Hesitation, suspicion, and a sharp taste on the head.
These were the necessary ingredients chosen to create the mentally handicapped protagonist, but Feiwu Renji accidentally added an extra ingredient to the formula he concocted - flowery radish.
Therefore, FW Shrike was born, using his medium-level IQ to survive in the iron-collapse world (?)
Seeing familiar women walking towards him one after another, Shrike let out a deep sigh.
With tears in her eyes, she said, "Can I just go to bed tonight?"
"What do you think?"
[When you read this book for one minute, you will realize that you have wasted a minute]
[If you watch it for two minutes, then it's two minutes]
Reader comments
Personal evaluation:
The author's writing is very good, especially the portrayal of the protagonist's identity is very good, both in terms of description and interaction between characters. Especially in the later chapters, from the appearance of Shrike to the date with Tingyun [Thinking].
The only bad thing is that the way the main body and clones interact with other characters feels very uncomfortable [laughs awkwardly]. Maybe it's to compare the differences in the environment between the main body and the clones? Maybe there is a reason why you are so carefree, but "I" live a fearful life, and I feel that the consciousness of the later clones will be poisonous no matter how I deal with it. When Xinglao and Shrike showed different consciousnesses, I felt very uncomfortable. Maybe I am a little uncomfortable with the word "self-green"? Maybe it's because you don't like the two protagonists [face covering] [face covering]?
So there are some questions at the end. If the other characters like Xinglao, is it a betrayal of Xinglao to like the original character again? [Thinking] They are just the main body and the clone. If they are merged and their memories are merged, is what Xinglao experienced really the same as what Shrike experienced? [Thinking] If they are independent, it feels like you have lost your favorite character [shocked]. The summary is whether I am "me" when I am separated, and my experience when I am separated is still not "my" experience. I personally think that if we change the subject matter to a more conservative format, more people will accept it and the ratings will be higher [exploration]
When will the protagonist be revealed? My stomach hurts when I see you
I still feel that Shrike's line looks more comfortable. The struggle of a little person feels more real.
Tingyun is the real winner. When everyone expressed their love for the split soul, the protagonist who was an ordinary person at that time was indeed a fox. I stand with the fox in this wave.
It's okay, it's quite okay. If you can keep reading, you will find it quite interesting. Your logical thinking is all online.
Feels very good
Robert, Robert, no one has ever worked on a shaft machine. After all, planning twenty years is nothing more than loess.
As expected, the memory of the main body was erased, leaving only the soul, and then the split soul was fused as the main body. If there was an accident, just pretend I didn't say it.
I've read Chapter 53. The previous plot makes me feel a little sick to my stomach [palms my face] but the writing is good. Please do it to my liking. I'll give it a rating after watching the subsequent plot.
I've read Chapter 56, pretend I didn't say what I said before [face covering]
I thought it was pretty good, but I didn't expect that Zilvwen ran away.
Apart from the fact that the body is a bit miserable, there is no problem. After all, growth will always be accompanied by pain, because difficulties are more than ambitions, and the world of mortals will not confuse the heart.
There is also the question of whether the split soul has greened itself. It depends on whether the split soul and the main body will be written as two people later. I hope that the split soul will be affected by the main body and synchronize the memory and gradually merge into one.
To be honest, your book can still be saved. [Eat melon] All you have to do is let Pinoconi recover the protagonist's memory quickly later. It just so happens that there is crude oil in the cloud coming here. If you pull it, you can pull that Zingyun over too. We shot a slightly similar scene in Pinoconi, a scene similar to Cloud Stopping. Let the protagonist's memory come back quickly. Even if you ramble about Pinoconnie and the Memory-bearer Black Swan, you can just justify it anyway. All you need to do is ramble on and let his memory recover.
Then your book can still be saved, and then the stars are still okay. As long as you don't let those previous husband-chasing crematoriums who left a bad impression succeed. You can just let him chase your husband to the crematorium anyway. Then either the heroines Tingyun and Yunli, or you add a few more popular characters on top of them who haven't left a bad impression (but I personally only hope for Tingyun and Yunli.) Other times, you can just let the rest of them chase their husbands in the crematorium or something like that.
