"Hello, my name is Lin Xiyue, the beautiful girl you call"
"Hello, my name is Di Feisheng, the in-situ Feisheng in the human world."
"Hello, my name is Lin Xiyue, the wife in your heart"
"Hello, my name is Di Feisheng, your lifelong husband."
Reader comments
At first glance, I wanted to write about the female tenant, or I was learning from Kobe Bryant's writing style, but my writing skills were not good enough.
After reading this book, I feel that it still has a future. It's good that the author's first book can have such writing style, but the plot concept, logic, and emotional lines need to be better improved. I don't want this book to be an imitator of The Female Tenant. Wanwan can only be like Le Yao, but she cannot be Le Yao, the beautiful lady. It can only have the shadow of Mi Cai, not Mi Cai. Each character must have a different soul. The position given to the beautiful lady is too vague. Now, there is no look like the heroine should be. I hope the author can clarify the overall context, imitate the female tenants, and surpass the female tenants. I believe your literary talent will be fulfilled in the future.
Remember to write less typos!
At first glance, I wanted to write about the female tenant, or I was learning from Kobe Bryant's writing style, but my writing skills were not good enough. After reading this book, I feel that it still has a future. It's good that the author's first book can have such writing style, but the plot concept, logic, and emotional lines need to be better improved. I don't want this book to be an imitator of The Female Tenant. Wanwan can only be like Le Yao, but she cannot be Le Yao, the beautiful lady. It can only have the shadow of Mi Cai, not Mi Cai. Each character must have a different soul. The position given to the beautiful lady is too vague. Now, there is no look like the heroine should be. I hope the author can clarify the overall context, imitate the female tenants, and surpass the female tenants. I believe your literary talent will be fulfilled in the future. Remember to write less typos!
Will you run away? Author [Chigua]