The stars hang over the plains, and the bright moon hangs high. Last night there was an east wind in the small building, the flags of the six kings were changed, and the smoke of war was rolling in the troubled times.
The powerful ministers in the Jinluan Palace play with yin and yang, and the generals outside the Huangsha Pass break the blue blood. The resentment of a departed person turns into a red butterfly to fight the fire, and the fragrant bones of a hero turn into a white streamer to summon the soul. Who said the country is picturesque? But white bones are the foundation, love and hate are the ink, and half the setting sun is sprinkled.
The bright moon in the small building in the old days still shines on the spring river thousands of miles away. When I was drunk and looked at the sword with the light on, I realized that the vast world is just a hero weeping blood.
Zhao Huaizhen played the yin and yang flute, looked up to the sky and asked Xuanji: At the beginning of the ancient times, who preached the gospel? …
Reader comments
I feel that the character's personality is quite consistent. The general is a big talker when fighting, haha. But aren't Zhao Huaizhen and Yun Ying from the Tang Dynasty? Zhao Huaizhen giving advice to the empress is like dreaming back to history class [laughing][laughing] Did Zhang Liang and the poster learn from Liu Bei's Three Visits to the Thatched Cottage? Haha, the overall feeling is that most of the plots are fighting, but if it is a long story, it is just right. It's normal, but let me just say that this dynasty is too weak. The heaven-level monks all pursue their own way. I feel that there are not many powerful people in the dynasty, and then the beasts are very strong. [Thinking] [Thinking] But I believe that the little treasures will cope with it well. The teacher wrote it very well [Please update] [Please update] [Please update] [Please update] [Please update]
Thank you for your hard work, Teacher Shang, www. The writing is very good, but the updates are very slow. Please give me some criticism (bushi).
The teacher's writing style is very good, very gorgeous and grand, and the references to poetry and history are not obtrusive, and the reading is smooth and flowing. Forgive me that my language organization skills are not very good, but I highly recommend Teacher Shang. The teacher is very nice and gentle in speech. I hold a banner for Teacher Shang.
I really like watching the interaction between the young lovers written by the teacher. It is sweet and greasy. Many sugar cookies are hidden in the words. They do not show it on the surface but secretly think about each other. The more they get along, the sweeter and more delicious they become. [Shy] [Shy] They are both very good children. I hope the red rope can wrap around them throughout their lives and never separate. Teacher Shang won't kill me, right? Right? Right! !
Thank you very much Teacher Shang for your great output! ! It allowed me to see everyone's life in a parallel world, and I'm really looking forward to the follow-up plot! ! Be sure to pay attention to your body and rest. There will be lots of updates! Teacher Shang! ! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
The writing is very good, and each character fits my impression, and their personality traits are very consistent. It describes Yunying's optimism and cheerfulness, her clear goals, and her courage to move forward. I like this couple very much. I feel that they are the most important existence in each other's lives. They are indispensable. They have the purity of youth and the growth of fighting side by side. This is not a simple love, but the noisy sweetness of childhood sweethearts. I love it. Huan Huaizhen said, "Even if you are trapped in one place, you can still have a vast world." In my eyes, Huaiyun will have a tacit understanding that is unspoken even if he is belated. It seems that you can still hear it in the long history: You protect Chang'an, I will protect you... The author, please give it a try! I'm optimistic about you [love]
It's very interesting. It's my first time to read this kind of book. To be honest, I like the first paragraph "I want to protect Chang'an and you will be with me". The fight between Wang Li and Yun Ying in the second part is also quite exciting. The fight in the second part is also very interesting. My classical Chinese is not very good. I can't understand some of them, sorry! Please update as soon as possible
Well, I think it's pretty good anyway.
Before I know it, it's already 100,000 words long, so let's do some self-review.
When I first started writing this novel, both the writing style and the rhythm seemed pale. In particular, it focused too much on "showing off skills" and used a lot of real classical Chinese expressions to enrich the so-called personal image of the characters.
But what I overlooked is that in fact, as readers, few readers will take a serious look at this kind of content that is "hard to understand at first glance" and "needs to figure out". Everyone is tired and reading novels is just for entertainment, not for "learning". Therefore, I should pursue more of a balance between technology and art, based on telling a good story, rather than using dazzling skills as a means to attract readers.
Well, in short, let's settle down and break through ourselves, the second 100,000 words, let's keep up the good work!
I have read part of it, mostly using the audio book function to listen and do things at the same time. I feel that the writing is very good. It is Huaiyun CP that I like. There are also many other characters appearing. I hope the author will update more (*¯¯*)
The author completely brought Yunying's sassiness and warmth to life! The high-spirited manner in which Yunying pointed the tip of his spear at the moon, and the subtle way in which Huaizhen lowered his eyes and chuckled, were like coming out of a game, and even the lines had the quality of original dubbing.
It's very well written, so cheers up
The author's writing is very good. The young couple must always be sweet.
I love the lively and cheerful Yunying so much, and Zhao Huaizhen who dotes on Yunying. Don't be too sweet as a couple. There are many characters in the book that I like to impress. The teacher is looking forward to the next story.
