The World Sinks into Eternal Night, and Civilization Drowns in the Light of Day

I think it is an article with potential at the moment. The author can actually write it with care and construct a world view. This novel can definitely be written in pursuit of quality. Otherwise, the middle story line will not be carried out later. Some of the author's previous story lines are not very good, such as the blacksmith, the first encounter with the four investigators, and the relationship between the brothers and sisters in Lime City. I will not talk about it. The plot is not a brainless novel. This novel has the potential to be popular and the author can write it well. If you can have a good idea and are not in a hurry, you can refer to the work of Teacher Pengpai. The emotional line of the character of Teacher Lazw Dao Buyu is very good. Please give it a try.

There are really too many themes in this book, and the subject matter is not very novel, but this book is awesome. His writing style is so good that I can't recommend it. It is much better than some famous novices. The writing style is very delicate and the writing is great.

The first fifty chapters are relatively flat, then it starts to pick up slowly, and then it explodes. The protagonist is written in a very three-dimensional way. Compared with Mu Mushan in the author's previous book, he is no longer emotionally indifferent or perfectionistic, but has a touch of pride and tenderness immersed in his bones. Really endearing. The protagonists in many Tomato books are indifferent and heartless. When there is a heroine, he suddenly becomes warm and affectionate, and the heroine also comes out of nowhere. This book can be considered unique. The protagonist makes me feel like a young boy who has gone through many hardships but still has tenderness in his heart. You can completely understand why there are some things that others can't do. Only the protagonist can do it, so he should be a genius. There are a lot of foreshadowings in this book, and every plot advancement is not sudden, but has been planned by the author. Generally speaking, as long as the author fine-tunes the front part and keeps the back part, he has a chance to become Tomato's next hit [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Anyway, I feel very excited about it now and am looking forward to it [Blow kiss] I feel so bad if I don't watch it for a day. . . . . Hurry up ✌🏻Update [angry][angry][angry]

It is very similar to the previous book, with a grand background and very deep water. However, the difference is that the outline of the previous book is not obvious. This book clearly has a main line. Although the protagonist of this book is not that kind of Long Aotian, you will feel very happy when you look at it. It is not excessive, not rampant, very ordinary, but real enough.

This is the first time I have seen such a high-level Gao Wuwen in Tomato. The world view is grand and suspenseful. The combat system seems to be well established so far. I look forward to more exciting plots in the future [OK] (I agree with Yibai👍🏻)

From the last book. It may be a little uncomfortable when you first read it because the world view has not yet been developed, but after finishing Lime City (Volume 1), the entire world view becomes very clear. But the direction of the big plot is gradual and not abrupt. The level of depiction of group portraits is similar to that of exotic beasts (but the length is now very short, so it may not be as vivid). The most important thing is that the conflicts between the characters in the novel are really good. There is no real right or wrong, there are just different positions (the author describes it from the perspective of the entire race and civilization, which is also the style of the previous book). The protagonist's choices between different positions are very real. There are also many famous quotes in it, which are really inspiring. I hope no one will be killed (even though the last book didn't have much)

I'm really looking forward to the new book [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] It's just that Fang Bai is much funnier than Mu Mu. For now, it's not as good as Gray Fog, but it's just the beginning and it can improve the world view. Overall, I'm still looking forward to it and I'm very confident. I hope the new book will be a new peak for static electricity

Yes, static electricity's new book. Compared with the previous one, I feel that the beginning of this one is quite good, and the writing style has also been significantly improved. Your book still makes me want to read it. I have been following the author's books for more than two years. I hope I can still stay with static electricity.

The setting is quite interesting. The author's power system is very detailed every time. Come on.

I just read Chapter 224, and I feel that the setting is complete, the plot is okay, and the character creation is okay in the early stage, but it becomes a bit formulaic later on, especially Elaine, who is always shy and does not fit the previous characters. There are too many characters. The author may want to write group portraits, but it is obvious that the author's writing skills are insufficient. There are too many new characters, too few old characters appear, and insufficient character description. In the Deep Sea chapter, the characters gradually become flat, so there should be fewer new characters and more roles for the old characters. There is also the female protagonist. Judging from the chapters I have read so far, the female protagonist seems to be Elaine, but the author also describes female characters such as Su Xiaotang. I have read most of the inquiries about the female protagonist, but the author has not answered, and there are too many female characters. From my perspective, the author wants to stay and watch multiple women, but also wants to stay and watch single and no women. The author should explain it in advance, otherwise it is easy to be scolded. The pace is a bit slow. I looked at the table of contents and found that there are more than 300 chapters, and they are still centered around the academy. It seems that there should be one to two hundred chapters, or even more. I hope the author can control the time well. Finally, I hope this book will get better and better, the author will get better and better, and my life will get better and better.

