Comprehensive Comic: Switching Bodies with Toyokawa Shoko at the Beginning

A very good subject matter, the writing is normal, the logic is normal, and basically non-toxic, but... The author may have to make up for the knowledge related to music and musical instruments, otherwise it will seem a little too abstract [Love]

The author handles the problems in the Ku Lai Xi Ku band very well. Although Xiangzi has not completely given up on the face-saving thing, he has already let go. Deng also received an explanation from Xiangzi, "I didn't mean to say that you're not good at singing, it's just because you can't put it down." The plot is connected normally, and there is no deliberate rounding up. As for the magical girl, the protagonist is similar to "I Want to Become a Twin Tail", with a change of autonomy, and she still looks like a woman in two parts. It can be regarded as a daily series mixed with a little magical girl.

Hahahahahahaha, it's so reasonable. Using magical girls to solve Mujika's unreasonable situation is quite similar to the book I read last month that used cultivating immortals to interpret the New Three Kingdoms. As long as the author continues to update, we will immediately support you as the new Kakimoto Hiro, just call him Takahashi Yuu [laughs]

Very nice, [Like] [Like] [Like] Recommended Advantages: The start of exchanging bodies with Xiangzi is very innovative, and the solution to the problem of Kulai Xiku is also very reasonable. The character description and psychology are all very good. The shortcomings (in my personal opinion) are that the magical girl elements feel a bit redundant, and there are too many stitches, so it's easy to lose track of them all. After all, everyone is probably attracted by the cover and the title of Hen Ka Chuang Fei [awkward laughter] to read the real Yichuang. I suggest you write more about the band. You can save other ingenious ideas for the next book. Finally, I suggest the author to write ✍🏻 fan comics with themes that are as close to each other as possible, so that they are less likely to be dramatized. You can write a few more, but don't mix them together (although the blending is reasonable, it feels weird, and it doesn't look like a drama)

Children, this book is like a military pot. All the character settings are added to it, and then you stir it and take a few bites, and you find that it is actually quite delicious. Full marks! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] Chihaya Aine, do you like humans so much? It's abstract to me. The author has become a god. Only a god can write such a divine book. It's hard to say that this could have been written by humans. 10.18, God's Fall Day

Novel subject matter, and abstract to the extreme [face covering]

To be honest, I came here just to watch Xiangzi. Recently, there have been too many characters involved. Xiangzi's plot is less and the viewing experience is not very good compared to the previous chapters. Moreover, my personal preference is that I hope Xiangzi has a single female protagonist. After all, the situation of the protagonist and Xiangzi is special and has been specially portrayed in the previous chapters [Love]

So far it suits my taste [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss], it's very nice and it has healed my pain of watching the hen card. I look forward to the follow-up

It's pretty good. The character structure and other aspects are handled well in the middle and upper reaches of the relationship. However, the main line is not clear. I still don't know whether the main line is the darkness of the Toyokawa family or simply the emotional line as the main line and the magic side as a supplement. It is just a branch line. Although there are many characters, they are all handled well and they are not considered the origin of Stallion's liking. They all focus on the writing and ink, which makes it more comfortable to watch. As for transforming into a girl to communicate with others? In fact, it does not affect reading very much. It mainly depends on personal preference. This kind of transformation setting increases diversity to a certain extent, but its extension is that it requires more words. Fortunately, there is a timely reporting of identity at the end without hesitation, and it does not touch the line of stomachache. There is too little writing about other male characters. In fact, some scenes with other male supporting characters can be added, such as elbow strikes or those in the group. It can be clearly felt that the author's joyful emotions are very obvious when portraying these people. The audience seems to be happier. If more of these scenes are interspersed, it can greatly alleviate the tiredness of the emotional line.

Really pretty! The author's writing is very good, and it captures the daily life of youth in Riqing. Although the story structure and rhythm feel a little immature, it is very interesting and spiritual.

It's a good book, mainly because it suits my taste. This book contains elements of gender change, but you can freely switch between men and women. The addition of magical girl elements is also a highlight of this book. From my perspective, the biggest shortcoming of this book is: it's over! Complete! No! Enough! Look! Finally, the author, if you are reading it (annoyed), please update it soon! ! ! It's finished. The pace is a little faster in the end, but it's not a big problem. It's my favorite work. Five stars. ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾

A very good book. Logically speaking, with more than 300 reviews and a lot of 5-stars, it should be able to get a rating of 9.0.