Eat the food of the young couple. Meow meow meow. The teacher wrote a good and good thing.
I have read part of it now, and I feel that the writing is pretty good. Now that I am feeling sleepy, I will stop reading it and will continue reading it tomorrow.
He must be a new author. Judging from chapters 46 and 47, his writing skills are getting better and better, and the hooks are well retained (dog breaks the chapter). He is very talented.
I feel that the character's personality is quite consistent. The general is a big talker when fighting, haha. But aren't Zhao Huaizhen and Yun Ying from the Tang Dynasty? Zhao Huaizhen giving advice to the empress is like dreaming back to history class [laughing][laughing] Did Zhang Liang and the poster learn from Liu Bei's Three Visits to the Thatched Cottage? Haha, the overall feeling is that most of the plots are fighting, but if it is a long story, it is just right. It's normal, but let me just say that this dynasty is too weak. The heaven-level monks all pursue their own way. I feel that there are not many powerful people in the dynasty, and then the beasts are very strong. [Thinking] [Thinking] But I believe that the little treasures will cope with it well. The teacher wrote it very well [Please update] [Please update] [Please update] [Please update] [Please update]
Thank you for your hard work, Teacher Shang, www. The writing is very good, but the updates are very slow. Please give me some criticism (bushi). The teacher's writing style is very good, very gorgeous and grand, and the references to poetry and history are not obtrusive, and the reading is smooth and flowing. Forgive me that my language organization skills are not very good, but I highly recommend Teacher Shang. The teacher is very nice and gentle in speech. I hold a banner for Teacher Shang. I really like watching the interaction between the young lovers written by the teacher. It is sweet and greasy. Many sugar cookies are hidden in the words. They do not show it on the surface but secretly think about each other. The more they get along, the sweeter and more delicious they become. [Shy] [Shy] They are both very good children. I hope the red rope can wrap around them throughout their lives and never separate. Teacher Shang won't kill me, right? Right? Right! ! Thank you very much Teacher Shang for your great output! ! It allowed me to see everyone's life in a parallel world, and I'm really looking forward to the follow-up plot! ! Be sure to pay attention to your body and rest. There will be lots of updates! Teacher Shang! ! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
The writing is very good, and each character fits my impression, and their personality traits are very consistent. It describes Yunying's optimism and cheerfulness, her clear goals, and her courage to move forward. I like this couple very much. I feel that they are the most important existence in each other's lives. They are indispensable. They have the purity of youth and the growth of fighting side by side. This is not a simple love, but the noisy sweetness of childhood sweethearts. I love it. Huan Huaizhen said, "Even if you are trapped in one place, you can still have a vast world." In my eyes, Huaiyun will have a tacit understanding that is unspoken even if he is belated. It seems that you can still hear it in the long history: You protect Chang'an, I will protect you... The author, please give it a try! I'm optimistic about you [love]
It's very interesting. It's my first time to read this kind of book. To be honest, I like the first paragraph "I want to protect Chang'an and you will be with me". The fight between Wang Li and Yun Ying in the second part is also quite exciting. The fight in the second part is also very interesting. My classical Chinese is not very good. I can't understand some of them, sorry! Please update as soon as possible
Well, I think it's pretty good anyway. Before I know it, it's already 100,000 words long, so let's do some self-review. When I first started writing this novel, both the writing style and the rhythm seemed pale. In particular, it focused too much on "showing off skills" and used a lot of real classical Chinese expressions to enrich the so-called personal image of the characters. But what I overlooked is that in fact, as readers, few readers will take a serious look at this kind of content that is "hard to understand at first glance" and "needs to figure out". Everyone is tired and reading novels is just for entertainment, not for "learning". Therefore, I should pursue more of a balance between technology and art, based on telling a good story, rather than using dazzling skills as a means to attract readers. Well, in short, let's settle down and break through ourselves, the second 100,000 words, let's keep up the good work!
I have read part of it, mostly using the audio book function to listen and do things at the same time. I feel that the writing is very good. It is Huaiyun CP that I like. There are also many other characters appearing. I hope the author will update more (*¯¯*)
The author completely brought Yunying's sassiness and warmth to life! The high-spirited manner in which Yunying pointed the tip of his spear at the moon, and the subtle way in which Huaizhen lowered his eyes and chuckled, were like coming out of a game, and even the lines had the quality of original dubbing.
It's very well written, so cheers up
The author's writing is very good. The young couple must always be sweet.
I love the lively and cheerful Yunying so much, and Zhao Huaizhen who dotes on Yunying. Don't be too sweet as a couple. There are many characters in the book that I like to impress. The teacher is looking forward to the next story.
Eat the food of the young couple. Meow meow meow. The teacher wrote a good and good thing.
I have read part of it now, and I feel that the writing is pretty good. Now that I am feeling sleepy, I will stop reading it and will continue reading it tomorrow.
He must be a new author. Judging from chapters 46 and 47, his writing skills are getting better and better, and the hooks are well retained (dog breaks the chapter). He is very talented.