The book is good, the plot is exciting, and the ability system can be seen to be thoughtful. It can be seen that the author has ideas, writes the book with heart, and wants to write his own core, rather than just writing a simple enjoyable article. However, there are many shortcomings in the book. It is not detailed enough. Many places cannot withstand scrutiny. The writing style is a little immature. The plot arrangement is also too compact, which makes it a bit messy and tiring to read. But despite its flaws, Tomato is still a good book, and I personally feel that the author has great potential. As long as his writing style is polished and his writing style is more rigorous, he may not be able to soar into the sky. One more thing! ! Don't touch the tauren! ! Not even remotely! ! This is a big minefield recognized by all authors and readers, and whoever touches it will die! ! It's best not to get involved! ! ! I admit that my previous evaluation was a bit hasty. I didn't expect the author to hide it very deeply. From the beginning, I felt that it was just okay. As I went to the back, it got better and better. The author's writing style also felt smooth and improved by more than one level. There was something, something.

The new book of Static Electric has just begun, and the world view and plot are not clear yet. But I still really like Above the Gray Mist, so the new book must support it. The writing style, plot coherence, etc. Are much improved compared to Gray Fog. It is simply improved in all aspects. Now I feel like it's not enough. Look at the duration

The style of this book is very different from the previous book by Jingdian. The protagonist tends to be a (funny?) Funny type at the beginning. After experiencing what happened to Sister Xiaoya in the first volume (various reversals), the protagonist's mental journey has been enriched a lot, and then when he goes to the new world, I can only say that it is really exciting. Book lovers can enjoy it and highly recommend it! Static's writing is really getting better and better [top post]

The book is good, and it has written something new. In the fantasy genre, it is very important to be creative. The protagonist is a protagonist with positive growth in three views and has a certain logic. But the combat power description in the article may collapse later. In addition, I heard that five stars and one star do not count, so I gave it four stars. It writes about the madness and sanity of a person whose world is about to be destroyed, especially the part in the vision.

This book is very good. It is definitely a top-notch book in Tomato. It is a story from another world. The combat power system is multiple and diverse, which gives people a good sense of freshness. However, the actual combat power is not clear. The protagonist's strength progresses slowly. He is often pushed away by others. He is weak and unable to participate in problems. It is quite powerless. There are quite a lot of Riddlers in this article. In many books, even though the plot stage has ended, it is not clear why. Analyzing from the perspective of characters, the characters in this book feel that they follow the plot (not literally). They appear as soon as they appear, and they are left immediately after they appear. They will not appear again until a paragraph later (Senior Sister, Vera, etc.). In addition, after reading the latest chapter, I don't know who the heroine of this book is, whether it is the senior sister or Elaine. However, the descriptions of the two heroines are good, but the author is not good at writing emotions, so it is difficult to say the follow-up. The summary of the novel is worth reading★★★★▲

It's beautiful. Compared to Static's previous book, this one is more skillfully written, especially the magical sentence after taking in the phalanges, "Before she could say that apology, her obsession turned into a breeze, quietly blowing over the young man's shoulders, dispelling the lies and deceptions he would encounter in the future." ] It's really invincible

The reading is very clear and logical, with a clear and complete outline of the guesses, and the author of the long novel, it is almost impossible to be overwhelmed at the beginning. Rhythm control is the absolute advantage of this book. The main plot is advanced without delay, there is no forced dungeon to deviate from the main plot, and there is no deliberate daily watering down for no reason. The writing style is precise and concise. It not only explains the background clearly, but is not cluttered, and occasionally has literary talent, which is the top level of Xiaobai's writing. The author's handling of the protagonist's melee combat ability seems not to be very good at detailed practice, but this kind of handling makes good use of strengths and avoids weaknesses, and shows considerable cleverness. I'll look into the rest later

After reading it briefly, the writing style has changed a bit compared to the previous one. This book still continues the various features of the previous book. It is detailed and novel. If it can be maintained, it will definitely be another masterpiece. Magical Because the author had been unstable in updating this book for a period of time, and it was relatively slow to gain popularity, the number of readers of this book dropped from hundreds of thousands to tens of thousands, and the number of updates was only a few hundred. As a result, the number of people has actually increased again now, back to the early 100,000s, and the number of reminders has increased from a thousand to a few hundred. Sure enough, persistence is still useful ( ……………………………… The situation of this book is really getting better and better, and the number of people has slowly grown from 70,000 to 120,000. During the period when updates were unstable, the number of people dropped too much.

