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Very good, not enough, I like it

Your books must be praised well. Brothers, please recommend more books.

After watching the first simulation, I almost cried

Well, I haven't seen the back yet, but I saw the first simulation, and it was said that it was going to be a tragedy. I felt that the writing was a bit baffling, but the plot is okay. [The golden legendary entry "Ancient Dragon Power·Water" is sublimated into the red mythological entry "Dragon God Throne·Tevat Edition"] Red subtitles: [Dragon God Throne: Teyvat Edition: You will master the elemental power and invincible body of the Teyvat world, including the seven basic elements, the power of life and death, the power of the abyss, and the body of the Dragon God. [The "Sword of Final Judgment" is sublimated into the red mythical weapon "Xuanyuan Sword". Red subtitles: [Xuanyuan Sword: The sword of Huangdi Xuanyuan in the prehistoric world. Its power is directly related to the destiny of the human race. Should these two really be of the same quality? Or should we say that quality is something that is important to that world in a world.

It looks great. The protagonist is so strong. If he joins the country, why can't he be given an advisor? Why is he still an ordinary member?

Don't tell me it's almost over?

It's okay, but it's just not sharp enough. For Fontaine's first simulation, I feel it's just average. I don't even feel like crying. Author, you still need to practice.

Except for the emotional line which is a bit rushed, everything else is very high