Hesitation, suspicion, and that pointy-headed vibe.
Those are the essential ingredients for creating an idiot protagonist. But the bumbling game dev accidentally added one extra ingredient to his recipe: a shameless womanizer.
And so, FW Shrike was born. With his mediocre IQ, he struggles to survive in the world of Honkai: Star Rail (?).
As one familiar woman after another walked toward him, Shrike let out a deep sigh.
His eyes glistening with tears, he asked, “Can I just go straight to sleep tonight?”
“What do you think?”
[After reading this book for one minute, you'll realize you just wasted a minute]
[If you read it for two minutes, then that's two minutes gone]
Personal evaluation: The author's writing is very good, especially the portrayal of the protagonist's identity is very good, both in terms of description and interaction between characters. Especially in the later chapters, from the appearance of Shrike to the date with Tingyun 🤔. The only bad thing is that the way the main body and clones interact with other characters feels very uncomfortable [laughs awkwardly]. Maybe it's to compare the differences in the environment between the main body and the clones? Maybe there is a reason why you are so carefree, but "I" live a fearful life, and I feel that the consciousness of the later clones will be poisonous no matter how I deal with it. When Xinglao and Shrike showed different consciousnesses, I felt very uncomfortable. Maybe I am a little uncomfortable with the word "self-green"? Maybe it's because you don't like the two protagonists 🤦 🤦? So there are some questions at the end. If the other characters like Xinglao, is it a betrayal of Xinglao to like the original character again? 🤔 They are just the main body and the clone. If they are merged and their memories are merged, is what Xinglao experienced really the same as what Shrike experienced? 🤔 If they are independent, it feels like you have lost your favorite character [shocked]. The summary is whether I am "me" when I am separated, and my experience when I am separated is still not "my" experience. I personally think that if we change the subject matter to a more conservative format, more people will accept it and the ratings will be higher 🧐
When will the protagonist be revealed? My stomach hurts when I see you
I still feel that Shrike's line looks more comfortable. The struggle of a little person feels more real.
It's okay, it's quite okay. If you can keep reading, you will find it quite interesting. Your logical thinking is all online. Feels very good Robert, Robert, no one has ever worked on a shaft machine. After all, planning twenty years is nothing more than loess.
Tingyun is the real winner. When everyone expressed their love for the split soul, the protagonist who was an ordinary person at that time was indeed a fox. I stand with the fox in this wave.
As expected, the memory of the main body was erased, leaving only the soul, and then the split soul was fused as the main body. If there was an accident, just pretend I didn't say it.
I've read Chapter 53. The previous plot makes me feel a little sick to my stomach [palms my face] but the writing is good. Please do it to my liking. I'll give it a rating after watching the subsequent plot. I've read Chapter 56, pretend I didn't say what I said before 🤦
I thought it was pretty good, but I didn't expect that Zilvwen ran away.
To be honest, your book can still be saved. 🍉 All you have to do is let Pinoconi recover the protagonist's memory quickly later. It just so happens that there is crude oil in the cloud coming here. If you pull it, you can pull that Zingyun over too. We shot a slightly similar scene in Pinoconi, a scene similar to Cloud Stopping. Let the protagonist's memory come back quickly. Even if you ramble about Pinoconnie and the Memory-bearer Black Swan, you can just justify it anyway. All you need to do is ramble on and let his memory recover. Then your book can still be saved, and then the stars are still okay. As long as you don't let those previous husband-chasing crematoriums who left a bad impression succeed. You can just let him chase your husband to the crematorium anyway. Then either the heroines Tingyun and Yunli, or you add a few more popular characters on top of them who haven't left a bad impression (but I personally only hope for Tingyun and Yunli.) Other times, you can just let the rest of them chase their husbands in the crematorium or something like that. If you really don't want to leave those that leave a bad impression, just wait for dozens, dozens, or more than 50 pictures, and stay back. The plot has almost faded away, leaving them with at least not a bad impression. Try to be as peaceful as possible, and then give more, and so on. It made them all regret it, and maybe some of them were willing to buy it. Oh, by the way, just add the husband-chasing crematorium to that label. After all, this type of book is still quite popular.
Looking forward to the day when the identity of the heroine is revealed, Tingyun, Yunli and Xiaoheita have already figured it out. To be honest, it was quite frustrating to read the whole story, and it is somewhat different from my rating. But I hope this is just about suppressing the desire to advance, rather than suppressing the suppression. The author needs to control the rhythm himself. I hope the protagonist can live a better life. A person who works hard in life deserves a good ending. Come on, author.