If you really don't want to leave those that leave a bad impression, just wait for dozens, dozens, or more than 50 pictures, and stay back. The plot has almost faded away, leaving them with at least not a bad impression. Try to be as peaceful as possible, and then give more, and so on. It made them all regret it, and maybe some of them were willing to buy it.
Oh, by the way, just add the husband-chasing crematorium to that label. After all, this type of book is still quite popular.
Looking forward to the day when the identity of the heroine is revealed, Tingyun, Yunli and Xiaoheita have already figured it out.
To be honest, it was quite frustrating to read the whole story, and it is somewhat different from my rating. But I hope this is just about suppressing the desire to advance, rather than suppressing the suppression. The author needs to control the rhythm himself. I hope the protagonist can live a better life. A person who works hard in life deserves a good ending. Come on, author.
I can't accept that the subject's memory is blurred, but I was quite looking forward to watching the previous article. Although I was looking forward to it in vain, it is a five-star encounter.
The writing is very good, and the character portrayal is also very good, but the self-love is too toxic, so it can only be stopped as a side story.
Does the main character's body mean to be dead?
The prisoner was so frustrated, and he had even forgotten about Tingyun. He couldn't hold himself back any longer.
Gua! When we saw Chapter 54, we knew the time had come!
After reading it in one go, the first part felt a bit messy, but I could continue reading it. Overall, I felt pretty good, but don't cut it off at the most critical place!
Very suitable for watching as a movie [shy]
It's okay, but I always read Shrike as Lao Bo. The key is that the main body of the first 50 chapters is really Lao Bo. It's so Lao!
Give it a five-star support.
It's boring but really fun
Good thing, but sometimes it looks so abstract.
It's pretty good, but there are a lot of silences. [Cover face]
It's pretty good and feels relatively new.
"Haha, captain, this, isn't this right?"
"Eat, why don't you eat, give it all to me" [crazy]
The setting is quite novel
There are too few updates. I hope the author will add more updates. It is best to imitate the legendary four-update king or five-update king next door, otherwise you will start to keep books.
Big cheers for the author
Something very new.
Got sick. There is a similar one next door, but it's in Bang 3. He also got sick midway, but he survived. Why did you end up with 4?
Personal evaluation: The author's writing is very good, especially the portrayal of the protagonist's identity is very good, both in terms of description and interaction between characters. Especially in the later chapters, from the appearance of Shrike to the date with Tingyun [Thinking]. The only bad thing is that the way the main body and clones interact with other characters feels very uncomfortable [laughs awkwardly]. Maybe it's to compare the differences in the environment between the main body and the clones? Maybe there is a reason why you are so carefree, but "I" live a fearful life, and I feel that the consciousness of the later clones will be poisonous no matter how I deal with it. When Xinglao and Shrike showed different consciousnesses, I felt very uncomfortable. Maybe I am a little uncomfortable with the word "self-green"? Maybe it's because you don't like the two protagonists [face covering] [face covering]? So there are some questions at the end. If the other characters like Xinglao, is it a betrayal of Xinglao to like the original character again? [Thinking] They are just the main body and the clone. If they are merged and their memories are merged, is what Xinglao experienced really the same as what Shrike experienced? [Thinking] If they are independent, it feels like you have lost your favorite character [shocked]. The summary is whether I am "me" when I am separated, and my experience when I am separated is still not "my" experience. I personally think that if we change the subject matter to a more conservative format, more people will accept it and the ratings will be higher [exploration]
When will the protagonist be revealed? My stomach hurts when I see you
I still feel that Shrike's line looks more comfortable. The struggle of a little person feels more real.
Tingyun is the real winner. When everyone expressed their love for the split soul, the protagonist who was an ordinary person at that time was indeed a fox. I stand with the fox in this wave.
It's okay, it's quite okay. If you can keep reading, you will find it quite interesting. Your logical thinking is all online. Feels very good Robert, Robert, no one has ever worked on a shaft machine. After all, planning twenty years is nothing more than loess.
