unique narrative technique not only enhances the readability of the story, but also provides readers with an immersive reading experience. It is a double surprise of conception and expression. I hope the author will continue to work hard to update more interesting chapters.

It took me two or three days to tie it up and let me share my current feelings. First of all, this is the first time I have seen a traditional protagonist in Tomato that makes me feel very decent. Although there is a female character who has a crush on the protagonist, I think it is still reasonable. At least this part is not a poisonous point for me, and there is no description of the protagonist being very sperm-obsessed. Good review Then the comment said that in the early short review, there was a character who ruined the protagonist's plan. The protagonist came out to explain that this was a poisonous point. In fact, it was an oolong caused by information asymmetry or incomplete information. This part is not a poisonous point for me. From now on, the description of the plot and the subsequent development are all good to me, especially the show of the saint in front of people, which I enjoyed watching, hahaha [laughing] Next, let me talk about the biggest poisonous point that I have followed so far. I roughly counted at least fifteen or sixteen chapters in a dozen consecutive chapters. The protagonist did not appear at all, and there was no explanation of what the protagonist was doing? I almost ran out of energy while watching it and didn't want to watch it at all. I just wanted to know when the protagonist will appear. I think this part can be marked. Personally, I feel that it is no problem to mention it in one go. It is also okay to add a narrative later. It is a completely personal experience. It was very uncomfortable to watch it on tenterhooks. I just skipped it directly. I couldn't imagine that if the protagonist never appeared during the update, I would not remember what the book was about. Generally speaking, I personally feel that the score of 6 is a bit low. In my opinion, the score should be around 7.5. I look forward to the follow-up [Blow Kiss]

It's super beautiful. After reading Tomato for so many years, I can say that this book is my second favorite! Recommend! ! ! The author must keep writing! [Like] [Like] [Like] Come on!

The overall plot is okay, but the writing feels a bit stiff, the plot advances at a moderate pace, and the characters are okay. The whole article is non-toxic and can be used as food.

Why is the rating so low? This book is good Author, as long as you write, I will definitely keep reading. This book is really good.

A pretty good online game NPC story

It's really good, it's the kind of Western fantasy paladin that looks righteous from the front, but has a hint of chaos behind it.

A good-looking book with no problems with logic. The characters are very real, just like a normal human being, with their own views on good and evil. The author's descriptions are very delicate, and everyone has their own characteristics. Even if there is only one picture, it is worth reading, especially during the book shortage. [Sending my heart] [laughs]

It's quite nice. I clicked on it after looking at the name and cover. It was actually an accident and I almost missed it.

Very nice. Like it very much

As you wish, I will give you your praise!

It's okay, nothing poisonous

Stop cooing, I finally have a novel I can read [crying]

Although it sucks, the level is pretty good

For now, it suits my taste better.

It looks good, it would be better if the world view was bigger. Looking forward to the expansion of the worldview in the future

A very good book. Recommended. Recommended.

Not bad, but what's up with this rating, 5

Very well written, cheers author.

Not bad, cheers for the author

What a decent protagonist, good-looking, come on

After watching it, I recommend five good ones🌟

Good, good, good

Good looking, good writing in an online game

The main character was very kind and to my liking at first sight. But things changed once players started showing up.