It's a very interesting novel. It's a funny and relaxing novel. The jokes are not embarrassing. It looks very comfortable and the rhythm is very stable. However, there are too many settings and they are all mixed together. You can only understand them if you read them carefully. I hope that the current world view is fixed and don't add too many settings. If you want to add them, you can add them step by step. A little, and the characters are too many and too complicated. The plot of the story relies purely on the appearance of this character and that character. There are not too many real events. It feels like there is no main line. If this is the case, the author can keep writing, but readers will get bored. In addition, I hope to add more Shura Fields. I love watching it😋😋😋

A standard daily novel with a bit of body-changing + magical girl elements, but not much. I don't recommend it if it's for magical girls. But just like the cover, Saki-chan can look forward to a first-hand ૮ﻌა

When I first watched it, I thought it was just the band and magical girls, but after watching it, I found that there were many other interesting additions. Persimmon Monster who appeared in the latest episode of the anime revealed some things. How will it develop in the future? Really looking forward to it.

The Magical Girl God Band article is a must-read for book lovers who like Girl Band fanfics. The whole process is joyful, interesting and amazing. I highly doubt it was written by a fugitive snake patient [laughter]

I stayed up late to read the latest chapter. The author is really a genius at writing variety comics. The theme of bands and magical girls is also great. If you just write about bands, they either keep releasing songs to make money, or they just talk about daily gossip without passion, but with the theme of magical girls, it becomes great. In addition, the main character is close to many girls. It should be a harem story. It is best to control the plot of the main character and Xiangzi swapping bodies.

The first part felt pretty good, but the second part felt like it was written by a different person (? Especially the chapters after Dazai gained his own power, the writing felt too nonsensical and too out-of-touch.) However, this may also be due to my personal preference. Come on, author!

It's not bad, there are a lot of jokes, it's great if you can understand it, it's a bit over-expanded, but it still looks good.

To be honest, I have read a lot of comic novels. The body swapping in the beginning is really interesting, but the characters and settings in the back are a bit too much and too fast, and I can't understand it at all. But it's okay and it's a good novel.

This is my first comprehensive comic novel that I read from beginning to end. I read it with great concentration from beginning to end. It can be seen that the author has polished it carefully in the early stage, and the various themes are well integrated. Especially the interaction with Saki is really delicious 😋, and he also helped me make up a lot of settings that I didn't notice in the original work (fog). The only drawback is that I obviously feel that I can't grasp it in the middle and later stages, and I am going further and further on the road of being a god (sad). Some scenes may be a bit awkward... In the end, it ended hastily (I didn't even notice that it was ending at the beginning [face covering]). During the update process, I also helped the author catch a lot of bugs~, overall it is good, I strongly recommend the early plot, and it would actually be better if there is more ambiguity before the end. Come on, author, I will try to read it if there is a new book~

It's pretty cool. I don't really read Japanese comics, but something so trivial is still very cool to watch. I feel like the author has a sense of chutzpah in writing, and doesn't feel restrained at all. It's very refreshing.

The writing style is average, flowing, not pure transformation writing, soul exchange, and finally the setting of the male and female protagonists getting together, understanding each other, redeeming their lives, and then getting together, and also adding the setting of a magical girl. It has to be said that it is a relatively novel setting in a girl band fanfic. The author is really talented, support him!

Very close to God, far away from people, slightly abstract; it includes body-changing, magical girls, reenactment of famous scenes, etc. The main plot is mujica and mygo, and some other animations are included. If you can accept it, it is quite interesting to watch. [You taste carefully]

Very good, very good. For me who have finished eating the hen card, this thing is simply spiritual food. Most of the pitfalls in animation have been solved with extremely abstract brain circuits. Using abstract second creation to deal with abstract first creation is also a must-have part of this book. However, the ending feels a little rushed. I hope the extra chapter will be more delicious.

An abstract novel that combines elements of multiple girl bands and magical girls, which is very interesting. Although too many people were added in the middle, causing the protagonist Dazai Yuzuru to become a master of time management, the author's control ability is pretty good, and the main characters have their own reasonable performances and stories. Not bad!

Reject low-quality creations and support high-quality creations. It's so good and I love to read it😋. I want to lock the author in the basement and write a novel about Huni, updating a hundred chapters a day.

So pretty! (Tang Keke sound) This is a rare masterpiece in this world (Kong Ming) It's your uncle's fault, that's awesome (kid sister) If I'm reading a page, you should, Watasi (widow voice) Wow, the author hasn't updated yet (Angel) crumb bro, what can l say (圣爱音)

Manxing, as long as you can accept sexual transformation and swap bodies, the rest will be warm and happy battles and daily life. It avoids some of the character creation problems of the original work, and the setting is also very smooth. Finally, there is the harem ending, which is very good.

This book is also the first girl band book that I have read. The happiness and joy it brought me when I read it have made me unable to describe it in words. All I can say is that I was able to read this book in one breath after it was finished... It's so cool! [Sinister smile]