You Made Me Raise Another Man's Child. I Remarried a Commander, So Why Are You Throwing a Fit?

I saw the latest chapter of Chapter 53, I hope the author will update it soon! It seems okay so far. The heroine simply cleans up the scumbag and breaks off the relationship with the scumbag. She takes her brother to the countryside to save her grandfather and uncle and aunt, and by the way, she builds the countryside to shine! The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are also laid out very naturally. The hero checked the background of the heroine and confirmed that the heroine was a childhood friend, but he didn't know whose son the heroine's younger brother was? This setting is very strange, and the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist at first sight, and has never confessed his love for a long time. He has been trying to hook up with the female protagonist like fishing, but on the other hand, he told his mother that he was already in love with his partner. He also created the illusion that the heroine and his partner were in love. It is clear that the heroine did not owe him anything and was not honest at all. If this was a rogue, the heroine would have been sent to the police station long ago. If the author doesn't know how to write emotional drama between men and women, he doesn't have to write it.

The overall structure of this book is quite good, including the heroine going to the countryside to work on the farm for her grandfather, uncle and aunt who were sent down to work, and later her battle of wits and courage with the evil forces of Secretary Zhou, catching spies, and helping a sister who died unjustly to find out the cause of her death. They are all very good and exciting. However, there are some language and sentence problems, which are too obvious. It would be better for the author to revise them, and also to revise the common sense that in that era, military photos should not be displayed outside. Also, the overall content of the article is very good, but if people read the article without skipping chapters from beginning to end, some bugs are too obvious, and logical loopholes can be caught at once. So as long as the rating is not malicious, this book is not bad. If you modify it, it may be rated higher and more people will see it! We read the article, which is very impressive for the author who wrote the article! Come on, author! [Sending Hearts]

The story is still very attractive. The script of the heroine after rebirth did not repeat the tragedy of the previous life. She pulled her relatives back from the abyss little by little. She is smart and lucky. The male protagonist is action-oriented, good at relationships and career. He likes that smart cat. Look at this one at home, ugh😮‍💨

I've only read a few chapters, and I think it's okay so far. The heroine is resolute and resolute without being procrastinating! [Praise]

Are the educated youth going to work in the countryside on Hainan Island? I heard that it was particularly dangerous for rubber tappers at that time. There were many snakes and insects in the mountains.

The transformation of the beautiful heroine's rebirth is also a reasonable counterattack against enemies. The writing is very good, the structure is clear, and the story is very complete.

The plot is intertwined. In many revenge and rebirth types, I skipped directly to the plot when the protagonist did not face the enemy, but this plot was also exciting when the protagonist did not face the enemy! The plot of Shuwan influencing Chen Qing was also a surprise

It's okay, the heroine does things very neatly, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very confusing [laughing and crying]

I just want a heroine like this! After knowing the truth, I felt like taking revenge and complaining. Is this how to relieve your anger? You can't just count on the next life! !

I have just read the beginning of this novel. I hope the author can write more books.