I Conquered Another World with My Looks

The author is too greedy. Maybe I didn't read the introduction clearly. Modern fantasy + parallel world + inexplicable description of Hanako. Especially the description of Hanako. I can't figure it out at all. Even if this part is removed, it can be read. However, the author is very careful when describing Hanako.

There are too many elements, they change here and there, and it feels chaotic.

The author said that it is a short story about growing up in love. It seems that the family situation is indeed love. But as other people have written, there are many elements. It feels like the ghost story and immortality are all revealed. If it were written with so many elements, there would have been more men and less women. Such a huge world view. If it is not well written, it will easily collapse. It is just flashy and unrealistic. Especially He Zhaodi, also known as Hanako, is described in too much space. Too much description becomes micro-lily. It feels like it has been written for so long. If the male protagonist does not come out, forget it. The key point is that Hanako's bullying is a very serious issue. I think it seems awkward to explain the sweet love in this kind of story at the beginning. Moreover, the heroine did not save Hanako in the end, but turned Hanako into a monster. What is this? After the spiritual energy is revived, he has to have a fight with her in the end to subdue her? The heroine is beautiful. Before He Zhaodi, I thought it was a fresh and daily heart-warming article. Let's talk about love and career development with the male protagonist, dance and play the pipa, etc. After He Zhaodi added the spiritual energy recovery, I couldn't understand it. To be honest, so many elements are mixed together, which makes people confused. I just want to see the heroine's beauty and talent to penetrate this warm world, but not the spiritual energy recovery. I feel like I have to go through the dungeon, you know? I give it five stars. Normally I give it five stars and I won't look at it again until it's finished. In fact, the introduction is very attractive. I also like to see the beauty of the heroine. Also, if He Zhaodi was not redeemed in the end, then there should not be so much space describing her in the beginning. This made me think that she was saved. I also read the author's comments and understood the author's intention in writing the ending of He Zhaodi. But that situation made me feel that the heroine is not the protagonist, but this He Zhaodi. Alas

The word "chaos" is too confusing. Maybe I am not familiar with this style of writing and it feels a bit stacked. It always makes me feel like AI (personal feeling). Maybe it is my misunderstanding. He Huazi describes too much. Since he is not the protagonist or an important supporting role, there is no need to describe so much. If the author wants to write a group portrait, just pretend that I didn't say it, or is it just where the male protagonist is?

At first I thought this book was about beauty, but the writing style gradually moved towards urban ghost stories and cultivating immortals. It was really weird.

I feel that the content and introduction have nothing to do with each other. There is a lot of He Zhaodi written in the back, which is very boring... It is written like a lily, and it feels like there is no male protagonist.

I don't know what Hanako is writing, it's a mess

. . . How come you still cultivate immortality in the future? . . .

Anyway, it's equal to now, it's so good-looking, I'm just looking forward to when our beautiful little sister will return to that world, come on, big brother

Chaos, the author has no control over it, and often he can't fill it all in when an idea strikes him. He can't want both at the same time. If he really wants to write something, he can just open a few new books. Once he thinks about it, it will be messy. It's just like cooking. The dish will be ruined as soon as an idea comes to him.