Three Whips Shattered the Dream of the Great Sage. I Am an Honest Man.

It's quite good-looking, and the writing is very good, but there's a problem with the segmentation. It's a big block, and it's a bit hard to watch. And now there are two women but no emotional scenes. Yes, it's much better than those romance novels in Journey to the West.

I have read everyone's comments, and the arrangements for the protagonist's arrogance and complacency and drunkenness that everyone pointed out were indeed not well arranged, which aroused the disgust of many readers. Although I don't like conspiracy theories, I personally think that these arrangements are necessary to promote the development of the plot. However, since everyone is disgusted, I will make corrections in future plots and strive to create a likeable character. I am also very grateful to my friends who have been supporting me. If you have any suggestions, you can put them directly here and I will make adjustments according to the plot arrangement.

It's not like modern people traveling through the past, nor like ancient people traveling through the past, like the Liangshan heroes in the TV series traveling through the past.

It has the flavor of Water Margin and looks interesting!

It's great. It's not a brainless article, it doesn't show off one's realm. It's considered an excellent work in today's Tomatoes. The characters are flesh-and-blood and fit the introduction of the article. Without adding time travel, this article would be even better. The author emphasizes the Great Sage Fu Hai, not modern people. Then you can change the beginning and remove the time travel. The author's writing style is quite good.

I haven't seen such a good novel in a long time. His writing skills are extraordinary. In addition, I see some people commenting this or that, you should not listen to them. A truly enlightening novel that emphasizes spirit over form. Like the world of mortals, it is all passing smoke and clouds. Express what you want to express the meaning of life!

Listening to the book, I now heard that the Five Spirit Officers chased the protagonist to the West Sea. The biggest question at the moment is that the protagonist practiced the exercises of the Turtle Spirit Mother in the early stage, and after the death of the turtle spirit, he practiced the exercises given by Tongtian. How did he cultivate the evil spirit after practicing the Three Purities Zhengfa for hundreds of years? Quite curious

It's okay. Although the protagonist seems to have various short-sightedness and other problems, it is understandable that he is an ordinary person who traveled to the past. Moreover, there is no talk of traveling to the past to become a monk [laughter], and his combat power is not compromised.

It is not a cookie-cutter, mindless novel, and there is no formula for killing monsters and upgrading. The author has his own ideas. If you are not a novice at reading novels, you may find it a bit frustrating. After reading too many books on the formulas for defeating monsters and upgrading, you will feel like your eyes are shining brightly. I hope the author will write it down well.

Overall, it's over nine points. The current rating is too low. It's very well written. The plot has ups and downs and the writing is extraordinary. It's just a bit unsuitable for the pace of modern life. It's refreshing and not intensive, and the plot is a bit long. This may be the reason for the low rating. If you want to tell a good story, this is fine. If you want to be good, you have to keep pace with the times. Speaking of complaints, the name Jiao Fu is so wonderful (slight spoilers, don't read further if you mind) First, the pronunciation of "Fu" is the same as "Fu". At first, I thought it was a bit earthy, but when I saw the great sage Fuhai, I felt really amazing. Second, it is a hidden clue. You can also read "Father". The title of the book is "I Raised Children in the Wilderness (A Group)", [cover face][cover face][cover face] Third, you can add some water appropriately to make it a little dry. Isn't it reasonable for the evil dragon to pour water? [I understand] More updates, more updates, the next door is updating ten times a day

Good book. The most beautiful Journey to the West fanfic. The depictions are flesh-and-blood, not just about improving the realm.

It's quite good-looking. It's not a short story. No wonder I think the score is so low. This book is quite good-looking. The author has carried out the plot very well. There are some places that make people feel quite interesting, such as the Legend of White Snake.

The front part is not very good, but the back part is interesting. I don't know whether he was fascinated by the calamity, or the author forgot. An extraterrestrial demon who traveled through time slowly became like a local demon king.

Are you Chinese? Don't know about the list of gods? Don't know about Journey to the West?

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good novel.

It's okay, but it has its shortcomings. It's just not that biased toward cool writing. I feel like an ordinary time traveler who's fascinated by the calamity.

The writing style is very good, but the genre is a bit different. The protagonist of the novel does not have the sense of destiny that I have seen. It is just like watching a story show, and it is not interesting [laughing]

I don't know why the score is so low. It's very interesting. I've been a bookworm for more than ten years. It's much better than most of Tomato's mindless articles. At first I could give 5 stars, but when I wrote about White Snake, I felt that 3 stars was the most.

Come on, come on, come on

Come on, five stars for you

Very good, keep it up.

It's worth seeing, not bad, not bad

The protagonist is either running away or pretending to be dead [face covering]

Why is the score so low? Good book It's a good book. Only when you read it do you realize that there is something in it.

I feel the rating of this book should be above 9.0

After reading it, I am still not satisfied. In today's flashy era, this book is an alternative, but it has its own background. It is a combination of Journey to the West, Water Margin, myths and classics, with distinctive characters, and the growth trajectory of Jiao Demon to Lingguan is clearly visible. Rarely good article.

The first one is "Water Margin", "Journey to the West", and in the middle it changes from a novel about gods and demons to an online fantasy. Open high and move low, withdraw. But I still want to say that the character of the big demon constructed in the previous part is remarkable, and it is definitely not as bad as other negative reviews say. The first part is worth watching.

It's very interesting and has the main character's growth experience.

I was a little annoyed at the beginning, but the more I read, the better it became. It's a good book, and it shouldn't have such a low score. It's a really good novel, but the previous review was a bit narrow-minded. 5 Star review

Well done, Jiaolong Kuoyi