The modern urban cow horse once traveled through the body of Murong Fu in the world of Tianlong, and rewrote Murong Fu's life from then on. This is Xiaobai's debut novel. Everyone is welcome to watch it on Tomato. Your likes are the motivation for Xiaobai to continue writing.
Reader comments
The plot is okay, Ah Luo is there, and the writing will become very good as time goes by.
To be honest, you want to be invincible, and write a setting full of loopholes. If Beiming can't absorb gong, there is no way he can become the leader of Xiaoyao. He has internal strength that is equal to or even surpasses that of Tong Lao at such a young age, and he collected so many secrets when he was young. Without strong skill, he would have been beaten to death. You can write down the amount of veins that can be endured or the output power. If you write that Beiming absorbs gong, he will not be able to break through in the later stage. So why did Xiaoyaozi create Beiming? Do you still need to list it as the head master to cultivate it? It's so useless. It's not even as good as the Small Phaseless Kung Fu and Changchun Kung. You can just search it online and change the settings randomly.
The plot is okay, Ah Luo is there, and the writing will become very good as time goes by. To be honest, you want to be invincible, and write a setting full of loopholes. If Beiming can't absorb gong, there is no way he can become the leader of Xiaoyao. He has internal strength that is equal to or even surpasses that of Tong Lao at such a young age, and he collected so many secrets when he was young. Without strong skill, he would have been beaten to death. You can write down the amount of veins that can be endured or the output power. If you write that Beiming absorbs gong, he will not be able to break through in the later stage. So why did Xiaoyaozi create Beiming? Do you still need to list it as the head master to cultivate it? It's so useless. It's not even as good as the Small Phaseless Kung Fu and Changchun Kung. You can just search it online and change the settings randomly.