My five-star opinion is as follows: 1. The views are clear and the likes and dislikes are clear, making it clear at a glance. 2. The article has a clear theme and rich writing. Deeply touching people's hearts and arousing resonance; 3. Appreciation of the uniqueness of the plot, characters, themes, etc. Of this novel also reveals the beauty of its commonality. 4. A novel with great depth, which depicts the complexity of human nature and the cruelty of reality 5. After reading this novel, I felt deeply sorry for Fang Bai's experience and admired the author's descriptive skills. 6. The theme of this novel is directly highlighted in the content, clear and concise, without any redundancy. 7. The center is clear and the intention is clear. 8. Describes Fang Bai's growth path with full passion 9. The description is delicate, the flavor of life is strong, and the words and sentences are accurate and expressive. 10. Through vivid and vivid language description, readers feel as if they are in a dream. 11. The wonderful storyline and unique narrative techniques made me fall into it and couldn't bear to leave.

Inspire The author's writing style is exquisite, the emotional lines are first-class, the micro-expressions and psychological changes are written in great detail, the underlying logic is well-founded, and the description of the environment is so subtle that it is easy to relate to it. Chapter 3 interests me, Chapter 10 attracts fans, and Chapter 100 amazes me (I have been reading novels for four years, and the last time I was so attracted to it was Lord of Mysteries) Highly recommended! ! ! Read the review for about 8 hours Each character has its own charm. Even a small character has its own personality and characteristics. They are not the same. The growth of the protagonist is not only the improvement of strength, but also the improvement of mood (name sugar and add three spoons, "Resurrect my lover"). The author's writing style is super delicate. I highly recommend you to read it. The emotional lines between the protagonist and everyone are very well written. For example, from learning knowledge from Senior Sister Sugar to being "kept" in the new world, are bionic people with emotions still "bionic people"? Death rejected the immortal butterfly, and he rejected the gods, the new world and the old state. "The new world is too noisy, the old state is a good place." The power system is novel (levels 1 to 10, 11 to 20, 21 to 30. Name the sugar again and add three spoons). Many plots are rich in philosophy but not obscure. Read the review after about 18 hours At present, I feel like I am starting high but then moving mid-way and then continuing to move mid-way. This may be due to my personal reasons.

When I first came into contact with this book, I just read the introduction and felt that the author's writing style was definitely not bad. Then I put it on the bookshelf and let it go. I didn't read the novel for a while, and I accidentally discovered this book on the bookshelf. After reading the first chapter and combining it with the name, I was suddenly shocked that this could not be the author of Above the Gray Fog! As expected, I read in depth. I think this book is excellent. I like it very much from the character setting. Each character has his own persistence and his own past (especially the senior who I love so much, even if I know he is not the heroine, I still stand by the senior). Moreover, their thoughts are not fixed in a book, but are constantly thinking and changing. Let's talk about the plot. The plot is very coherent, the story is rich and interesting enough, and there is no sense of discontinuity. There are many foreshadowings, which are quite obvious. If you observe carefully, you can also detect another plot. When writing one line, the author can control the plot development of another line very well. I have to admire the author's logical thinking ability. Let's talk about the world view setting. According to what has been revealed so far: in terms of combat power, the setting is very formulaic and logically harmonious. It is not like fabricating it out of thin air (it is just not fully reflected in the battle, which is a bit regretful). The various forces: Zhen Mo said that it always feels too small and too few, without some small forces to set off, but it has also been explained in it. What is shown so far The major power organizations are only peripheral members (but I always feel that something is wrong, which makes it difficult to feel) World map: The plot currently displayed does not fully understand the difference between the old and new states, as well as the hugeness of the new continent, but it cannot be ruled out that due to early reasons, the map is small and it is easier to allocate energy to gradually improve the characters, forces, combat power and other settings. Moreover, the author also deliberately laid foreshadowings of other maps. In conclusion, if you want to read it, please hurry up, author. You are the only author who made me want to stop in terms of plot and character settings. Besides, the protagonist's personality changes are a bit abrupt. Specifically, after the senior sister and her group took over here, and the protagonist revealed the justice he insists on, I am a little bit I have no idea where he got it from, but the rest is okay, and then there are the many important things - 1. Don't give the senior knives to me; 2. Give the senior more scenes; 3. Don't make the senior's character look bad (and the author is a man from science and engineering, doge, bushi) [face covering]

