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Reader comments
I just started reading it, and I am lucky enough to be the first person to comment and give the author some small suggestions. There is no malice, no malice, no malice.
First, the author can add a background introduction when writing. After all, a sudden and confusing beginning can easily make readers confused about the logical relationship and quit.
Second, I feel that the author has set up too much suspense at the beginning, and it is easy to forget to fill in the holes later in the writing. The same point is that too much suspense without background introduction can easily make readers lose interest in reading.
Third, the author's beginning is a bit fast, and the scene changes a bit quickly. This may cause the reader to suddenly change the scene while the reader is still digesting the information of the scene, making it difficult for the reader to keep up with the pace of the novel.
Fourth. The author has a lot of professional terms that I can't understand╥╥
Finally. No malice, no malice, no malice. I just want to give some suggestions from the perspective of a reader. After all, I really love every novel and every character I like.
Last but not least. Good luck to the author, I am optimistic about you [Sending my heart to you][Add one to the bookshelf][Top post]
I just started reading it, and I am lucky enough to be the first person to comment and give the author some small suggestions. There is no malice, no malice, no malice. First, the author can add a background introduction when writing. After all, a sudden and confusing beginning can easily make readers confused about the logical relationship and quit. Second, I feel that the author has set up too much suspense at the beginning, and it is easy to forget to fill in the holes later in the writing. The same point is that too much suspense without background introduction can easily make readers lose interest in reading. Third, the author's beginning is a bit fast, and the scene changes a bit quickly. This may cause the reader to suddenly change the scene while the reader is still digesting the information of the scene, making it difficult for the reader to keep up with the pace of the novel. Fourth. The author has a lot of professional terms that I can't understand╥╥ Finally. No malice, no malice, no malice. I just want to give some suggestions from the perspective of a reader. After all, I really love every novel and every character I like. Last but not least. Good luck to the author, I am optimistic about you [Sending my heart to you][Add one to the bookshelf][Top post]