A Common Girl Kicks Out Her Boyfriend Who Pretends to Be Poor and Is Chased by the Big Guys

[Congratulations] It's 80,000 and I can recommend it soon. I'm a little nervous. This is my first time to try this kind of multi-male theme, because it was really hard to write 1v1 before. I want to change the style. Of course, it may be more annoying. I haven't read much of this type of writing, and I don't quite know what the process and ending of this type of writing should be. I hope you can give me some suggestions and comment, and I will definitely improve [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] After everyone's guidance, I roughly know how to write [Send heartfelt thanks]

I don't know where the abuse is, but it's very sad. The heroine has gone through a lot of ups and downs. The native family is not good either. Although there are some golden fingers, they seem to be of no use.

Look good, look good, look good, look good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The writing is super good and the characters are well developed! ! Although the heroine is written to have a golden finger, after watching some memory parties, I think the qualities she shows are her real golden finger! ! Where can I find so many lovers of dog-training men and clean NP novels for you? The author is so awesome [crying]

The author must include them all in the heroine's bag. Except for Shi Youbai, who is not particularly cold, the other interactions with the heroine are really interesting (maybe because of the early stage, when there is no in-depth characterization, I read the article and feel that his character will also undergo a big change later). Anyway, if you can include them all, just accept them all [crying]

The plot is exciting and very attractive

Well written, the plot has ups and downs and many twists and turns

It's really good-looking and easy to get involved with. It has a universal female setting and a good heroine. The tension between the male protagonists and the female protagonists is very good. Come on, author!

I read dozens of chapters in one breath, and I like reading books like this that compete in the Shura field and are extremely exciting. There are also many twists and turns, which is very novel.

Very nice looking

Really well written, five-star recommendation

It's so beautiful, five-star recommendation! ! !

The writing is really good and the plot is not cliche.

It's so well written, keep it up 💪

It's really beautiful, but it's a pity that there is no rating. Why did the author stop updating it? ꒦ິ^꒦ິ

It's so well written that you can't put it down

I read dozens of chapters in one go, it was so good

It's so beautiful that I forget to eat and sleep while watching it

It's beautiful and the writing is not naive at all. I like it very much😻

Wow wow wow, are you really not updating anymore? I really like it. I really like it.