At the moment, I feel it's okay. It's different from the gray fog theme. The protagonist's personality is also completely different. He prefers a comedy style. For now, I'm looking forward to seeing him first [smirk] [smirk]

The beginning is very novel, not cliche, and the writing is very smooth and smooth to read. I hope the author can update 10 times a day in the future.

Coming from Gray Mist, I feel that Static Electric has made great progress. It has changed its style a bit, the writing style is much better, and the characterization is also very good. I am also looking forward to the follow-up of the new book. I wonder if I can see Lin Shan again.

How can I put it, when I was about to run out of books, this book really surprised me. Although it seems that not many people have read it yet, I quite like the style of the whole book. It is not so biased towards daily life, but very delicately feels everyone's heart. It is not so biased towards fighting, but every fighting scene will be very thrilling. There are not so many conspiracies, but there are always reversals and surprises behind the story... Is a good book Among the more than 60 books on my bookshelf, this is the one I am most looking forward to updating. I hope the author will update 100,000 words per day

The collision of wasteland and technology. Two societies, two worlds, two faces of people. You can see the microcosm of the society when you were a child and the society now. The characters are three-dimensional. The protagonist is very smart and very simple. This simplicity comes from exposure to new things. People will grow. I look forward to the growth of the protagonist.

Compared to the previous book's Mumu, the protagonist of this book really gives me a different feeling. It is obvious that the author's character description is much better. Don't cut off the emotional line. The previous book's Jiuqi is such a pity.

I really like this novel, and of course I also like the author's other novel. I wrote a lyric for this novel, but it's a pity that Tomato can't play music, otherwise I can tell you what it feels like to sing this song. The neon lights of New Arc City shatter into ashes The stigmata burns under the skin as a warning Pollution spreads through the streets and eats away at life. The whisper of the oracle hides a cold fate The bell of the Federation is shattered, the last trace of peace The windows of the shed light reflect the dilapidated scenery Some people huddled in the corner, some people tightened their grip on the knife handle Mortal pupils hide immortal stars The missionary's black robe sweeps across the barren land The deeds of the past sigh in the history books Nari's fire has not yet extinguished its embers. The legend of Fang Dachui deceives the warmth of the world The shadow of the disaster core covers every inch of texture The blade of power cuts through the hypocritical peace We pick up the pieces and piece together the trajectory of civilization Even if tomorrow I fall to fight against the dawn God, God, God Look at this world, you are not willing to bow your head and accept your fate Use flesh and blood as a shield and faith as a soldier Block the eternal night and prevent civilization from dying God, God, God You hear this reverberation, it's human response Even if the body decays, the soul will move forward Let the world welcome the sun to rise again The frosty gun presses against the throat of darkness Xiaotang's cry breaks through the fog Fang Bai's joke hides millions of heavy things The smoke from neighbors' cooking is the original intention of guarding The pressure of divine authority cannot bend my spine even an inch. Broken oracles are no match for the sincerity of the heart This battle is not about winning or losing, only about inheritance. Even if we all turn into dust in the wind God, God, God Look at this world, you are not willing to bow your head and accept your fate Use flesh and blood as a shield and faith as a soldier Block the eternal night and prevent civilization from dying God, God, God You hear this reverberation, it's human response Even if the body decays, the soul will move forward Let the world welcome the sun to rise again The reverberation passed through the ruins and sprouts sprouted The fire of civilization will eventually illuminate the world Those who fell turned into stars and fell The story of guardianship will never evaporate

I am a fan of Gray Fog. It can be seen from Gray Fog that the author's writing skills are quite good. The characters are well described and the plot is full of ups and downs. Although the writing is a little messy because of the large scope, the flaws are not hidden, so I am very optimistic about this book.