As expected, the memory of the main body was erased, leaving only the soul, and then the split soul was fused as the main body. If there was an accident, just pretend I didn't say it.
I've read Chapter 53. The previous plot makes me feel a little sick to my stomach [palms my face] but the writing is good. Please do it to my liking. I'll give it a rating after watching the subsequent plot. I've read Chapter 56, pretend I didn't say what I said before [face covering]
I thought it was pretty good, but I didn't expect that Zilvwen ran away.
Apart from the fact that the body is a bit miserable, there is no problem. After all, growth will always be accompanied by pain, because difficulties are more than ambitions, and the world of mortals will not confuse the heart. There is also the question of whether the split soul has greened itself. It depends on whether the split soul and the main body will be written as two people later. I hope that the split soul will be affected by the main body and synchronize the memory and gradually merge into one.
To be honest, your book can still be saved. [Eat melon] All you have to do is let Pinoconi recover the protagonist's memory quickly later. It just so happens that there is crude oil in the cloud coming here. If you pull it, you can pull that Zingyun over too. We shot a slightly similar scene in Pinoconi, a scene similar to Cloud Stopping. Let the protagonist's memory come back quickly. Even if you ramble about Pinoconnie and the Memory-bearer Black Swan, you can just justify it anyway. All you need to do is ramble on and let his memory recover. Then your book can still be saved, and then the stars are still okay. As long as you don't let those previous husband-chasing crematoriums who left a bad impression succeed. You can just let him chase your husband to the crematorium anyway. Then either the heroines Tingyun and Yunli, or you add a few more popular characters on top of them who haven't left a bad impression (but I personally only hope for Tingyun and Yunli.) Other times, you can just let the rest of them chase their husbands in the crematorium or something like that. If you really don't want to leave those that leave a bad impression, just wait for dozens, dozens, or more than 50 pictures, and stay back. The plot has almost faded away, leaving them with at least not a bad impression. Try to be as peaceful as possible, and then give more, and so on. It made them all regret it, and maybe some of them were willing to buy it. Oh, by the way, just add the husband-chasing crematorium to that label. After all, this type of book is still quite popular.
Looking forward to the day when the identity of the heroine is revealed, Tingyun, Yunli and Xiaoheita have already figured it out. To be honest, it was quite frustrating to read the whole story, and it is somewhat different from my rating. But I hope this is just about suppressing the desire to advance, rather than suppressing the suppression. The author needs to control the rhythm himself. I hope the protagonist can live a better life. A person who works hard in life deserves a good ending. Come on, author.
I can't accept that the subject's memory is blurred, but I was quite looking forward to watching the previous article. Although I was looking forward to it in vain, it is a five-star encounter.
The writing is very good, and the character portrayal is also very good, but the self-love is too toxic, so it can only be stopped as a side story.
Does the main character's body mean to be dead?
The prisoner was so frustrated, and he had even forgotten about Tingyun. He couldn't hold himself back any longer.
Gua! When we saw Chapter 54, we knew the time had come!
After reading it in one go, the first part felt a bit messy, but I could continue reading it. Overall, I felt pretty good, but don't cut it off at the most critical place!
Very suitable for watching as a movie [shy]
It's okay, but I always read Shrike as Lao Bo. The key is that the main body of the first 50 chapters is really Lao Bo. It's so Lao!
Give it a five-star support.
It's boring but really fun
Good thing, but sometimes it looks so abstract. It's pretty good, but there are a lot of silences. [Cover face]
It's pretty good and feels relatively new.
"Haha, captain, this, isn't this right?" "Eat, why don't you eat, give it all to me" [crazy]
The setting is quite novel
There are too few updates. I hope the author will add more updates. It is best to imitate the legendary four-update king or five-update king next door, otherwise you will start to keep books.
Big cheers for the author
Something very new. Got sick. There is a similar one next door, but it's in Bang 3. He also got sick midway, but he survived. Why did you end up with 4?
It looks great, good luck to the author!
You write well, you write well😋