[## The yandere and madly criticizing princess vs. The self-improving Young Master Pei]
Dad died at the beginning. Is there anything more tragic than this? Young Master Pei, who had just traveled through time, was chased by killers from all walks of life and almost died before he could recover. After finally escaping, he unexpectedly hit the lewd and tyrannical princess again...
Pei Jiuqing just wants to scold his mother! What kind of bad luck is this? ? ?
Others were cheating and causing sparks and lightning all the way through time travel, but he was better off, forgetting his bad luck. Anyway, he had no good luck in his previous life, and he had long been used to it! It's just that one after another they want to come over and step on him. What's going on? Do you really think that he is a soft persimmon that can be squeezed and rounded?
Even if there was no peace every day, what made Pei Jiuqing vomit blood the most was that the emperor had granted him a marriage indiscriminately with just one imperial edict. The marriage was to the most powerful princess of Dingguo, Baili Xun.
Pei Jiuqing didn't want to scold his mother anymore, he wanted to die!
Reader comments
"Crossing" is the story of a modern science and engineering man who travels through the ancient palace of Pei Guogong, the young prince. Pei was born in a hairpin family, and has always lived under the strong aura and protection of his father. The male protagonist was ignorant in the early stage, but he knew how to protect himself wisely. He did not have martial arts to rely on, and he was even a bit weak and easy to bully. He will gradually become stronger in the future. This is a two-strong story.
To be honest, Pei Jiuqing is indeed afraid of Her Royal Highness. After all, he has witnessed the darkest and most inhuman side of Her Royal Highness. As for how the relationship will heat up and how it will come naturally, stay tuned! If you like Wenwen, please use your little hands to leave a valuable book review! I'm so grateful [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
The description and shaping of the characters and environment are very delicate, but the disadvantage is that it is too delicate, and too much ink is spent on the description of the characters' appearance, which causes the plot to advance slowly. For example, the description of Baili Xun's temperament and appearance has been described enough in the previous article. There is no need to spend a lot of ink every time to express the same character characteristics [almost crying] (only personal opinion, the author has the author's rhythm [please update])
It feels like the princess and Su are the same person, but I don't know whether it's because of schizophrenia or because she actively disguises herself as a man? I really like the character of the princess.
In addition, I would like to give some suggestions. The article still needs to be carefully revised. In particular, try not to let the text do the reading comprehension for the reader, and reduce more declarative sentences...
It's super interesting. I suggest the author write more plots about the princess and the male protagonist. I really like reading it. Don't let it be unfinished and don't stop updating it. If it's well written, I'll give you a gift [crazy] [crazy] [crazy]
Is the heroine a princess?
It's really nice to watch. The characters are distinct. The mystery and arrogance of Princess Dingguo and the true identity of the good brothers make people obsessed. But I don't know why so few people watch it [crying] [crying] [crying] Author, please do more work [shy]
The heroine is a mystery
It looks good, but there aren't many emotional lines.
Come on, the author [crying]
The early stage was indeed quite difficult, but it felt better once we saw the capital. Cheer up, the author, and I hope Sister Hui will have a good ending.
The writing is very nice, the subject matter is very good, I like it 🥰
"Crossing" is the story of a modern science and engineering man who travels through the ancient palace of Pei Guogong, the young prince. Pei was born in a hairpin family, and has always lived under the strong aura and protection of his father. The male protagonist was ignorant in the early stage, but he knew how to protect himself wisely. He did not have martial arts to rely on, and he was even a bit weak and easy to bully. He will gradually become stronger in the future. This is a two-strong story. To be honest, Pei Jiuqing is indeed afraid of Her Royal Highness. After all, he has witnessed the darkest and most inhuman side of Her Royal Highness. As for how the relationship will heat up and how it will come naturally, stay tuned! If you like Wenwen, please use your little hands to leave a valuable book review! I'm so grateful [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
The description and shaping of the characters and environment are very delicate, but the disadvantage is that it is too delicate, and too much ink is spent on the description of the characters' appearance, which causes the plot to advance slowly. For example, the description of Baili Xun's temperament and appearance has been described enough in the previous article. There is no need to spend a lot of ink every time to express the same character characteristics [almost crying] (only personal opinion, the author has the author's rhythm [please update])
It feels like the princess and Su are the same person, but I don't know whether it's because of schizophrenia or because she actively disguises herself as a man? I really like the character of the princess. In addition, I would like to give some suggestions. The article still needs to be carefully revised. In particular, try not to let the text do the reading comprehension for the reader, and reduce more declarative sentences...
It's super interesting. I suggest the author write more plots about the princess and the male protagonist. I really like reading it. Don't let it be unfinished and don't stop updating it. If it's well written, I'll give you a gift [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] Is the heroine a princess?
It's really nice to watch. The characters are distinct. The mystery and arrogance of Princess Dingguo and the true identity of the good brothers make people obsessed. But I don't know why so few people watch it [crying] [crying] [crying] Author, please do more work [shy]
The heroine is a mystery
It looks good, but there aren't many emotional lines.
Come on, the author [crying]
The early stage was indeed quite difficult, but it felt better once we saw the capital. Cheer up, the author, and I hope Sister Hui will have a good ending.
The writing is very nice, the subject matter is very good, I like it 🥰